FF: Fire and Water (Ch. 26-A Updated on Pg.145!) - Page 94

I'm speechless for this chapter...😳 it was amazing...

great.arjun confessed.riya outburst also good but will anurag create problems for ariya. please update soon.

very well written..looking forward to read more.
update soon!!

Thanks a lot to each and everybody for leaving your comments! Thank you so much!!!! Your comments do mean a lot to me... Edited by ValleryRose - 11 years ago

hey...!!!

Seriously Arjun's confession and Riya's outbrust and the whole scene nearly had tears in my eyes.It's too good🤗👏

Originally posted by: Nusrat2

My god, my God, my God!!!! 😲

Wht a neat n fab job! Vallery, u r definitely a genious n this is a blockbuster hit! 👍🏼
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Bless my soul,  d gr8 Arjun Suraykant Raute confessing "weakness"!!!  😆 🤣

Thank u so much 4 makin this misunderstanding clear from Riya's mind, coz it could do much damage. n ur hard work was repayed, u made d whole convo realistic, romantic n insi8ful; though we often behold it on screens, bt saying "I love u " is not jst as easy, nor so can b said so directly. d lines tht made her realize d truth were so perfect. This would have been d exact word I would hav had in mind, bt u xpressed it so much btr! Thanks so... much!!!!!😉



U hav jst constructed 2ni8s dream 4 me...I m pretty sure u r a born writter jst masquerading as an engineering student!

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Originally posted by: nikki08

hey...!!!

im new to this forum...

recently i hve been readin ur ff...n i must tel u...i hve bcome a huge fan of urs...

i hve completed readin all d chapters in just 2 days...

i loved it...

u r an awesome writer...👍🏼

Originally posted by: ValleryRose

You've made my day! 

This was such a difficult update for me because like you just said, I wanted to keep it realistic. I didn't want Arjun or Riya to look out of character. I also had to keep in my mind the phase changes in their relationship from the beginning of the FF, for which I had through the FF once again. 

I'm so happy that my hard work paid off and all my readers liked it!!!

Thank you so much!!!

 

Well, u hav made my ni8, n d day after! 😉

Now sm highbrow words 4 u.I know how painful it can b 2 make smthin realistic, u can't let ur hrt reign coz it damage feasibility, nor can u entirely make it wi8 logic. Human behaviours r pretty unpredictable n none can say who will change 4 wht or whom or why...still whn u pen it, it bcomes ur responsibilty 2 make it feel real. U hav always done it commendably. so whn u wri8 dnt evr fear ur readers won't understand or appreciate. we r nt so slow, u c! 😛 😉

Update soon dear... 😊

it was really amazing 😃
cont soon