This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 60

Fatima...grhhh grhhh...
Do i always have to be after u hete...hunh hunh...

But i will beat u next time...sniff sniff...
Challenging raise wink emotion...:p

hi di! bahot dinose sochti thi apke tarif mein sahi tareke se nehi karti ya fir kar nehi pati ho! mobile se long comnt karna mushkil hain aur study ke wajeh se pc use karna allowed nehi tha! par aj socha k long review dongi par usme bhi pc mein prblm aagaya!                                                                        now come to the point! u r fantabulas awsome nd a great writer! in ur every writing there is hidden some realyty of life! i know this r fictions but there is something that seems real! u can express one's emotion beautifully...in ur every ff every charecters r different from eachother!!  nd fr this👏👏👏  i feel like i am watching ur written characters! u have no idea how i love them nd enjoy every words! sometime i lost my word to press u...hope u live long nd enjoy ur life till the last breath! nd once again👏 i think there is no need to say abt this chapter!! bt it's very important to know which is next one???😉😉 love u nd best of luck👍🏼

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Hey Anu..😛.

Hello Fatimah 😃

Again a BIG sorry for the delay...

No Worries.😃  I understand.

Needless to say that u are a brilliant brilliant writer.👏...

HATS OFF to ypu sweety...👏

I am simply mesmerized by the quality n beauty of ur updates.😳😳😳..

They definitely have a class of their own..⭐️...

AWESOME..👏👏👏..

Thank you Fatimah.  It is so sweet of u to give such awesome compliments😳

It really means a lot to me, and I appreciate very much, how much time and

Effort you must be putting into giving these kinds of detailed reviews time

And time again.😃

 

Loved the first scene😳...Dadi bua is a sweetheart.😃..she so much wants her daughter to be happy in life😳...And she very well knows that Ashu is the only one who can do this..👏👏.

Yes Dadi Bhua has reconciled to the fact that Nidhi will never marry anyone else.

That is why she is pushing so hard for the wedding.  She is taking advantage of the

Situation.😆

 

One of the great moments was Nidhi-Ranga convo👏...it was very sweet n very touching😳...he understands her so well n loves her like his sis...that was so so so sweet😳...Finally he found a way to convince nidhi for a yes...GREAT...👍🏼

 

I am glad you like this part also.  I wanted to see a closer friendship between Rangnath and Nidhi

Even in the show.  

Rangnath loves like a sister, that is why he manipulated her into thinking

About the proposal.  Like they say"BY HOOK OR BY CROOK"😆

Ashu-Khushi scene never fails to bring a smile to the face😃...I LOVE THEM...

They have a very special bond.  And it will only get better.😳

 

Nidhi-DB convo...each line was awesome...beautifully written...

Yes, Dadi Bhua did a little emotional manipulating herself.  I think everyone knows that

Drastic measures had to be taken to get Nidhi to agree.😆

 

My favourite part was nidhi noticing the changes in Ashu's expressions when doctor was examining khushi.😳😳😳...

I just wanted to show that Ashutosh loves Khushi as if she were his own.

A real father would have done the same.😳

 Loved her concern for Ashu n the way she stopped him for dinner.😆😳..

She loves Ashutosh. It's that simple.  Though she may openly acknowledge it

But certain gestures, and actions,  speak for themselves.😳

 

Nidhi's love for khushi comes out so beautifully😳...she adores her...such a lovely bonding..👏.

For Nidhi, Khushi is her daughter, it doesn't matter that she is adopted, and she loves her

As much as if she had given birth to her.😳

 

Another WOW moment was Ashu placing a kiss on the forehead of both his girls...😳😳

He only got to so that because Nidhi was sleeping.😳😉

I don't think he would have gotten the chance otherwise.😆

 

FINALLY its a YES from nidhi...

I don't think she had much of a choice. Moreover I don't think that she wanted one.😉

 

Ashu-nidhi-DB scene👏...OUTSTANDING...the way nidhi finally took mercy on him was hilarious🤣...

She has her weak moments.

Besides Dadi Bhua is formidable, even on the best of days.😆

 

Again an adorable moment..😳.

Toh ab mai aapko papa bol sakti hoon.

Ashutosh had had tears in his eyes, as he hugged the tot close to his heart,

Absolutely my Baby. I would love it if you would call me Papa.😳😳

Thank you for noticing that.  That was one of my favorite parts too.😳

 

Khushi is such a janu baby..😆.

Kyon ki kal aapki aur Papa ki shaadi hogi pehle, right? Kal aap dulhan banogi and phir Papa aapke hair mein woh red wala color daalenge,and aapko necklace bhi pehenayenge. Right?

Awww..😆😆😆.

Kids here and learn an awful lot from their friends.  And if u ever notice, children

Are the biggest gossips too.😆

 

Then Ashu-nidhi scene..😛.

AWESOME..👏.

His words affected her the way he wanted😉...Great going handsome...😉😆

 

So he is not going to loose this 2nd chance..

He wants her back.  And he will do what it takes.

And he is not averse to using a little bit of psychology.😉

 

Waiting for the next part is the toughest job...

I wonder how u always manage to meet the high standards set by ur own chapters...👏👏👏

Its AMAZING anu.👍🏼..

U ROCK sweety...

I LOVED every bit of it..😳

Had such a sweet sleep dreaming about Ashni n Khushi last night...

Cant thank u enough for these precious n lovely moments...😳

 

 

 

 Fatimah,

I can't thank you enough for the lovely compliments u have

Showered on me.  I really appreciate it.

Thank you so very much

And I love u lots too

TC

Anu😃