ariya's - will u marry me,cha-20,pg-85(8/7)

Posted: 11 years ago
i am a silent reader
but now i am writing my first os
plz if any mis takes r there means
plz adjust plz


here i start
WILL U MARRY ME



               Rathod and arjun were living in same house.they had no case , so they stayed in house only , it was a saturday

               Rathod was watch tv and arjun was making coffee for rathod and chai for him, he was looking quite tensed and he handed over a mug to rathod

Rathod(worried seeing arjun worried)-kya hua ratwte pareshaan lag rahe ho

listening to rathod words arjun came back to reality

Arjun-kya? kuch kaha tumne?

Rathod-maine poocha ki tum pareshaan kyun lag raheho

Arjun-sameer don't u think ab mujhe riya ko propose karna chahiye?

Rathod(teasing)-oh to janab iss baat se pareshaan the

Arjun-bit angrly rathod majak mat karo,i am serious

Rathod-ok rawte,i agree with u,bechari already 3 saal se chup chap ke tumhe pyar karti rahi and its high time now

Arjun-u r right, to mai kal hi usse pooch leta hu,
kal sunday hai na

with these thoughts in mind arjun went to sleep without drinking chai, but rathod stopped him

Rathod-arre rawte chai to pee lo

Arjun-oh yes,sameer,mein bhul gaya

Rathod-abhi ye hal hai to shaadi ke bad to

(before rathod could complete his words)
arjun look at him and said ab chale sone(sleep)

they drank coffee and went to sleep

NEXT DAY it was sunday
morning 7.30

arjun was already got up but rathod was stil sleeping , he went to rathod's room

Arjun-sameer jaldi uth hume jaana hain na?

rathod(sitting up on the bed and yawning)-kahan jaana hain hume?

Arjun-riya ke ghar,bhul gaya kya?

Rathod-lekin wahan to tumne jaana hain mujhe kyun le rhe ho?

Arjun-sameer,tu mera dost hain na?to itani mushkil ghadi mein tu mera saath nahi dega?

Rathod(looking at the clock)-haan lekin abhi to sirf 7.30 baj rahe hain(teasing) dont't get too much excited

Arjun(also looking at clock)-sheepishly haan yaar, woh waqt ka khayal hi nahi aaya

Rathod(teasing)-haan riya ke bare mein sobhoge to waqt ka khayal kaise ayega?

Arjun was smiling


PRECAP-
arjun rang the bell
riya opened the door
arjun was shocked


hi friends if u like it plz like and comment it
than only i will continue . plz plz if any mistake adjust plz, these is my first os plz


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CHAPTER-16       PAGE-62

CHAPTER-20.   PAGE-85

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hey frnds here i am writing
 rishbala-ff-tuj mai mari jaan
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if u want to read it here is the link
Edited by shrutisweety - 10 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
kya baat hai dear...direct propose karne pe jump mara hai

arjun and rahtore sharing one room ...i just can't stop my self about thinking of their bromance...

lovely dear...please update soon  na and me to your buddy as well as pm list...
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome os
plzz do continue witha long update
Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice...hmmm to proposal ka khyaal ab aaiya hai janab ko :D
Interesting precap...plzz pm me 0:-)
Posted: 11 years ago
good one dear...
Imagining what could be the next part...update soon..
Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear nice one...

i want to reaally see rathod getting up in morning in sleepy half eyes closed n yawning...i mean kaisa lagega...i cant imagine...
i mean jab bhi imagine karti hoon to arjun aur rathod ke serious looks nazar aa jatein hai lolzz...

n kavs tnx...for d link...i wld hav missed somethin interesting...

n yea u r r8 yeh bohot shaani hai...direct proposal wow...n most amazing thing rathod n arjun dost...doosri baar aisi kahaani padne ko mili...

n shruti...plss do continue...will b waiting for ur update!!!Edited by purecure - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Kya OS hian Boss...


it is super cool

arjun n rathore Roommates ...me liking 

Arjun proposing n shocked at the door ...KYA HUA ??/

Continue soon


Posted: 11 years ago
Sweet Start..
 
 
plz update asap
 
 
plz PM me.😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey thank you for the PM...

It's a cute start! Like the Arjun - Rathore friendship. Precap looks interesting continue soon and please PM me when you update :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Wah kya style hai pehle he propose...nice very nice
arjun n rathore i so like this duo kya style hai dono ka.
Coming to story it was awesome n well written liked very much.now waiting for riya's reaction very much.thanks for pm

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