OS:Kiya's Truth Out(Similar to Suvreen Guggal way)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Guys, I showed d 1st part in 1st May epi of Suvreen Guggal way...hope u like it n lemme know which one u found more scary-SG's or dis one. I hope u don't get angry wid me for writing similar to dat but its still a lot different. U vl see😊.


Part 1

Kiya said, " Main music room me jaa rahi hu rehearsals k liye. See u 2mrw, bye."
          Juhi said wid a smile, "Bye babes, I vl go hme now."
          KD n Piddi @ d cafeteria watching Kiya talk wid Juhi 4m a distance.
          "KD bhai, aapko kya ho gaya hai? Aap bhul gaye kya kareli ne aapke saat kya kiya hai?" asked confused Piddi.
         "Na bhula hu aur na use bhulne dunga," replied KD in a cold tone.
          "Accha, isliye to aap use shake hand karne jaa rahe the aur itna sweetly baat kar rahe the," said Piddi.
         "Vo to bas aise hi naatak tha use confuse karne k liye," said KD.
          "To aap kya karne k soch rahe ho Kiya ka?" asked Piddi.
         "Aap nahi hum. Hum aaj use aisa sabak sikhayenge ki poori lifetime yaad rakhegi. Usne Kunal k saath milkar muje fasaake accha nahi kiya," replied KD wid a smirk.
         Naina who was sitting @ d cafe heard Piddi n KD but had no clue wat they were talking abt. She decided to wait for JJ n tell him abt it.
           Kiya enters d music room n finds someone sitting on a chair wid his face behind.
           "Who's there?" she asks.
           "Ur nightmare," comes Piddi's voice in a scary tone as he suddenly turns around. Kiya is shocked.
           "Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Aur tum ye kya bol rahe ho? Tumhari tabeeyat to thik hai na? asked Kiya shockingly.
           "Tabeeyat to tumhari kharaab honewali hai," replied Piddi.
           "Tum kehna kya chahte ho? Aur yaha se chale jao qki muje rehearsals karna hai," said Kiya.
           "Main nahi jaanewala hu. Yaha rehearsals k alava kuch aur honewala hai," said Piddi.
           "Kya honewala hai?" asked Kiya

"Vo to thode der me tuje khud pata chal jayga. Just wait n watch," Piddi said wid a laugh.

"Tuje nahi jaana hai to mat jaa. Main jaa rahi hu aur main apna rehearsals ghar pe hi kar lungi," said Kiya getn irritated.

Kiya turned to go. As she was abt to step out of d room, KD appeared before her n stared @ her wid an evil smile much to Kiya's shock.

"KD, tum yaha. Dekho na Piddi ko pata nahi kya hua hai," said Kiya,"Main abhi jaati hu kal milte hai, bye."

"Itni b kya jaldi hai jaane ki?" asked KD wid a smile. KD comes inside n moves aside.

"Kya matlab?" asked Kiya.

"Matlab tum acchi tarah se jaanti ho," said KD.

"Muje kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai kit um dono ko ho kya gaya hai. Anyway, I am going," said Kiya turning to go but KD blocks her way.

"KD, raaste se hat jao, muje jaane do," said Kiya.

But KD remained der. Kiya was getn annoyed by his strange behavior. She tried to push him aside n go but he grabbed her hand n pulled her inside d room.

"Wat d hell r u doing? Muje jaane do. Leave my hand," Kiya said getn angrier trying to free her hand 4m KD's strong grip but failed.

"Not so soon," KD said pulling her closer to him n giving her an evil stare.

"Tum kar kya rahe ho? I said leave my hand n let me go now," yelled Kiya.

"Shhh," KD said putting his other hand's finger over her lip to hush her up making her more terrified. KD continued, "Abhi tak to kuch nahi kiya hai par ab karnewala hu."

Kiya said, "Tum kehna kya chahte ho? Muje aise pakadkar q rakha hai dono ne?"

KD released her hand n shoved her a little forward. Kiya was shocked to see KD n Piddi smiling @ her.

"Tumhe nahi pata ki tumne kitni badi galti ki hai. Tumhe kya laga ki tum aisa karogi aur hume kuch pata hi nahi chalega ha," KD said as he circled around her.

"Tum kya baat kar rahe ho muje kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Maine koi galti nahi ki hai," said Kiya.

"Wow, tu aise bol rahi hai ki tu kuch jaanti hi nahi. Music room me kya acting kar rahi hai, wah wah," said Piddi amusingly.

"See, main koi acting-vacting nahi kar rahi. Y don't u both come to d point? Aise ghuma-firakar baat karna band karo," said Kiya.

"Well, as u wish. Tumne muje Kunal k saath milkar q fasaaya? Mere bag me drugs q dalvaaya?" asked KD giving her a cold stare. Kiya got more frightened.

"Wat r u saying, KD? Maine aisa kuch nahi kiya," replied Kiya lukn terrified.

"Jhoot mat bolo, Kiya. Hume sab pata chal gaya hai," said KD in a threatening voice, ' Better yahi hoga kit um khud accept kar lo varna..."

"Varna kya? Maine kuch kiya hi nahi hai to. Mera tumse jhagda hota tha par main tumhari dushman nahi hu. Muje tumhe fasaakar kya milega?," replied Kiya.

"Tum KD bhai se jalti thi qki KD bhai ne tuje debate se lekar academics sab me haraaya hai. Islie tu KD ko raaste se hata dena chahti thi. Maine us din tuje Kunal aur uske gang k saath caf me dekha tha," said Piddi.

"No dis is not true. Maine ne KD ko nahi fasaaya hai Kunal k saath milkar. Believe me, maine kuch nahi kiya hai," said Kiya convincing them. Piddi showed d footage of her wid Kunal.

"Ab kya kehna chahti ho ye footage dekhkar. Sach sach batao tumne q fasaaya?" asked KD.

"Maine nahi fasaaya tumhe," she replied beginning to cry a little.

JJ came to Naina 2 d caf n she told wat she heard. JJ began thinking abt Piddi seeing Kiya wid Kunal n understood evrythng. JJ asked Naina where r they. Naina replied dat she don't know but they r in school only. JJ left 4m der lukn worried.

"Accha ab sacchai saamne aa gayi to roneka naatak. Sach bata ki tu Kunal k saath gayi thi na?" asked KD firmly. Kiya remained quite due to shock. She did not wanted to tell d truth as her mom vl throw her into boarding school if she gets to know.

"Tell me?" shouted KD making Kiya startled.

"Haan gayi thi par maine tuje nahi fasaaya. Muje jaane do," said Kiya while crying. She once again turned to go but KD n Piddi blocked her wid KD grabbing her arm n pushing her not so roughly against d wall. KD came towards her while Kiya was get frightened.

"Tum yaha se tab tak nahi jaogi jab tak sach nahi bataogi. Sach sach batao tumne muje fasaaya tha na?" asked KD giving her a icy glare.

"Maine kuch nahi kiya. Plz muje jaane do," pleaded Kiya still crying.

"Accha to tu aise nahi maanegi. Agar tune seedhe seedhe nahi bataya to ye footage internet pe chala jayga fir poori duniya ko pata chal jayga ki popstar Aanya Gujral ki behen ek criminal hai jisne apne hi classmate k bag me drugs dalvaakar use fasaaya. Aur uske baad tere future ka kya hoga? So, sach bata ki tune muje fasaaya hai na?"  said KD threatening Kiya n Piddi showing d camera to her. Kiya tried to go towards to grab d camera but KD roughly grabbed Kiya n held her back. He pinned her against d wall. Piddi kept d camera on d table n came towards them. They both cornered Kiya frightening her wid KD still pinning Kiya to d wall n terrifically smiling @ her while Kiya was still scared. He released his hand n threatened her to remain der.

"Bol de Kiya ki tune hi muje fasaaya hai nahi to ye footage net pe jayga," threatened KD. Kiya shook her head while her cries were getn bitter.

"Plz aisa mat karo. Maine tuje nahi fasaaya hai. Plz ye footage net pe mat daalna," begged Kiya.

"Tere is roneka ka naatak ka asar humpe nahi padnewala hai. To bol de ki tune hi fasaaya hai KD bhai ko nahi to...," threatened Piddi.

"Maine KD ko nahi fasaaya hai. Plz mera vishwaas karo. Ye footage net par mat daalna, plz. Maine kuch nahi kiya hai," pleaded Kiya.

"Chup chaap apni galti confess kar le varna jindagi bhar bahot pachtaaygi. Bol de ki tune fasaaya hai," threatened KD giving her an intense cold glare.

"Bol de," told Piddi in a loud voice scaring Kiya. Kiya was in a dilemma not knowing wat to do. If she tells d truth, evry1 vl get to know n her mom vl send her to boarding school n if she don't tell d truth, d consequences vl be even worse. She was getn more n more terrified n grabbing her head wid both hands while breathing heavily not knowing wat to say.

"Bol," threatened KD.

"Bol," threatened Piddi.

"Bol," threatened KD.

"Bol," threatened Piddi.

Kiya was grabbing her head wid both d hands while lukn @ both of them wid pleading eyes. KD n Piddi were still glaring @ her menacingly.

"Bol," yelled both of them threatingly while Kiya got startled due to fright.

"Stop it," came JJ's voice 4m behind. He found them after searching for sometime. D trio turned to luk @ JJ.

"Is dis d way to treat a girl?" shouted JJ @ KD n Piddi. He made d crying Kiya to sit on a chair.

"Sir, is Kiya Gujral ne KD bhai ko fasaaya hai. Hum ise nahi chodenge," said Piddi.

"Shut up! Tum dono ne itna b nahi socha ki agar Kiya sach me involve rehti to vo b Kunal, Arun aur baaki gang k saath jail me hoti thi," said JJ.

"Fir ye Kunal k saath kya kar rahi. Poocho isse? Chup q hai ye? asked KD.

JJ recalled his talks wid Kiya wer she told dat evry1 always thinks her wrong n try to fit her in d spoilt brat category n decided dat its time to tell d truth to avoid Kiya getn into further trouble. He lukd @ Kiya who was still shocked to talk anything n was crying.

"Tum dono jise blame kar rahe ho usne KD ka tab saath diya jab sab ne saath chhod diya tha. Agar KD baahar hai to hai to iska credit Kiya ko b jaata hai. Usne KD par humesha trust kiya ki vo koi galat kaam nahi kar sakta hai aur use fasaaya gaya hai," said JJ. KD n Piddi were shocked to hear dis.

 

Part 2

"Kya? Kiya ne b KD bhai ki madad ki?" aske Piddi in shock.

"Haan, Kiya ne b madad ki. Usne kaise risk uthaya KD ko bachaane k liye tum soch b nahi sakte. Kiya ne hi Kunal se confess karvaaya. Agar tum dono ne vo video dhyan se dekh liya hota to kuch na kuch to pata chal hi jata itne close distance se  na Kunal se main confess karva sakta hu aur na Piddi to koi teesra hona chahiye aur vo Kiya hi ho sakti hai qki vahi Kunal k saamne baithi thi," said JJ.

KD n Piddi lukd @ Kiya for a moment who was also listening to them while crying.

KD asked, "To fir Kiya ne sabko pehle hi sach q nahi bataya."

JJ told them d whole story 4m freedom party, y Kiya dint told d truth?, how Kiya trapped Kunal to help. KD n Piddi listened in silence while lukn @ Kiya in between feeling pity for her n guilty @ themselves. Kiya started crying very bitterly while hearing d story n ran 4m der in between. JJ completed saying d truth n told d duo not to reveal d truth to anyone if they want Kiya's happiness n don't want to lose her. The duo agreed n decided to apologise to her for thinking her wrong especially KD wen he insulted her twice before wen she tried to tell him d truth next day after d freedom party.

"Tum dono bahot lucky ho ki tumhaare paas Kiya jaisi dost hai," said JJ.

"Haan Sir, maine Kiya ko galat samjha par Kiya ne mujh par bharosa kiya. Sach me musibat k hi time pe pata chal jaata hai ki aapka dost kaun hai aur dushman kaun hai?" said KD.

"Ranveer, Samar, kisine b saath nahi diya humara aur Kiya ne hume bhanak b nahi lagne di ki usne b madad ki hai. Real hero main nahi Kiya hai," said Piddi.

"Aur use farak nahi padta hai ki use attention mile ya na mile. Mere baba ne mujh par trust nahi kiya par Kiya ne mujh par trust jo hum sabse ladte rehti thi. Kiya ek popstar ki behen se jyaada ek acchi insaan aur acchi dost hai," KD said getn emotional n then smiling wid happiness while thinking how he insulted by drawing her cartoon n teln her 'Kaun hu main' dialogues. Kisha music was playing in d background.

KD n Piddi  went 4m der to apologise to Kiya while JJ smiled. Theysearched for Kiya even by calling her name but no response came. They continued to search her. They found her sitting n crying bitterly near a pillar. Kisha music was playing in d background. KD came to her 4m behind n touched her shoulder. She turned back n got startled n started moving away 4m them as she is still frightened by them.

"Kiya, I am sorry," said KD n Kiya stopped n lukd @ him.

"Sorry kareli oops Kiya, humne tuje pehchaanne me galti kar di aur maine kya kya soch liya sirf Kunal k saath tuje dekhkar aur KD bhai se pata nahi kya kya keh daala tere bare me," said Piddi.

Kiya lukd @ them n said thru tears, "Tum dono ko maafi maangne ki koi jarurat nahi. Logo ko muje galat samajhna koi nayi baat nahi hai. Shayad mujh me kuch na kuch kami hai isliye Mom mujhe..." Kiya started crying bitterly before completing her sentence. She told themagain them d whole story 4m her side wat JJ had not told. D duo got angry @ them.

D duo cud not bear to see her cry any more. KD thought abt his own dad n found some similarities of his life wid Kiya's life. Piddi signalled KD n left 4m der to leave both of them alone for sometime. KD sat down beside her.

"Kiya, mujh se bahot badi galti ho gayi hai. Plz muje maaf kar do aur baat karo mujse," said KD.

Kiya replied while still crying, "No KD, galti tumse nahi mujse hui hai. Meri galti ye hai ki main ek famous celebrity family se belong karti hu. Meri galti ye hai ki main high-class society se belong karti jaha log status ko jyaada importance dete hai. Meri galti ye hai ki meri life tum sabki tarah normal nahi hai. Meri galti..."

KD put her hand over her mouth to stop her 4m speaking any more as it was breaking his heart too along wid her's. KD lukd @ her n wiped her tears. They both were staring @ each other while Kisha music played in d background.

KD said while cupping her face in his hands, "I am sorry for insulting u dat day aur tumhari poori baat na sunne k liye. Kiya, tujh me koi kami nahi hai. Kami hai un logo me jo tuje galat samajhte hai aur jinhe lagta hai kit u sirf ek popstar ki behen hai. Main b galat tha. Tujh jaisi frnd paakar main bahot lucky hu. Muje pata chal gaya ki tu sabse itna bura behave q karti thi taaki tu apne andar ka emotions chupa sake. Par ek baat bata, tune mujh par kaise trust kaise kiya ki main innocent hu jab mere khud k baba ne mujh par trust nahi kiya?"

Kiya replied, "Qki muje pata tha kit um koi galat kaam nahi kar sakte. Yaad hai jab maine us din tumhe paise offer kiye the 'Banga Ki Pungi' prank me involved logo ka naam batane k liye aur tumne mana kar diya. Tabhi muje pata chal gaya tha ki tum galat kaam kabhi nahi kar sakte ho. Aur Arun ne tuje fasaane k liye drugs offer kiya hoga taaki tu jail jaaye. Use Kunal ne bheja hoga tujse Freedom Party ki raat ka badla lene k liye. Aur jab vo fail ho gaye to Kunal khud Arun aur baaki chaar log ko lekar aaya tuje maarne k liye vo b hockey stick lekar qki tune unka drugs ka offer mana kar k gatar me fek diya."

KD said, "OMG! Kiya, muje nahi pata tha ki tu itna understanding hai. Sab k paas teri tarah frnd hona chahiye. Tuje abhi buri aur mean hone naatak band karna hoga. Show ur real self. Fir dekhna sab tere frnd banenge. Tu kisi normal ladki se kam nahi hai."

Kiya said, "Muje dukh is baat ka hai ki humne ye sab hone kaise diya? Hume b udhar hona chahiye tha. Itne log the par teri madad kisine nahi ki. All were just simply watching. Kisine ye b nahi dekha ki koi tere bag me drugs daal raha hai. All were just njoyn  fight. Itna b nahi samajh me aaya ki ye kisi aur k saath b ho sakta tha. Mere saath, Piddi k saath, Juhi k saath, Ranveer k saath ya aur kisi k saath ho sakta tha. Galti hum sab ki b thi ki humne ye sab hone kaise diya? Kunal aur uske gang tuje akela bina kisi frnd k dekh kar tujh par attack karne aaye. Bloody coward creepos! Aur haan, main ab se pretend nahi karungi mean hone ka. I vl show my real self." Kiya smiled after saying d last line.

"Kiya, u luk more beautiful wen u smile," said KD.

"Thank u, KD," said Kiya smiling even more.

They got up n hugged each other wid Kisha music playing in d background. They went to der locker section to get der bags to go home. Piddi came to them n was happy to see Kiya smiling.

"Kiya, tune hume sach me maaf kar diya na? Ab to gussa nahi hai na hum par?" asked Piddi.

"Haan maaf kar diya par ye sach kisi aur ko mat batana nahi to..." said Kiya

"Don't worry, sach kisi ko nahi pata chalega," assured Piddi.

"After all, itni acchi dost ko koi jaane kaise de sakta hai," said KD smiling.

D duo extended der hand fwd towards Kiya to become frnds n she shook hands wid both of them.

"Bichaara Kunal, apna charm ab kisi ko nahi dikha payega," said Piddi.

"Kya dialogue maarta tha vo baar baar?" asked KD.

"Mujh me ek ajeeb sa charm hai," d trio said 2gthr while laughing. KD n Piddi were happy to see Kiya laugh whole heartedly which they had never seen before.

"Hello, 1st of all, Kunal is not bichaara, ok. Aur Piddi, tuje aise q lagta hai Kunal apna charm kisi ko nahi dikha payega?" said Kiya wid a smile.

"Kise dikhayega apna charm?" KD n Piddi asked 2gthr in confusion.

"Arun ko aur kise? Dono jail me aaraam se coochie-coo kar rahe honge," she replied n d trio laughed 2gthr.

"Wow, tu itna funny b ho sakti. Tu haste hue to bahot acchi lagti hai. Hamesha aise hi haste rahe," said KD.

"Kunal aur Arun ki Jodi ko bhagwaan humesha salaamat rakhe," Piddi said wid a laugh.  While Kisha joined him in laughing.

"Main soch raha hu ki KD bhai k aane ki khushi me main school me party rakhu. Tu aaygi na?" asked Piddi.

"Haan jarur aaoongi par party k liye permission kon dega?" asked Kiya,  "Us kameene Banga ko to humari khushi se allergy hai."

"Don't worry, humare Princi Sir se Teacher's Day Party rakhne k liye request karenge. And I am sure ki Princi Sir iske liye naa kabhi nahi bolenge aur hume humare masti karne se b koi nahi rok paayga," said KD.

"Wow! Dats gr8. Par Banga aur uska chamcha Vats kuch karne ki koshish ki to party me?" asked Kiya, 'Vo dono jarur kuch na kuch karne ko sochenge humari party sabotage karne k liye."

"To hum sab milkar uski pungi baja denge," said Piddi wid a laugh.

"U mean 'Banga Ki Pungi: Part 2'," Kiya said wid a laugh.

"Yaa, Banga Ki Pungi: Part 2," KD n Piddi replied wid a laugh.

"Par Sir se permission kaun lene jayga?" asked Piddi.

"Tu," replied Kisha in unison pointing @ Piddi wid a smile on der faces.

Piddi lukd a little shocked @ 1st but agreed. They decide to tell evry1 abt d party plan on d next day.

"Tum dono aage jao, main apna bag lekar aata hu," saying dat Piddi went to his locker section.

Kisha came out. KD escorted Kiya till her car. Kisha guitar music was playing in d background.

"Kya muje humari chemistry cls ki notes mil sakti hai?" asked KD.

"Yaa sure," said Kiya. She tuk out her notes 4m her bag n gave it to KD.

"Thanks a lot," said KD wid a smile.

Kiya smiled back. KD opened d car door Kiya while got into d car. They smiled n bid goodbye to each other.

                                     -----THE END-----

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..but in show i dont want kiya to cry soo much.. 😭
Posted: 11 years ago
^ me too don't want d same but i wrote it to improve my thinking n writing skills..similar happened in suvreen guggal if u watch it...it is set on d day itself wen kd returned to school Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
no no i dont mean it about your writing..it was realy nice.. 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
^ thanks😊...1st part is scary n terrific n 2nd part is emotional n comedy...
Posted: 11 years ago
loved dis one..beautifully written!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
i still remember, in SG tat epi was so scary..i hated uv for mking sg suffer so much..
bt frankly speaking i dnt want kiya to forgive kd so soon..he too hv to suffer lyk kiya..πŸ˜”
Posted: 11 years ago
^^^me too want kiya not to forgive kd so soon...she sud stay away 4m him by changing her locker or sharing it wid either panchi, bobby or juhi...she sud also change her place n sit away 4m kd...i was imagining a scene wer heartbroken panchi n kiya vl sit 2gthr n those 3 bitches come to add salt to der injuries even calling them devdas...then juhi n bobby vl come n blast those 3 bitches n juhi vl comfort panchi while bobby vl comfort kiya... Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by angel_juhi04


^^^me too want kiya not to forgive kd so soon...she sud stay away 4m him by changing her locker or sharing it wid either panchi, bobby or juhi...she sud also change her place n sit away 4m kd...i was imagining a scene wer heartbroken panchi n kiya vl sit 2gthr n those 3 bitches come to add salt to der injuries even calling them devdas...then juhi n bobby vl come n blast those 3 bitches n juhi vl comfort panchi while bobby vl comfort kiya...

yeah tat wud b nice to watch..evn i want sumthing lyk dis to happen...
Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful concept πŸ‘πŸ‘
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