ArHiCollabSS:The Mistake#2,#3 link- Completed - Page 7

bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

amaziiing...superb..lovd it...njoyd to bits

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Exprimere

@Exprimere

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

I actually love this idea! Of completing stories... Seeing where they go!

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subiscs

@subiscs

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

This collab s surely going great!!!! ""i wanted our baby.""can this get any better!!!! awesome update ya!!!😊

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

funny update loved it

arnav playing along with the whole pregnancy, always enquiring about 'their' child LOL

their convos were cute

Lavanya walked in on them kissing but they didnt see her wonder what she is gonna do

and hahah the last bit she slaps him and says she wanted his baby, SHOCKING

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow! That was one awesome episode Sayieda!

Arnav and khushi's phone conversations and his teasing everything was damn cute!

Lavanya heard it? Uh-Oh!

And he had to reveal the truth and he gets a slap and a more shocking revelation that she wanted the baby! 🤣

SHE WANTED THE BABY? What the? "Why dint you sleep with me?" ROFLMAO!

Great one! Just loved it.And the update was long too! Loved it :)

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deep5128

@deep5128

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update loved it!
Thnx 4 pm... Continue soon

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow...That was an Amazing update ,but the catch was the last line...Looking forward to the next chapter.Thanks for the PM

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762941

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for the pm. I loved this part. Very nicely written. I particularly enjoyed the way Arnav was teasing Khushi. Hilarious how Arnav was adding to his misery. And great way to end with that slap...

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Did she just slapped him?! 🤣🤣Oh my... Lavs she was at door rite, she heard everything!!
Oh this is funny n sweet!!!
"apple of ur eye is not falling from my tree" that is epic...🤣🤣
" why didnt u sleep with me?? I wanted our baby??" 🤣🤣🤣🤣She is crazy!! But i love her...
Update soon... Edited by khusiarnav - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was absolutely brilliant, just loved it...you are an awesome writer, had a smile while reading it..it was hilarious, sweet and very romantic...could see Barun s sexy smirk through all the teasing !

Loved the end where she says why did u not...I wanted our baby...loved how he said all my apples will fall from your tree...

This one was really superb, loved the index too! Brilliant, you are so so talented !

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