Superb start. Interesting and I loved it. 😊
I love your unique style of writing. So will we know the girl's name in next part? We are so engrossed with some stories that only later we realize that we are yet to know the character's name that we already got attached to. You have that talent. I think you did that for me in your 'Under my umbrella'. I think even there, the flow was through first person without character name and I liked that too.
From some comments, I understand the next update will come after a long time. 😆 But please try to continue soon. 😃
