Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Masti Time with JM, Virat and Dabbu(OS)

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Jeevika groaned as she turned over to shut her alarm off. She did not want to wake up. She just laid there in bed' not moving. She smiled to herself as she heard the small running steps of somone..

 "aa gayi toofanmail ?." The footsteps stopped. "Aapko KAISSSE pata chal jaata hai?"

Jeevika smiled, "Magic."

"My Magical but right now Shotlu DIII uth jao ab..aur batao aaj kya hai!!"

"Sunday?"


"Nooo.. IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY!" Jeevika smiled and sat up.

"Mannnu...yeh baat poore hrishikesh ko pata chal chuki hogi ab tab toh.. pichle ek mahine se tu shor macha rahi hai." she looked over Manvi's face..something wasn't right.

"Kya hua?" She asked

"Diii... I got you a gift!"


"Oh no! Gift? Matlab ab phir kuch kiya hai isne"
... Jeevika thought nd asked .."Ab kya kiya tune mannu?"

"Arey yaar di.. kuch nahin kiya...aap chalo mere saath!" She grabbed her hand and practically dragged her down the stairs.

"ab nain matakka karna band karo"
Manvi giggled.

"Kyaaa" Jeevika showed her big big eyes..

"Oh ho..mera matlab hai CLOSE YOUR EYES na" Jeevika sighed and closed her eyes.

She heard Manvi run off into the living room' then there was silence. Jeevika started to walk towards the living room but stopped when she heard footsteps'

"Ok Diii open your eyes!" Jeevika's eyes fluttered open and she started to laugh' in front of her was Dabbu nd Viraat with irritated faces lying on floor' with Manvi on them..

"dekhaaa kaha tha na Di hasegi "
Manvi said proudly

" haan woh toh has rahi hain par humari jo jaan nikal rahi hai uska kya..." Dabbu blurted"

"Hahaha ..Di Maza aaya na inhe dekh ke"
Manvi giggled to Jeevika

" Abe Di ki bachi..uth humare upar se" Viraat Shouted

"Naiii..Pehle main aur Di poore ghar ka round lenge"
Manvi cleared

"NAHIIINNN "
Viraat and Dabbu shouted

Manvi ignored their cries nd saw Jeevika who was watching them like  Manvi KABHI NAHIN SUDHREGI..

"DIII..aajo mast do khachar milen hain woh bhi ghar pe hi...chalo ek round leke aate hain" She said making fun of Viraat and Dabbu..

"Mannu..main maarungi..chal utar" Jeevika ordered pulling Mannu from their backs..

" Naii..pehle inke upar baitho...Waise toh kehti rehti ho Meri mannu yeh meri mannu woh..aur itni si baat ni maan sakti meri" She said  melo dramatically

"Mannu dekh..aise zid ni karte... dekh main teri saari baatein maanungi par abhi yahan se utar ja na please..unhe dard ho raha hoga"
Jeevika requested.

"Di..agar aap nahin baithogi na toh mujhe bhi dard hoga YAHAN" she said more dramatically placing her hand on her heart.

"hey bhagwan kya karun main iss ladki ka.. khud toh pagal hai hi ek din mujhe bhi pagal kar degi poori tarah"
Jeevika mumbled nd den sat on her SHAAHI SAWAARI...

Manvi clapped in joy.. (Upar thi khushiyon ki khankar..neeche nikal rahi thi dono khachron ki jaan)

Finally after Jeevika's sweet pleading they got up frm them...And next second both shouted aaa lying on the floor out of breath..both got up to kill Manvi..

"oye ruko..mera bday hai..wish bhi nahin kiya mujhe" Jeevika shouted nd trying to save Manvi.

"Bhabhi aap ruko zara.. Iss chaudhrayin ke pait mein aaj chaaku ni maara toh mera naam bhi ummm ..."Viraat picked knife frm dining table nd ran after Manvi.. while running for life Manvi completed his line saying "Khachar nahi'.."

"Teri toh...Ruk zara tu bandariya.."
Viraat ran faster, Manvi jumped on the sofa and crossed Jeevika and Dabbu' "Bhaag bhaag Chep'. Aur tezzz.. aajaaa."

Viraat  jumped from the sofa nd landed on the floor making Jeevika and Dabbu roll in laughter.. Virat gave Dabbu a bad look saying "sharam kar.. has aise raha hai jaise yeh Khachar Yudh akele mera hai.. tujhe bhi banaya tha usne khachar.. help kar meri.."

"Nai. meri Manvi didi mujhe kuch bhi bana sakti hain.. aur main toh yahan Jeevika didi ke birthday ka cake khane aaya hoon.." Dabbu replied back... Jeevika came forward to take knife from Virat.. " maana aap logon ko Tom n Jerry pasand hai.. par yahan koi bachon ka function nai ho raha jo tum dono demo dene mein lag gaye ho.. chalo Virat ab knife do..Cake kaatna hai na."

Virrat got up and pointed the knife towards Jeevika saying "Nai Bhabhi pehle main check karung ki aapki iss behan ne subah breakfast mein kya khaya hai.. uske baad cake milega..aur dabbe tu chup karke jaa aur candles leke aa.."

As Dabbu went to bring candles Viraat-Maanvi chase began again.. Jeevika although wanted to stop them but knowing that we both are incorrigible, she stayed by the table shouting for them to stop..

 "Diii maine kuch nai kiya.. yeh aapka devar hi pagal hua pada hai aaj.." Manvi stopped for a moment near sofa to say that just then Viraat came with knife in front nd bumped into her.. They both fell on the sofa with Viraat on top of Manvi and the knife hidden in between them..

"Aaah Diii" Maanvi Shouted'. While as per plan Viraat took out a pouch and squeezed some ketchup on Manvi's clothes.. Jeevika and Dabbu came nd moved Viraat away from Manvi who acted unconscious while stood their with a knife that had ketchup on it.. Jeevika for a moment didn't knew how to react.. looking at her she patted Manvi's cheeks for a few times..

Jeevika laid Manvi's head in her lap and cried," Mannuuu... uth na Mannu... pleaaase Mannu.. dekh teri Didi tere paas hai..khol naa aankhein Mannu..Tu hi toh kehti hai ki di jab tak aap mere sath ho mujhe kuch nahin ho sakta...toh phir yeh... Uth na Mannu pleaaase" Jeevika started crying badly then looked at Dabbu," tu khada kyun hai butt ban ke.. Dr. ko phone kar..

Manvi cursed herself for letting Jeevika cry nd thought to get up but her bday surprise plan didnt let her to do that...

Jeevika waited for Dabbu while Dabbu went back to kitchen nd kept looking for candles and arranging them on the cake.. After another 5 minutes Jeevika decided to call the doctor herself but she was not able to because the phone was dead.. [Acting karne ke pehle hi wires nikaal diye thhe.. Smaarttt Mannu u know.πŸ˜†.]

Jeevika scolded Virat abit while taking out his mobile but to her bad luck the call at the doctors place was not answered.. so decided to go and get the doctor herself'.

As soon as Jeevika left Manvi stood up and did some dance while next moment She was pushed back, down on the sofa by Virat. "bechari bhabhi ko Birthday ke din itna torture kar rahe hain hum.." he said..

"Toh kya ab jab surprise dekhegi na toh khush ho jayegi Di.. aur mujhe kya.. pitai toh tumhari hi hogi na kyunki main toh keh dungi ki idea tumhara thha.." She patted the new found khachar.. "chalo ab jaldi se lag jao kaam pe.. bohot kaam hai Di ke aane se pehle sab ho jaana chahiye.." She went with Dabbu hi-fying laughing at Virat's bechara face..

After an hour when Jeevika came, she saw Manvi standing at a stool with a balloon.. She was still in the same dress with ketchup on her top.. She jumped from the stool quickly after fixing the balloon while Jeevika scanned the whole place in amazement.. She checked Manvi's tummy, tickling her unknowingly.. "Diii...kya kar rahi ho.. gudgudi ho rahi hai.." She said
**giggling** ..

Jeevika stopped and looked at her with her hand crossed in front tapping her foot as if asking "Yeh sab kya nautanki thi?"

Manvi gave a silly smile.. Jeevika went to table and checked the knife.. It was a super blunt knife and almost like Amir Khan's knife from his movie Ishq.. Jeevika pressed it to see if it was actually like that while Manvi gave the sound effect "Dhi chu Dhi Chu'"

"PAAAGAL HO KYA TUM LOG.. sharam nahin aati tum logon ko..jaan nikal ke rakh di thi meri." Jeevika acted if she's really angry..

Next moment Jeevika went towards the closet when Viraat grinned saying " maarne ke liye Jhaadu matt dhoondna bhabhi.. chhupa diya hai voh pehle se hi.."

"Waah.. mere chep..pehli baar tuney koi akalmandi ka kaam kara hai.." Manvi said patting Viraat's shoulder nd hi-fying Dabbu.. While Virat glared at Manvi''s remark, Jeevika came up with a pillow beating them with it..

Finally after 20 minutes of their Sorry Session.. DIDI Maan gayi.. Knife pe ketchup lagi thi aur sab itne aalsi aur thake hue thhe ki Jeevika cut the cake with spoon.. . Shareefon jaise sabne ek dusre ko cake khilaya..

Manvi smudged some cake on Jeevika's face nd Kissed her forhead mumbling "Happy Birthday"...  Dabbu and Viraat hugged both of them from back saying - We Love YOU


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Missed Viren ji?? yeah mee too... but he was busy in important case🀣 Ab comment karo acha wala... Itni achi weekend treat di hai maine afterallπŸ˜†

Love,
Neha...
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loved da os it was funnyEdited by mika17 - 11 years ago
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lilzz...dat wz really sweet n hilarious...luvd it...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
thnx a loot for the wonderful weekend treat!!!!😊
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JeeHa πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

I read it I loved it and I was grinning and laughing loud like an idiot... 

big wala comment baad mein .. raath ko .. πŸ˜‰
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This content was originally posted by: munnihyderabad

JeeHa πŸ€—


I read it I loved it and I was grinning and laughing loud like an idiot... 

big wala comment baad mein .. raath ko .. πŸ˜‰


i will check tom. morning then :D neeni time hereπŸ€— give my love to chutkus <3
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Loved it Neha. Was old typical Maanvi doing what ever she likes. I actually saw them in Rishikesh the whole time. A wonderful treat
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Achi nai bohat Achi treat di hai tune loved it
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Amazing and hilarious OS!!
Loved it!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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just awesome update
thanks for pm me
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So Beautifully written Neha :) It was full of fun :) As always you have given us a treat on JeeMan's beautiful sister bonding :)