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Part 9: Chor Guss Aaya'!!!
Hey guys..!! Do you remember this FF? It was the first ever FF from my side. So here is the Part 9. In this update I have tried out a suspense thriller wala technique. I just hope you guys will like it. I have also used a kind of imagery, which would take you readers to a world of fantasy. Just onerequest, please through out the update, try imagining the scenes and that will take you to a fun filled ride and will take you to to Kattgodham. Just hpe my writing impresses you people.
Yuvraj and Anees reach
the Guggal House. Yuvraj gets a jist of all those sweet moments. About how he
and Suvreen were close friends. How the trio ' Suvreen, Tultuli and Yuvraj were
always playing pranks on people. How Yuvraj and Suvreen had these small fights,
how they used to make up. Then he remembered how they had broken apart? How
destiny had sperated their paths? His eyes were moist. This did not go unnoticed
by Anees.
Anees: Sab tikh hein
na?
Yuvraj: Haan'Sab tikh
hein. Mujhe kya hoga? Wo tho bas aankhon mein kuch chala gaya tha aur kuch
nahi. Ab yahi bahar kade rehne ka irada hein kya? Chalo (and he walks from
there)
Anees to himself: Acha?
Kuch tho gadbad zaroor hein. Pehle tho Yuvraj ne kaha ki uska koi apna nahi
hein yaha par, aur ab yaha athe hi uske aankhe bar aayi. Jo bhi ho mujhse yeh
bahuth der takh chupa nahi rah saktha. Meri maksath se mujhe door koi bhi nahi
kar saktha, thum bhi nahi Yuvraj Singh. (with a smirk on his face)
In the Suvi's room:
Suvreen is standing by
the window and is lost in some thoughts. While tultuli is checking out some old
pictures of their childhood. After Yuvi's departure, Suvreen had only these
pictures which were close to her heart.
Tultuli: Suvi, jaldi aa
yeh dekh. Iss mein hum teeno kithne cute lag rahe hein na? (She comes running
excited to show Suvreen the picture in which the trio were sitting on a bench)
Suvreen first showed a
hint of excitement on her face, but suddenly this excitement was downsided.
Suvi: Tutuli, thumse
kithni bar keh chuki hoon mein ki, I am not interested in these pictures. Ab
bas bhi karo na. Chal hum soothe hein.
Tultuli was very angry
hearing to this. She wanted to get Suvreen to reality. She wanted her to
understand that it is high time she realize how much she misses Yuvraj.
Tultuli: Bas Suvi.
Kithna chupayegi sach ko?
Suvi: Kaun sa sach? Ab
yeh sab chodo hum soothe chalo. (tries to divert the topic)
Tultuli: Nahi Suvi, ab
sone ka nahi, jagne ka waqt aa gaya hein. Suvi, thumhe bhi bahuth achi tarah
pata hein ki thum Yuvi ko aaj bhi ekh dost manthi ho, jaise pehle manthi thi. Tho
fir kyun bhaag rahi ho apne aap se? Kyun Suvi?
Suvreen: (with tears in
her eyes) Tultuli, mein nahi bhag rahi hoon apne aap se. Mera koi Yuvraj naam
ka dost hein hi nahi. Wo mera ateeth tha Tultuli, wo ateeth jiske saaye se bhi
mein dorr rehna chathi hoon. Mein nahi chathi ki uss ateeth ka bura saaya mere
aaj pe pade.
Tultuli: Acha? Tho
thumne yeh phontographs ab takh kyun sambal ke rakhe hein Suvi? Thum chathi tho
isse feink sakthi thi na? Fir kyun nahi feinkthi? Suvi agar wo past that ho fir
thumne aaj wo sweat shirt kyun kareedi?? Kyun?? Jawab do mujhe Suvi?
Suvi: Wo mein'
Tultuli: Chup ho gayi
Suvi? Koi Jawab nahi hein na thumare pas? Mein batathi hoon kyun? Kyunki wo aaj
bhi thumara dost hein. Saalon pehle jo kuch bhi hua, usme na tho uski koi
galthi thi aur na thumari. Wo tho thum dono ka naseeb tha. Suvi aaj bhi wo
thumara dost hein, sabse acha dost, mujhse bhi acha dost.
Suvi: Haan'wo dost hein
mera'Aaj bhi mein use apna dost manthi hoon'(Shatterd, she starts to cry)
Tultuli: Suvi tho thum
apne aap ko jhoot kyun bol rahi ho?
Suvi: Kyunki mujhe dar
lagtha hein Tultuli. Mujhe dar lagtha hein kahi wo mujhe dost nahi matha ho
tho? Kahi mein firse toot gayi tho?
Tultuli: Nahi Suvi aisa
kuch nahi hoga. Ab rhoona band kar. Please Suvi rona band kar!!
Here Yuvraj is about to
ring the bell, but something in him stopped him from doing so. I thought
Suvreen would be sleeping and he did not want to disturb her. He instead
knocked the door. Puppa and Mumma were done with the Besan ladoos and were
about to sleep, when they herad the door being knocked.
Puppa: Arey Ithni der
ko kaun aya, Loveliji?
Mumma: (Fear clear on
her face) Kahi koi Chor tho nahi aa gaye na ji?
Puppa: Chor?? Nahi nahi
Chor sabka himath kaha ki we Guggal house mein aaye?
Mumma: Acha? Aap kya
bade Akbar hein kya jo unn choron se lad jayenge? (Giggling)
Puppa: Akbar tho nahi
hoon, lekin aap ke liye mein hi Akbar hoon meri Jodha (Romantic)
Mumma, turns all red.
Mumma: Aap bhi na'Agar
Koi aa gaya tho?
Puppa: Arey tension
kyun leti ho Lovely ji? Bache so rahe hein.
(Puppa and Mumma were
so lost in each other that they forgot about the robber standing on the door.
Yes, you read it right 'Robber', after all he is here to steal their most
precious treasure from them. He is going to steal the heart of their princess
Suvreen)
Yuvraj again knocked on
the door, and this brought them back to senses.
Puppa: Pata nahi ithni
raath gaye kaun aa gaya? (He walks towards the door to open it)
Mumma: Arey ji mein tho
batana bhool gayi, abhi abhi Rohini Puttar ji ne phone kiya tha, wo Yuvraj aaj
aane wala hein'
But before Lovely could
complete her sentence Puppa had already disperade to the hallway to open the
door, and thus he did not hear anything about Yuvraj.
Here, Yuvraj and Anees
were getting restless. It was very cold outside and they were shivering.
Yuvraj: Lagtha hein sab
so gaye hein. Sab thumari galthi hein. Arey yar, ekh bar bata diya tho hota?
(irritated)
Anees: Wo I am sorry. Ab
hum kya karein?
Yuvraj: Ab karna kya
hein? Raho yahi bahar tandi mein. (Angry) Waise kabhi kisi ke ghar ke andar
kidki chadkar gaye ho?
Anees: Nahi. Kyun?
Yuvraj: Koi na. Aaaj
chad lena.
Anees: Kya? Pagal ho
gaye ho?
Yuvraj: Ab koi aur
rastha nahi hein. Sirf wahi ekh rastha hein, iss ghar ke andar pahunchne ka. (he
points towards a open window, and pulls Anees along with him towards that)
At the same time Puppa
Guggal, walks down from the stairs and opens the door. He is surprised to find
no one ther, at the same time he finds that there this tin box which was flying
due to the sir and was making a knocking noice. He thought probably that is
what was making the noise which they mis understood as the door being knocked.
Suvreen and Tultuli are
lying on the bed. After a lot of efforts Tultuli convinced Suvreen to sleep.
Tultuli was already snoring, but Suvreen could not find sleep. Something was
there that felt somewhere something is worng. There is something that is going
to happen. She did not why, but she was feeling something wired in her heart.
She got off the bed and decided to godrink some water. Probably that would help
her out. While she was walking towards the kitchen located downstairs, she felt
as though something jumped into the house behind her from a open window. She
turned back and found no one there. It was all dark, but she felt as though
something was moving in the dark.
Suvreen: Kaun hein
waha? Baby? Thu Abhi takh soyi nahi?
She walks towards the
window. She could see someone standing there, there was a shadow. There was
someone there, but who was it? And why was she feeling some wired feeling in
her heart. She felt as though there is some bonding that she has with the
shadow. Whose shadow was it? Suddenly, some one patted her on her back.
Suvreen: Aaahhhaa'
(Scared)
She turned to find her
Puppa and Mumma standing there.
Puppa: Kya hua Suvi
beta? Thum chilayi kyun?
Mumma: Arey Suvi beta
ji, thum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Abhi takh soyi kyun nahi?
She suddenly hugs her
Puppa tightly and starts crying.
Puppa: Kya hua? Thum ro
kyun rahi ho beta? Batao tho zara?
Mumma: Kya hua? Koi
bura sapna dekha kya?
Suvi breaks the hug and
wipes of the tears.
Suvi: Kuch nahi mumma,
Puppa. Wo bas neend nahi aa rahi thi, aur ajeeb bechaini ho rahi thi. Ab mein
teekh hoon.
Puppa: pakka?
Suvi: Jee puppa, pakka
wala Promise (gives a cute smile)
They bid good night to
her and they three move towards Suvi's room first and then after leaving her
there, her Mumma and Puppa walk towards their room, but not before giving a
stare towards the open window.
Mumma: Dekho ji, yeh
kidki tho khuli hi hein. Tandi hawa aa rahi hein andar.
Puppa: Koi na ji. Mein
abhi band kar deta hoon. App jake so jahiye.
Puppa clesed the window
and he too walked towards his room. He did not know that the actual purpose of
the window was anyway fulfilled. The robber was already in the palace. He was
here to take away the princess.
[ Do not copy /paste or reproduce the materials or
ideas, in part or complete, without written permission from author of this FF-Manish B Shetty]
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