Perfect Mistakes... Chapter 19 Update - Page 7

Posted: 11 years ago

ohhh thsi was great, i loved it how he eat all of that what she made, but i dont understand what he means  I don't want any more burdens on me??? really exciting ...

how he understand her, when she told about her mother , they are for each other , im now excited o know why she hate boys???
 
continoue soon and thanks for the pm
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome story
Continue soon and do pm me 
I have already sent you a buddy request!
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update! love their interaction...the end up saying things they need to avoid😊...continue soon!
Posted: 11 years ago
*gasps* already 4 parts posted 😲 i want to write my views bt busy wid exams... 😔 no prob will edit dis post later wid my comment 😊 ur story is jst awesome!! *sighs* exams! 😔 *back to books*
Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you very much for the PM...
And What lovely updates!!!
Truly this Virat and Manvi are awesome... they are completely different but I sense that they need each other desperately...
Please update soon...
Posted: 11 years ago
Were you kidding when you said this sucks? I think you were 😆
Dude...this is amazin' :) Really great beginning and I'm really loving this new twist in the VirMan story...👏 Please continue soon...
can you please PM for ur updates?
Posted: 11 years ago
I love your story, ohw I do!
This is briljant, how you are able to describe
everything perfectly so I can relate how they
feel and why they say something, how suprised
they are when they say or hear something that
isn't normal, like Maanvi not exploding.
 
And OMG! You love Range Rovers too!
I love that car. I want the one you described,
nothing more, nothing less. I was like; What?!
We have the same car taste!
 
 
Posted: 11 years ago
This is so COOL!! Humorous story!!

Love it to the Core!! ❤️

Do PM me when u update!! I read your first part, commented too, but missed out to send buddy request!! Aaahhh, and how I missed your last two updates!! Had to catch up now!! 


Posted: 11 years ago
Two updates read!! You're amazing!
This story is very intriguing. Waiting eagerly to read what follows. And thanks again for the very quick updates.
Love
Sarah
Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic!!! I totally love your description!! I could literally imagine the house!!!
Love their relationship so far!!! Rockingg!!
Do continuee sooon and thankss for the PM!!
😊

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