DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130 - Page 4

Originally posted by: turags

👏 fantastic start...i am sure you will do perfect justice to this lovely story...

u r an amazing writer cont soon

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

u r an amazing writer cont soon

Anu, it would be wonderful if you show Ashutosh originally as a khadoos no-nonsense fellow, devoid of all pity to a fellow human being...and then turns into a caring husband...that transition should form the crux of the story. Even their bedroom interaction which is initially a pure physical process turns into a romantic one...at the end of Nidhi's preg track, he cares for her so much that he is not willing to let her go out of sight...fulfills all her pregnancy demands etc etc...[/QUOTE]

Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev

Anu, it would be wonderful if you show Ashutosh originally as a khadoos no-nonsense fellow, devoid of all pity to a fellow human being...and then turns into a caring husband...that transition should form the crux of the story. Even their bedroom interaction which is initially a pure physical process turns into a romantic one...at the end of Nidhi's preg track, he cares for her so much that he is not willing to let her go out of sight...fulfills all her pregnancy demands etc etc...

 

I will rest assured, now that you can do enough justice to the story line.  

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Originally posted by: Libra

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Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

sk had once told this abt ktlk...after mallika track...i mean the penultimate mallika track...

Congratulations Anu on this new FF..😃.

completely different approach!!!!!

Have one question bothering me...😉.

Is nidhi gonna conceive  the physical way or u will resort her to Artificial insemination or something???