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Originally posted by: cool_SKRes
Finally after a ling time...i topped...muwahhh
I will b editing in an hour 😳hey AnaLooks like u are the first one this time😆
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Nyc update anu g...Thank u ji😳
1st of all, i luv the emotional display of nidhi as a mother
That was heart wrenching...Yes a mother often feels more pain for her offspring, thenthe children themselves.😳
Her disturbed mind couldnt think of amyone but him...and that was just so well connected...when in need a person can only turn to somebody that means something to them. ANd in this case it is Ashutosh, that she trusts the most.😃
Ashu himself was shocked to see his baby covered in blood, but keep himself steady for the sake of nidhi...
Khushi is ok...thanfully just minor sctraches...great...I would never have let anything happen to this sweety pie😃
I really loved the way ashu stayed beside nidhi...n didnt leave her alone...the medicine part was my fav
The well known doc need to learn a few tricks of being a good father.If he wants to be a father he has t learn na?😆..
Nidhi's end reactions were superbly written...Thank you. glad you liked it.😛
Ummm...there are two parts that i didnt appreciate in my comments...No problem not everyone will be liking everything.
Anji nidhi convo n dadi bua n ashu convo...
For anji nidhi convo, i know whatever u thought was great n i know how bad it feels when sumone put a question on ur story...but i think anji nidhi convo went too much in detail...I mean, i was looking to see a scene of a desperate mother who is praying for her child wellness as other matters can b discussed after the news of her good reports are out...um truly sorry if i hurt u g...Ana why would I be hurt. No issues.ANa if you read the ER part again, you will notice that I had written that when Anji came into the ERNidhi was in Rangnath's arms. He was trying to pacify her, to calm her down he was trying to tell her not to worry. So when Anji comes, he incates to her to take over. That also means to help her calm down, and not to worry so mucn.. What better way to distract somebody, then to start a convo, about something else. Thats what she was doing. And she succeeded. Nidhi was totoally distracted and by the time Ashutosh came with the good news, neither was she out of control, nor was she crying. That was the purpose of the long and lengthy convo.😃
N in dadi bua n ashu scene, ifelt something missing...i cant explain that...If can tell me what, I will try and fix it in the next chap.😳
But the two moments i luved the most was ashu being confident that he will make khushi have her medicine and nidhi give him an amusing lookI liked that part too.
And other was khushi acting to be in pain in front of db and nidhi muttered under her breath and ashu said, she is surly ur daughter...
Kids are the biggest hams, specially if they know that there is someone who will not only put up with their drama, but will also pamper them while they are at it.😆
Lookin up for the next chap to see how king gonna manofy his titli to marry him...Yes next chap Ashutosh and Nidhi wedding.😃
Happy celebrations to u...Thank you very much. Ana.😃love u too.
Tc
Luv ya
Ana
P.s: sorry once again...please
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