FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Queen.Bee



u dont think so?? 😆 😆  i think he should have kissed... angir mokka bar bar miltha hai kya? 😆 that too if dadi fix riya for rathore!!!😲

😆
mokka milta nahin hein, dundna parta hein😉
and then Arjun is a supercop, dont worry, he'll know how to steal such kisses very easily😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: fatima15

Great update :)

thanks dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: lola123

Wow..!!!
Absolutely Amazing!!!
There is something fishy about Dadi...does she know about it all!?

thanks dear😳
well Dadi is completely fishy😆, dont worry dear
how much she knows or not, you'll know in my next update dear😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

I think Dadi already knew abt Riya's lie.

 
 
R she thinks Riya & Arjun??
 
 
Mre intersting.
 
Bechara Arjun acha mauka gava diya usne.
 
 
Love to see reaction Riya's & other family members reaction whn thy see Shaina.
 
 
 
Baad mai Riya kya karegi???
 
 
 
plz update soon..

hmmm cant let out the suspense dear
😉
next update you'll get the answers to all your questions😉
dont worry about Arjun, he'll get such mauka a lot, and then he may also steal such mauka nah😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: simple_dimple93

LOVED THE CHAPTER!

 
DID NOT SEE THAT COMING FROM DADI! LOOOL!

OH NO! DONT DEGRADE RIYA, ARJUN WHATS WRONG WITH U ðŸ˜•

Update soon and do pm me x

thanks dear
well dadi is a bit hadke😆
its not degrading dear, anyone would have done the same thing, he's only protecting his family, though he could have done it better
and then Riya also lied😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: priya00147

unresd my comment...
agla part kab mlega

by tonight i'll post next part dear😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Tina,

You have not slipped up even once in this delightful serial, and I enjoyed this (semi)chapter as much as the earlier ones. There is a coherence to your plot that is especially pleasing; you are not stringing haphazard romantic sequences together at random. You know where you are headed and how to get there.

But for me, the piece  de resistance in this chapter was Dadi's amazing tech savviness; she knew how to erase videos and photos. and she did it all so neatly and did not get caught! A very spry old lady who is entirely  after my own heart!😉

Shyamala Aunty

thanks Shyamala Aunty
it's a pleasure to read your comments and appreciation😳
well nowadays almost everyone knows how to use mobile and camera, no matter the age, hence a modern Dadi😆
well she'll of course get caught later, when Arjun would try to show everyone his proofs😆
but even then she'd get out beautifully out of it😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: luvzindagi

I loved it... Please update the next part soon
I can't wait to read further

thanks dear😳
will be updating by tonight, so patience dear😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great part...

Thanks for pm

Thanks dear and you're welcome😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: -sree13-

whom I like the most in this chapter is none other than Dadi 😉 deleted videos & even taking side of Riya in precap..what she is upto??

Riya should tell all the truth before thing goes worst..Shaina's entry can make Riya to suffer a lot 😕

those intense moment of Ariya..Riya never felt like these even with Rathod too that was the best point 😳 could not help but blushing like a hell 😳😳

update soon na Tina coz precap would not let me live in peace 😊

well i made Dadi a very special character😃
well Dadi wants Riya as her DIL😉, and she'll do anything for it
Dont worry in next chapter you'll get to know why😊
well it's too late now, cause Shaina is almost here, and so poor Riya😭
was the moments really intense?
i mean they didnt even kiss😉