SaRa FF: Unwanted -chapter-5/page-11 - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
Congo  Diii

yeyeee thnax a lot for this new  FF
Diii  i m alwz  with u
i know how  much talented u r  and i alwz adore  ur   writings
 u r  d best and  will remain best   for  me
anyway  coming  to  ur    new   ff
the    i loved   CS-specially   Indirra'sand  Sameers
Indira is a spoil   brat an TOM BOYISH - kahi haam nehi ho rahe . lol. it would be awesome  to imagine  her   in this   char...
awww i felt   so sad   for  her..why does  she feels  that  she   was unwanted??.hmmm koi bara    raz   hai kya  iske   piche???


OMG Sameer  Diwan -a military  officer..hayeee i already started to imagine  him  in this  attire... lekin  pata   nehi kyun  is  attire   main  mujhe  MR Khan  ki iamge   ekhai  de  rahi hai...lol lol lol.actually i wanted to C  MAlik Khan as a special  oficer   of intelligence   branch / army officer... but Sameer bhi accha hai..


i also  loved   mayank  and  NUPUR's  char.though u dint  telltaht  much abt  them but  still i loved  them as  they   r my most   fav. try  to give some importance   to them iff it  wont hamper ur  story...                                                                                  .

Posted: 11 years ago
Di i know its a challenge 4  u to maintain all this char. but i know u can  do it.
aur  chinta  maat  karo  sab   kuch accha  he  hoga
though its   very difficult but  its  nothing in front  of  ur  talent

Posted: 11 years ago
Di now coming to ur prologue

Diii Indira sharma is getting  married-but with whom????

hey though she was tom BOY type girl but  she is very innocent and indian  by heart ...
she wants to get  married with  all rituals-r wah i dint  expect   it...
Very interesting

loved  it  di
Keep it up
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Faria.


Di now coming to ur prologue

Diii Indira sharma is getting  married-but with whom????

hey though she was tom BOY type girl but  she is very innocent and indian  by heart ...
she wants to get  married with  all rituals-r wah i dint  expect   it...
Very interesting

loved  it  di
Keep it up

she is a girl Faria but she disguises herself as tomboy feeling she is not beautiful ðŸ˜³ and every girl will sure have marriage as a dream ðŸ˜‰
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by preethimadhavg



she is a girl Faria but she disguises herself as tomboy feeling she is not beautiful ðŸ˜³ and every girl will sure have marriage as a dream ðŸ˜‰

accha tou ye  baat   hai
so bhaut sare kahani hai iski piche.
i m waiting  di
Posted: 11 years ago
I like ur new ff too...Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for the late comment...


Okay..
first of all..
loved the character sketch..

secondly..


awsome decription about each character...

thirdly...


loved the prologue..
Showing Indira Marriage...

That too church marriage with...a firangi...

if Indira could not still able to adjust their culture then how could she can bear
firangi,...
well i am super excited about this story...

awsome ...
please update the first part soon...


please do pm me...

loved ..it
Posted: 11 years ago
everyone want to know why is Indira became tomboy and marrying a English guy but guys did anyone got the doubt why Sameer has two Sur names ðŸ¤” ðŸ˜†

chalo koi baat nahin i will tell in my next chapters ðŸ˜‰
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by preethimadhavg


everyone want to know why is Indira became tomboy and marrying a English guy but guys did anyone got the doubt why Sameer has two Sur names ðŸ¤” ðŸ˜†

chalo koi baat nahin i will tell in my next chapters ðŸ˜‰

Because Indira marrying firangi was more shocking than Sameer having two surnames...
one more thing..
does Sameer and and Nupur-Gunjan
 have any
brother-sister type of relation..
Posted: 11 years ago
I give you full permission to play with every character

it's your ff and your imagination...


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