Let's write a story! - Page 4

Originally posted by: anasuya43

@Debalina_Paul and Zahara

I want to share with you this information when I was in Baat Hamari Pakki IF (Even  now i am active in that IF )😉

 There are two or three talented  who were ADORE FANS OF SAVAN PAIR  in 

BHPH  who loves writing fictions  story of Sanchi and Shravan in BHPH.

I used to  collected all the material in MIcrosoft word .now it in my USB .😉

it is a nice idea collecting all the article and put it in one place so that they will 

continuation in following the story easily.

if you want any help from me let me know  i will be always there for you all

Even I do the same Anasuyaji.. 😛 The stories which I love, I collect them and save them in my computer. Later on I read these stories and enjoy.

Some people are so good with the words, it amazes me.. I don't comment on each and every story I read but silently I praise those talented people. They are gifted.. 😊

Debalina_Paul

Wow story is going great ...Rocking Gals...do continue... Edited by --Saina-- - 11 years ago

Agam instantly looked back. He was shocked at what he saw. Nimrit was sitting on the floor and the hot iron-box was there on her left foot. She was crying non-stop. Agam immediately removed the iron-box off her foot and kept it aside. A deep red burn mark was imprinted on her foot skin.

"Agamji", Nimrit was sobbing uncontrollably, "my foot is burnt".

"Don't cry Nimrit.. Don't cry. It will be alright. Try to stand", Agam tried to calm her but his own heart was freezing seeing the deep burn on her foot.

Agam put his hands on Nimrit's arms and pulled her up softly to make her stand. Nimrit stood up somehow but collapsed immediately. Her feet were burning with pain and they could not carry her weight.

"Agamji, I cannot walk", she continued crying frenziedly. Agam's heart was melting seeing her in pain. He immediately carried her in his arms and stood up.

He was not done with buttoning his shirt but right now, he didn't care. He carried her out of the room and walked hurriedly towards the hall.

Nimrit was clinging to him and crying hiding her face in his chest. Agam descended the stairs. He screamed out, "Ribban Aunty.."

Hearing his scream, Nimrit pulled out her face from his chest. He placed her softly on the sofa with utmost care. Nimrit's eyes were red of pain and continuous sobs. She looked towards the dining table. Her mom and everyone else were rushing towards the hall.

She called out feebly, "Mamma.."

Debo - You writings are awesome..Have you written FF's/OS before?? Edited by --Saina-- - 11 years ago

Wow, Lovely story

Debo..lovely and so beautifully  written updates..👏

Beautiful continuation Debolina..❤️

AMAZING! I'll try to write the next part but that's when I have time :)

@Saina: No. I never worte anything. this is just a small try and that too because its a mixed effort.

Everyone, thanks.. Now its ur turn. Zahara, Savee, Saina, continue soon. I am eager to see the next part..