Amrit Manthan

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The first person writes a few lines and then the next writes some more - It can be anyhow you want it to be but must make use of the characters in Amrit Manthan!

Please no bashing!
Most of all - have fun! πŸ˜Š

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Once upon a time, in a land far, far away...Princess Amrit woke up to the sounds of someone banging on the door.

"Wake up! Wake up!" The voice yelled.

Amrit walked out of her bed and opened the door, "What is it?" She yawned.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Full story here:

Once upon a time, in a land far far away... Princess Amrit woke up to the sounds of someone banging on the door.

"Wake up! Wake up!" The voice yelled.

Amrit walked out of her bed and opened the door, "What is it?" She yawned.

Rippan: Amrit wake up , there is a very good news i want to share with you
 
Amrit : What is it Ma ?
 
Rippan: A young lad your fathers friends son is coming toay from France. He is coming  to expand his business venture in India. His father and your father thought he will be perfect for you and I would love if you could both see each other and give us your opinion
 
Amrit : Oh common Ma, what is the rush in me getting married and how can we decide in a day if we want to get married or not? This is impossible..Marriage is such a huge decision.
 
Rippan : I do understand dear but the guy is here for 6 months and you both have good time to think about.
 
Nimrit who enters the room says "Ma. this is indeed a good news..I am thrillled to hear this ,what is my would be jiju's name??? "
 
Rippan : his name is "Rishabh Singhania"
 
Nimrit : Wah di , Name sounds so hot and i bet he is good looking tooo
 
Amrit secretly blushes and says : Nimrit , that i need to check out how Mr Singhania saheb is

Nimrit: ooh! Di! Why don't you do this...

Amrit: What?

Nimrit: Check out his facebook!!

Amrit: Facebook? *She thinks about it* No...I couldn't.

Nimrit: Di! Come on Di! It'll be cool!

Amrit: *Shakes her head* no...I can't...

Nimrit: Please Di?

Amrit: *sighs* okay fine...how do I find him?

nimrit: Just type his name into the search button and see what comes up.

Amrit: Okay, let's see *types in the name* Nimrit there are 3 different Rishabh Singhania's!

Nimrit: Really? *Looks at the computer screen* Let's look at the first one...

Amrit..Let it be Nimrit i'm not interested..

Nimrit..common Di dont be a spoil sport .lets check this last one..

Here we go bingo..the right Rishabh singhania ...

Amrit...How do you know he is the one...

Nimrit..Uff Di ..read status..country..France..Ma did say he is from france..Not bad my jiju..he is handsome.dashing..Kya kayaal hein ..Di i'm talking to you ... no response..Nimrit looked at Amrit and smiled as she was completely lost staring at Rishabh pic..

Nimrit ..Di hello come out of your dream world..

Amrit  stood up to go away..

Nimrit wait  Di where are you going?..pehele mere sawaal ka jawab dena..So how is my Jiju..aap ko acchaa laga ya nahin..

Amrit blushing..hmmm theek hein ..chalega..

Nimrit with a shocked expression..Di sirf theek hein aur chalega..

Amrit could not stop laughing watching Nimrit expression then says he is perfect for your Amrit Di..

Nimrit hugged her and says i'm so happy..Ma should invite him for lunch.waise log kehete hein..the way  to  a man's heart is through his stomach..so its time for you to show your cooking Expertise my sweet Di..i'm sure Rishabhji will fall head over heels in love with you..

Amrit put a break my little sis at your thought..first let me meet him then yeh pyar ki baatein..

Nimrit ..is that so then why were you blushing staring at his pic?...say it you already like him..sirf pyar hona baaki hein..

Amrit..yeah yeah pull my leg my time will come too when you will meet your prince charming .

Nimrit..i know there is someone somewhere for me..when the time comes i will meet him..waise Di kaisa hogaa mera prince charming..

Amrit..Total opposite of you...woh bilkul angry type hogaa..

Nimrit..kya Di..koi baat nahin..i will change him and usska gussa bhi theek kar doungi..

Amrit..This i dont doubt it at all..you are such a sweetheart my little sis..Now lets go ...

That evening:

Bubbly: Amritji, Nimritji! The groom's family are here!

Amrit had just gotten ready, she was wearing a light pink anarkali suit whilst Nimrit wore a dark blue suit.

Nimrit: *Looks at Amrit*  di, I'll just go and see how my honewale jiju looks like!

Amrit: *blushes*

Nimrit walks down to see the boy's family. She sees the parents and then Rishabh Singhania - then notices a young man dressed in a leather jacket. 

Nimrit: *thinking* yeh kon hai?

Ribban: *notices Nimrit coming down* Nimrit beta! come here. *looks at the guest* this is my youngest daughter Nimrit. Nimrit this is Rishabhji and his parents...and this is his friend, Agam Malik. 

Nimrit: *thinking* ohh, yeh jiju ka dost hai...

Rishabh's parents ask Ribban, "Where is Amrit Ribban ji?"

Ribban: "She is just coming.. You please help yourselves with the tea and snacks"

Nimrit was sitting beside her mother and looking at Rishabh.. 

She thought, "Hmm, this guy seems nice. He is more good looking in actual than the facebook photos.. Amrit di is gonna get so lucky"

She tries to judge Rishabh more but her stares shifts  to Rishabh's friend Agam everytime.. She just couldn't help looking at him..

Agam was a well built, strong tall muscular man with wheatish complexion. Nimrit couldn't stop herself from staring at him. She mentally cursed herself.. 

But Agam had something in his face which because of which Nimrit  stole glances at him every minute.. 

Rishabh was glancing towards the staircases every two minutes.. Agam saw Rishabh looking towards the stairs. He poked Rishabh's stomach with his elbow. 

"Ouch!! What are you doing Agam?", Rishabh hissed.

"I am just amused the way you are peeking the stairs. I wonder what beauty will descend through them"

Rishabh: "Shut up Agam.. I have seen Amrit's picture in Nimrit's facebook account. She is gorgeous. U'll see for urself..

Agam: "Who Nimrit? This girl sitting here?"

Rishabh: "Yes. She is as beautiful as her sister, no?"

Agam: "I don't know.. I never pay that much attention to girl's. They keep on hogging around me. I find them irritating."

Rishabh: "You and your nonsense dramas. What is there to boast so much with your looks? Girls find you attractive, consider this your good luck. But if you keep ignoring them, a day will come when no one pay any heed to you"

Agam: Chill man.. We came here to fix the alliance for you. Don't spoil my mood with those long "girl-full" lectures now..

Just then, Amrit came out of her room and started descending through the stairs. She was glowing in her shimmering baby pink outfit. As she was coming down the stairs, Rishabh's jaws fell down. He could not believe someone could be so beautiful!!

Agam kept looking at Amrit too. He was awestuck for a moment. But he controlled and nudged Rishabh.. 

"Rish, mere bhai, close your mouth. Otherwise a fly will enter the hole" 

Rishabh instantly controlled himself and looked away from Amrit. Amrit came and sat beside Nimrit. 

Rishabh's mom: Ribban ji, your daughters are very beautiful. Both of them. Whichever house they will go, those people will be very lucky. 

Amrit-Nimrit blushed at the compliment. Rishabh was staring at Amrit shamelessly. Agam stared at Amrit for a few seconds and glanced at Nimrit. 

As his eyes fell on Nimrit, she looked away. "Oh!!", he thought, "so Nimrit was looking stealthily at me till now.. hah!! Another addition in my fan list I guess. But she is hot.. That's for sure.."

He looked at Nimrit once again. this time he carefully studied her features, her beautiful lean face, fair smooth skin, curled hair falling lavishly on one side of her shoulders, beautiful reddish pink wet lips, her gorgeous blue outfit, everything. 

Finally, he concluded: Nah!! Seriously, this girl has some aura surrounding her, She is as beautiful as she is graceful. Both sisters are ravishing. True princesses.. 

Rishabh was looking at Agam when he was busy studying Nimrit's features.. 

This time its Rishabh who poked Agam with his Elbow..

Agam..Ouch..why you did this..

Rishabh.to bring you back to earth..kya hua..gaya kaam se..gone case..

Agam..Nothing as such i was just  and  did not complete his sentence...

Rishabh..yeah you were just .i'm listening...i will continue your line..admiring the beauty of  princess Nimrit.. Dont lie to me i know you too well my friend..finally someone has diverted your attention towards her.Believe me agam she is special just like Amrit looking at her lovingly..

Agam breathed a sigh ...you are right rishabh.pata nahin kya hein usse mein that i cant take my eyes off her..i'm amazed myself..

Rishabh.laughing Welcome to the club of falling in love at first sight my friend ..

Agam says What a bit loud  diverting all attention towards him...Embarrassed he looked angrily at Rishabh..murmuring in a low voice..  i will get it back to you..

Amrit..Nimrit lagta hein tumhari prince charming tumhein mil gayaa..he was staring at you.He is not bad..handsome and dashing..

Nimrit..Di aap ko aisa lag rahaa hein,..mujhe to nahin..Not even a smile aur attitude full on..hoga prince charming kissi aur ka meri nahin..

Amrit..Achaa i saw you stealing a glance at him all the time..

Nimrit in her thought..yeh to saach hein..he is good looking but his attitude ..kya samajhta hein apne aap ko..i better ignore him and stood up to see if the lunch is ready to be served...

Agam as much as he wanted to resist it but at last he looked to where Nimrit was sitting... To his surprise she was not there..he felt something in his heart like an emptiness which surprises him more..

Agam: *thinking* areh, where did she go? wait...why do I care? 

Rishabh: *whispers* Agam, what are you thinking?

Agam: *gulps* urm...nothing...nothing. Absolutely nothing.

Ribban, looks at Mr and Mrs Singhania: I think we should get dinner ready, what do you say? 

Mrs Singhania: Yes, absolutely.

Everyone goes to the dinner table. 

Ribban: *calling out* Nimrit...Nimrit! Where did this girl go?

Nimrit: *comes running in* i'm here Ma,...

Agam tries to drink water but accidently drops the glass looking at Nimrit..., the water drips everywhere, especially onto his shirt. 

Ribban: *looks at Agam* oh no, don't worry beta...Nimrit, take Agam to get his shirt dried..

nimrit looks at Agam and bits her lip, nervously she replies, okay..
Edited by ZAHARA. - 11 years ago
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Rippan: Amrit wake up , there is a very good news i want to share with you
 
Amrit : What is it Ma ?
 
Rippan: A young lad your fathers friends son is coming toay from France. He is coming  to expand his business venture in India. His father and your father thought he will be perfect for you and I would love if you could both see each other and give us your opinion
 
Amrit : Oh common Ma, what is the rush in me getting married and how can we decide in a day if we want to get married or not? This is impossible..Marriage is such a huge decision.
 
Rippan : I do understand dear but the guy is here for 6 months and you both have good time to think about.
 
Nimrit who enters the room says "Ma. this is indeed a good news..I am thrillled to hear this ,what is my would be jiju's name??? "
 
Rippan : his name is "Rishabh Singhania"
 
Nimrit : Wah di , Name sounds so hot and i bet he is good looking tooo
 
Amrit secretly blushes and says : Nimrit , that i need to check out how Mr Singhania saheb is
 
 
 
Phewww,, first time ever I wrote a story ..I am so bd at writing and usually stay away but since this is a colective story writing jumped in πŸ˜ƒ..Also ii wantefd Amrit to be positive...She is already so negative in the showπŸ˜‰
 
Great Post Zahara πŸ‘πŸΌ
 
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Saina 

what a surprise you have made usπŸ˜› The begining is very  very good πŸ‘My request to you is start writing it you have a flare for writing do not under estimate your writing skill.First time itself you have done a good job.
All the best to you dear keep writing...πŸ‘

         Saina
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Originally posted by: anasuya43

Saina 


what a surprise you have made usπŸ˜› The begining is very  very good πŸ‘My request to you is start writing it you have a flare for writing do not under estimate your writing skill.First time itself you have done a good job.
All the best to you dear keep writing...πŸ‘

         Saina

Di - Thanks for your encouragement di..so sweet of you, i am flattered 😳.
 
Story writing is still not my cup of tea  😊 . This is just a short one and that too incomplete so little different πŸ˜‰..
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Nimrit: ooh! Di! Why don't you do this...

Amrit: What?

Nimrit: Check out his facebook!!

Amrit: Facebook? *She thinks about it* No...I couldn't.

Nimrit: Di! Come on Di! It'll be cool!

Amrit: *Shakes her head* no...I can't...

Nimrit: Please Di?

Amrit: *sighs* okay fine...how do I find him?

nimrit: Just type his name into the search button and see what comes up.

Amrit: Okay, let's see *types in the name* Nimrit there are 3 different Rishabh Singhania's!

Nimrit: Really? *Looks at the computer screen* Let's look at the first one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
First Zahara..good thought about story writing ..😊

saina and Zahara both great writing...πŸ‘πŸΌ

continue from Zahara update..

Amrit..Let it be Nimrit i'm not interested..

Nimrit..common Di dont be a spoil sport .lets check this last one..

Here we go bingo..the right Rishabh singhania ...

Amrit...How do you know he is the one...

Nimrit..Uff Di ..read status..country..France..Ma did say he is from france..Not bad my jiju..he is handsome.dashing..Kya kayaal hein ..Di i'm talking to you ... no response..Nimrit looked at Amrit and smiled as she was completely lost staring at Rishabh pic..

Nimrit ..Di hello come out of your dream world..

Amrit  stood up to go away..

Nimrit wait  Di where are you going?..pehele mere sawaal ka jawab dena..So how is my Jiju..aap ko acchaa laga ya nahin..

Amrit blushing..hmmm theek hein ..chalega..

Nimrit with a shocked expression..Di sirf theek hein aur chalega..

Amrit could not stop laughing watching Nimrit expression then says he is perfect for your Amrit Di..

Nimrit hugged her and says i'm so happy..Ma should invite him for lunch.waise log kehete hein..the way  to  a man's heart is through his stomach..so its time for you to show your cooking Expertise my sweet Di..i'm sure Rishabhji will fall head over heels in love with you..

Amrit put a break my little sis at your thought..first let me meet him then yeh pyar ki baatein..

Nimrit ..is that so then why were you blushing staring at his pic?...say it you already like him..sirf pyar hona baaki hein..

Amrit..yeah yeah pull my leg my time will come too when you will meet your prince charming .

Nimrit..i know there is someone somewhere for me..when the time comes i will meet him..waise Di kaisa hogaa mera prince charming..

Amrit..Total opposite of you...woh bilkul angry type hogaa..

Nimrit..kya Di..koi baat nahin..i will change him and usska gussa bhi theek kar doungi..

Amrit..This i dont doubt it at all..you are such a sweetheart my little sis..Now lets go ...


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That evening:

Bubbly: Amritji, Nimritji! The groom's family are here!

Amrit had just gotten ready, she was wearing a light pink anarkali suit whilst Nimrit wore a dark blue suit.

Nimrit: *Looks at Amrit*  di, I'll just go and see how my honewale jiju looks like!

Amrit: *blushes*

Nimrit walks down to see the boy's family. She sees the parents and then Rishabh Singhania - then notices a young man dressed in a leather jacket. 

Nimrit: *thinking* yeh kon hai?

Ribban: *notices Nimrit coming down* Nimrit beta! come here. *looks at the guest* this is my youngest daughter Nimrit. Nimrit this is Rishabhji and his parents...and this is his friend, Agam Malik. 

Nimrit: *thinking* ohh, yeh jiju ka dost hai...
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Rishabh's parents ask Ribban, "Where is Amrit Ribban ji?"

Ribban: "She is just coming.. You please help yourselves with the tea and snacks"

Nimrit was sitting beside her mother and looking at Rishabh..

She thought, "Hmm, this guy seems nice. He is more good looking in actual than the facebook photos.. Amrit di is gonna get so lucky"

She tries to judge Rishabh more but her stares shifts  to Rishabh's friend Agam everytime.. She just couldn't help looking at him..

Agam was a well built, strong tall muscular man with wheatish complexion. Nimrit couldn't stop herself from staring at him. She mentally cursed herself..

But Agam had something in his face which because of which Nimrit  stole glances at him every minute..
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Posted: 11 years ago
 very Nice   DebalinaπŸ‘...continue..!!

PS  You have nicely described Agam  physical featuresπŸ˜‰