FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1 - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update Tina.
Could feel Riya's pain.
Just read the 6th chapter.
Great one Tina.
Like I said earlier this story has a great pace.
Retrograde Amnesia huh, good.Edited by FeistySoul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey dear...as usual liked every part of dis chap...!!!

specially dadi...oye dadi kya baat hai...!!!!
tnk k god family members understud her matlab riya...n evn arjun...i hope ab unki pyaar ki daastan shuru ho jayein...!!!
 
n rathore forgot shaina...bohot na insaafi hai...!!!
 
bt kno one thing...jo hot aaacche ke liye hota hai...!!!
 
so dear...keep it up!!!
 
n no precap...bacche sry baccho ki jaan logi kya...!!!!
 
arjun ne aapko bhi suspense seekha diya...!!!
 
unwaeee unwaee...!!!😭
 
theek hai koi baat nahii...hum intezaar kar lenge...!!!
 
will b waiting...!!! plss update soon...!!!
 
haan..as usual awesome update...i kno yeh kehne ki baat nahii hai...lekin phir bhi!!!
Edited by purecure - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!! so thats y dadi stopped her... loved the way dadi said we both know that she didnt try to charm u... glad everyone forgave her!!!

n also loved the way he felt it was good if she was a gold digger rather than she loving his brother...πŸ˜† hope ariya starts soon!!!

too bad rathore forgot shaina!!! n also riya too.. she saved his life na... i hope now rathore wont fall for riya πŸ˜† ... update soon...

n no precap?? 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow thats y dadi sapported riya,
the way dadi said was wounderful.

the whole family forgived riya,
that is so sweet,

rathod dont remeber her gf
and also riya so bad

i feel like crying,

it was amazing update
continue soonEdited by shrutisweety - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tina,

You are a very mischievous girl, for right now you have effectively cooked everyone's goose - Shaina's, Arjun's and of course Riya's - good and proper.

Shaina is going to have a very tough time with a fiance who might never again remember her or their love. Riya will be thrown into contact again with a Rathore whom she loves, and for whom she might well be a very charming new acquaintance for whom he just might develop a soft corner. And Arjun, knowing  that Riya loves Rathore, or at least thinks she does, and with Rathore unable to remember him or Shaina, is going to have the toughest time of all.  In short, a very nice pickle, and it promises well!

Shyamala Aunty

[QUOTE=haruhi26]

It feels that like you i'm getting addicted to writing this story

And there is a big surprise for many of you in this update😊

Hope you all will like it as you did for previous ones

Chapter 6


Edited by sashashyam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...sach mein kamal ka likha hai dear...and not only u who addicted to write on ariya but we all are addicted same to read ur update...

Thank you so much to write this update so soon...this is really a surprise for us...and second surprise is arjun stop riya to not to go...wow


And third surpise is rathore is consious now but lost his memory...omg...

Now everyone will help rathore to get his memory back...in this process ariyanis going to fall in love...wow...

Ab to mein aur bhi curious hoon aage ki update padhane ke liye...
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Posted: 11 years ago


toh abb Rathore
Shaina ko vul gaya...
kiya baat hain yrr..abb kiya hoga Shaina kaa???
Love ArjunRiya scene..update soon..wating for next part...

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful  update  dear!!!!!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome parts...read both together...
loved the entire emotional scene in the family, arjun's anger, shaina's arrival and Riya facing the family...
then her confessions to Arjun...loved everything
why no precap???

post soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
That was amazing ...
I loved it ...