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Guys dis  my first OS hope u will like it...

In Panchi's house...Kiya was also der...

Panchi :- Life z so strange ...
Kiya :- yes...
Panchi :- hmm...
Kiya :- i knw Panchi ...u miss Ranveer (seeing one of d photos on d wall)
Panchi :- no Kiya...i m nt  missing Ranveer ...i miss my nonu
Kiya :-hmm...
Panchi :- der was time when he was always der fr me...he always protected me,he stood fr me,he completed me..but now everything z changed
Kiya :- its just a misunderstanding panchi..
Panchi :- he feels dat i betrayed him,how can i support him when he z wrong...
Kiya :- dnt worry ...everything will be f9
Panchi :- do u remember Kiya..der was a time u never liked me..
Kiya :- i knw..i was fool at dat time
Panchi :- hmmm now we r best friends..its all bcoz of KD
Kiya :- y do u think so...its nt becoz of me...plz panchi i dnt want 2 talk abt him
Panchi :- but y Kiya ..y dnt u frgive him..
Kiya :- he was trying 2 humiliate me...n ur asking me 2 forgive him😑
Panchi :- der z lot of difference Kiya he was trying 2 humiliate but he didnt humiliate u..
Kiya :- i cant trust him again
Panchi :- kiya  y cant trust him..it was just a misunderstanding
Kiya :- no Panchi..
Panchi :- yes Kiya ..he doesnt knw d truth ..dats y he was trying 2 humiliate u
Kiya :- wht do u mean???
Panchi :- yes Kiya just think anyone in KD's will do d same thing ..dont u tust me???
Kiya :- yes i trust u..
Panchi :- if u r in some prblm n if i come 2 u n say dat KD z dating some other girl ...den dont trust me..
Kiya :- yes..i will 
Panchi :- its d  same Kiya ...KD also believes his frnd piddi ..i knw Piddi was nt wrong..he just told wht he saw...
Kiya :- but Panchi ..i cant trust him agian
Panchi :- when did he break it...
Kiya :- i didnt get u..
Panchi :- k.. how do u know that he was trying 2 humiliate u???
Kiya :- KD told me...
Panchi :- it so simple Kiya ..he doesn't want any outsider 2 tell u abt his plan..so aftr knowing  truth..he himself told u abt his plan...he was very loyal Kiya...he doesnt want 2 hide anything from u..he knows dat u will be shattered after knowing d truth..but he doesnt want 2 hide it...bcoz u mean a lot 2 him
Kiya :- yes u r r8 Panchi... i was  a fool thinking dat he betrayed me..
Panchi :- wht r u waiting fr ???

Kiya left after hugging Panchi...she wants 2 meet KD 2 clear all d mess..she thanked Panchi ...Panchi was alone n burst out into tears...

Panchi :- y its always me...i never betrayed u nonu...i want u back ...plz come back...once it was u nonu who was always der fr me..but know its Kiya who z der fr me...once u were my best friend now u treat me like a foe ...n Kiya who always treated me like foe z my best friend... i dont know whether dis change z fr gud or bad ...but i now dat i want u back in my life..i miss u so much nonu

Ranveer was in his house wid ayesha but he was not happy he always felt dat something was missing...he lost his happiness...but he doesn't want 2 accept d truth..he  was getting hiccups 

Ranveer :- ayesha water plz
Ayesha :- yes..me tho yehi hun tho tum hey kon yaad kar raha hey..
Ranveer :- come on ayesha...
Ayesha :- k byee Ranveer ...
Ranveer :- byee(he was alone)

Ranveer :- i miss u 2 Panchi ...

some where in his heart he was also missing her,he was missing her company,he was missing der pranks,he was missing der friendship...but he doesn't want accept it...in dis way two best friends became foes n two foes became best friends...but everything happens for gud...

Kahin to.. kahin to
Hogi wo,
Duniya jahan tu mere saath hai..

Jahan mein, jahan tu,
Aur jahan, bass tere mere jazbaat hai,
Hogi jahan subah teri,
Palko ki, kirano mein,
Lori jahan chand ki,
Sune teri baahoin mein..(he was singing dis song remembering his best friend)




NOTE :- hope u like it guys...i knw it is  an boring OS ..but i was thinking 2 write something on RaHi..i was missing dem alot so ..i wrote dis OS ..😊i just  want RV 2 get rid of dis ayesha (mars wali 🀒)..hope dis happens in dis alpha competition...plz ignore grammatical mistakes...












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Posted: 11 years ago
nice os loved it. can you continue this, if possible? this was really good. even i miss rahi. i want their cute masti and nok-jhok back. 
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Originally posted by: keshiya

nice os loved it. can you continue this, if possible? this was really good. even i miss rahi. i want their cute masti and nok-jhok back. 

yep i was also thinking d same ...but i started it as os ..yep i would luv 2 give an happy ending...i really miss dem alot😭
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It is really nice...just wish it had happy ending!! ;) really nice! Do u plan to continue??? Cuz if u do please pretty please pm me!! 😊 😳
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Awesome os dear πŸ‘
Beautifully written πŸ˜ƒ
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And if u gonna continue pm me 😳
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Originally posted by: TBPfanforever

It is really nice...just wish it had happy ending!! ;) really nice! Do u plan to continue??? Cuz if u do please pretty please pm me!! 😊 😳

awww thnk u so much but no yr i m nt gng 2 continue...it was just a small os...
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Awesome os dear πŸ‘
Beautifully written πŸ˜ƒ

thnk u so muchπŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

And if u gonna continue pm me 😳

if der any change in RaHi den i will dfntly give an happy ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey Sravya u silly girl, who said its boring
its awesome yaar πŸ˜Š
its such a cute but touching OS
i really loved it