Perfect Mistakes... Chapter 19 Update - Page 14

Wow!!..Truly Amazing..

Whats wrong with Viraat ? 😭

You have just left me speechless what can I say that you have not written in the last two chapters.  To really understand the word love is to read and listen to the song played by virat "if I die young" to maanvi. The depth of the pain that both are feeling is so amazing.

i have just read the last 4 updates in one go!  this is sheer brilliance.  amazing - people have said it all - dont have any words to describe!! 

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

What is that? In my eye, on my cheek now, ohw god! Ava! You made me cry and I am not a fast cryer! Really I get emotional, but crying... no, I don't cry. But this was, ahw, this was heartbreak at another level. I have heard of one-sided love, but two sided heartbreak, this deep, this is beautiful. I was afraid that the song wouldn't match with the situeation as it could destroy the whole feel, which is weird cause I am a musiclover, I think I  would go for songs if I had to choose between a book or music,  and that is huge, cause I read the whole day and I love doing it. And normally the story gets not enough attention when a song like this is played on the background, but you managed to give the song a deeper meaning and  the story, they complimented eachother perfectly, I lovehow there was enough time to read the lines of the story between the lyrics of the song, so it could sink in. This is beautiful, without saying what happened, you did. I am afraid to think that I actually know what makes Virat stop accepting Maanvi's love. And I am so happy that you made him tell/sing her. He can't let her in pain, how beautifully you brought that. God! I am going to read this again...

 

And yeey! Finally not late, but the first to comment.

Love your work Ava!

 

Menika

Originally posted by: aa_mnhs

Ava!!! This is beauty! I'm overwhelmed with emotions after reading this... this is amazing writing, and you do it very effortlessly, nothing sounds forced, ever. all the emotions are very brilliantly penned down. Thanks for the lovely read.
p.s. is it possible that you give me link to the other site where you have the coming parts of the story already written, or do you want me to keep waiting for the updates here (you're are very quick with the updates, but i still find hard fighting my impatience).

love

Sarah

Edited by SmileXD - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: forever_young

Res

*Edited*

How do you manage to do this Ava!?
This is just beautiful!!
Your FF has made smile, laugh, AND CRY!!!
Oh gosh..that song...with the lyrics was just beautiful!!
No words! And the fact Virat sings to tell Maanvi about him!!
Amazing!! It seriously brought tears to my eyes!!
Just mind blowing!!

Hey guys, I'm meant to be doing homework but..important note:

Ava...This was awesome!!

omg Ava this is amazing although i had read it before nd believe me i dont cry easily but ur this update made me cry TWO times...the way u protray the feelings is just marvellous...i was myself surprised wen i noticed tears in my eyes...u know i stalk ur story everytime on another site for new update but seems like i have to wait...no worries its worth waiting for ur update...

abt note
i can understand mocks exams and all...nd chemistry believe me me nd chemistry best enemies...lol take ur time will be eagerly impatiently waiting for ur update