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FF: Kash aap hamare hote- End Pg 109, 22/06

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks everyone for liking my recents OS and SS.

I guess i'm addicted now, and wanna write another SS.  Hope you will like it also and please don't forget to comment and like as an encouragement for me to continue.

Chapter 1:

It had been a very hectic week, all ETF members were very tired and happy that they had managed to solve their recent case of a minister's murder.

Rathore: Team good work, finally we caught the murderer. He looked at Arjun and said a special good work to him cause it was Arjun who had solved the case again. 

Arjun acknowledged by moving his head, and said that since there was nothing to be done, he would be leaving now.  Before he could leave, Riya stopped him: Arjun Sir, don't go, mujhe aap sab se kuch baat kaheni hain, please only 1 minute.

Rathore, Shree, Chotu and Arjun all looked at her waiting for Riya to start.

Riya didn't know how to start nor what to say, she was very worried that she would hurt anyone of them, and she was also afraid of Arjun's reaction, but still what has to be said must be said... N the more she would panic, the more difficult it would be for her to tell them the truth.

Arjun was getting impatient since it had already been 1 minute, and Riya was still looking at everyone apprehensively and she hadn't said anything till now, and told her to hurry up.

Riya was even more scared on Arjun's rebuke, and finally she gave up, took a deep breath and said:

Kal meri sagaai hein, aap sab ko ana hain... I'm sorry mein ne batane mein itni der kar di, but time hi nahi mila... Wow cases and everything, mein batana bhul gayi..

Riya looked at Arjun, and was scared at seeing the anger on Arjun's face, and thought about why he was angry with her now, what had she done?

Shree and Chotu: Ri, tum to bari chupe rustom nikli, doston se kya chupana, ouska nam kya hein, woh karta kya hain????

Rathore: Congratulations dear, of course hum sab ayegein, what time?

Riya looked towards Rathore: Sir 8 pm ko, and finally answered Shree and Chotu: i didn't mean to hide anything, of course you two are my friends, actually i don't know anything about that person, my mum has chosen him for me... N i trust her choice and anyway we had already been married to each other when i was 5 years old and he 10 years. Then his family changed cities, and i never met him afterwards, but now that i'm 25 years old, they have come back to claim their daughter-in-law and wife, and have decided to perform all the rituals again. So kal meri sagai hein aur next week shaadi hein.

Rathore: you got married when you were a child, but that's so orthodox and no1 believes in such things nowadays??? And you don't know anything about that man, how will you live with him?

Shree: hain Ri, yeh ghalat hain, tumhe nah karna chahiye tha!!!!

Chotu: Ri, tum jaisi ladki aisi shaadi p vishwas karti hein????

Riya: we don't always get what we want in our life( she stealthily looks at Arjun) and anyway my parents believe in it, and why not?  N besides they are family friends and ladka acha hein, mum went to spend holidays with them last year and loved him as son-in-law.

As always, arjun wasn't saying anything, he looked at Riya and didn't appear angry anymore, but as if she was boring him, but inside himself he was feeling as if he just lost something and was getting angrier, though he didn't understand why...

Finally Arjun spoke: Ok Riya, we shall all come tomoro at 8 pm, and he turned and went away without any further glance at her...

Rathore, Shree and Chotu also agreed to come and everyone separated to go their own way.  Only Riya remained where she was, she had hoped that somehow Arjun sir would stop her and was sad that it didn't make any difference to him...

Silently she whispered to herself: Sir, kash aap hamare hote, then i would definitely have tried and spoken with my in-laws. Kash...Kash...ap humein rok lete, and she started crying as if she has lost the most important battle in her life...

So you liked it and want me to continue???😳

Part 2: Page 4

Part 3: Page 9

Part 4: Page 12

Part 5: Page 16

Part 6: Page 20

Part 7: Page 24

Important note: Page 28

Vishal's picture; Page 29πŸ˜‰

Part 8: Page 36

Part 9: Page 40

Important note:Page 44

Part 10: Page 45

Part11:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3217171?pn=51�


part 12:

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3217171&TPN=57&#70842036


part 13;

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3217171&TPN=62&#70906409


part 14:

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3217171&TPN=65&#71126787


part 15:

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3217171&TPN=70&#71684706


part 16:

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3217171&TPN=73&#71857477


part 17:

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3217171&TPN=76


part 18:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3217171?pn=79


part 19:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77791625


part 20:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79278739


part 21A:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79600395


part 21B

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3217171?pn=95


Part 22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/82748157


Part 23:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3217171?pn=103


Last Chapter:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86112849

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Yes yes yes. Plz continuu..awsum start
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riya was already married when she was young! oh my! that's bad... what to do now? what will arjun do? will he realise his feeling and let riya know... poor riya... she thinks that arjun does not like her one bit! can't wait to know what is going to happen during the sagai... please update soon!
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Awesome dear. Rhea already married? Looks interesting. Carry on...
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Nice start..
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You should definitely continue! 
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That really good. Loved the twist you brought in it.Loved Riya's kash aap humare hote line, it was too good. Continue soon and pm me.
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