OS: Jungle mein Mangal

                                              OS: Jungle mein Mangal

 

 

Guys this is my very 1^st OS were I have included all the buddies n even NM n JJ..so I hope u'll enjoy..

 

 

This OS is just my prediction for Mondays episode..

 

So the story so far is somewhat like this..

 

JJ has taken all the 8 junglees for a picnic n there he takes them for trecking n leave them in btwn the forest with just a letter. Now the jungles are lost and even separated @ KD-Kiya alag n baki log alag..so lets continue from here,

 

Kiya n KD reached the original spot where KD had req Samar to take care of the buddies bringing water with them

 

Kiya: (all excited) hey guys, look what we found! Guys???...juhi? panchi??

 

But no one responded back

 

Kiya: (got a bit scared) KD?

 

KD: hmm?

 

Kiya: sab kaha hai? Hum sahi jage to aaye hai na?

 

KD: hmm..jaga toh sahi hai…lekin baki sab kaha hai..mujhe koi idea nai hai..

 

Kiya: abh kya?

 

KD: intazar!!

 

Kiya: wat? (confusely)

 

KD: hum unsab ka yahi par wait karenge!

 

Kiya: alright!

 

KD went n sat on a rock followed by Kiya. But while sitting besides KD, Kiya's arm touched KD's n they stared at each other ("ishq wala love")

 

KD: (broke the stare)umm.woh..um..mein dekh k aata hu…Piddi aur sab kaha hai..tum yahi ruko!

 

Kiya: (almost jumped and catched KD's wrist) nai KD mein tumhe akeli jane nai dungi…its not safe..!

 

KD: (looked at her lovingly and smiled)

 

Kiya: tum plzzz math jao..yaha aake phir se bhet jao

 

KD assured her by putting his hand on hers but she didn't listened to himn made him sit besides her.

 

KD: abh khush? (teasingly)

 

Kiya: bahot!! (n cutely smiled)

 

KD too smiled n looked away

 

Here,

 

Juhi: OMG!! Samar kuch karo warna hum yahi phas jayenge!

 

Samar: Juhi sahiba, hum kya kar sakte hai? Hum khud hi itne confused hai..aap plz thodi der, bas thodi der chup rahiye!

 

Juhi: (pouted her lips)

 

Piddi: Samar bilkul sahi keh raha hai..jab se hum log kho gaye hai tab se tum (Juhi) sirf bak-bak kiye ja rahi ho!! (irrritatedly)

 

Juhi: (made o-shaped mouth n smacked Piddi)

 

Piddi: (made faces)

 

Panchi: (rolled her eyes) abh bas bhi karo guys!! (n looked at Juhi n Piddi)

 

Piddi: isse bol, isne mujhe mara!

 

Juhi: kyaaa?? Meine?? Tumne mujhe pehle taunt kiya..

 

Piddi: meine? Meine? Kuch bhi math bol pehle Sam

 

RV: (cuts Piddi's words) shut up!! Just stop it (angrily) Juhi, Piddi n u (Panchi) all of u, just keep quite!

 

Piddi: lekin mein toh

 

RV: (again cuts his words) quite!

 

Piddi: (kash is Ranveer k badle humare saath KD bhai hote..)

 

Samar: shukriya Ranveer saheb!!

 

RV: whatever! Bas jaldi se hum sab  yaha se nikal jaye yaar!!

 

N started to walk followed by the rest of the gang

 

Here,

 

It had been almost 2 hrs since the gang got separated

 

KD: (was tensed) kaha honge sab?

 

Kiya: don't worry sab aa jayenge…

 

KD: (smiled) hmm..(he looked around for the gang)

 

Kiya: umm..KD?

 

KD: hmm?? (didn't looked at her)

 

Kiya: m hungry!!

 

KD: (looked at her n offered her the banana that he had saved) ye lo..

 

Kiya: banana? (her face dropped)

 

KD: hmm..q, kya hua?

 

Kiya: umm..woh bag mein hai woh..(innocently pointed 2wards the bag)

 

KD: (looked at the bag n then at her) dekho Kiya, yeh khana uncle ne hum 8o k liye rakha hai, so if u don't mind sab aa jayenge tab ek saath khayenge..tum ye kela khalo na abhi k liye..

 

Kiya: ok! (smiled)

 

She made 2 pieces o the banana n offered one piece to KD

 

Kiya: here!!

 

KD: nai..tum khalo mujhe bhook nai hai..

 

Kiya: u sure?

 

KD: yeah!!

 

Kiya: ohk!! (and ate it)

 

Here,

 

Juhi: mujhe bahot bhook lagi hai!! (almost cried)

 

Panchi: bhook  toh mujhe bhi lagi hai..

 

Piddi: mujhe bhi!!

 

Samara: aur humein bhi!!

 

RV: c'mon guys, abh asa bolne se khana humare samne toh nai aane wala..so plzz just keep walking..

 

All made sad faces n kept walking

 

Panchi: yeh Nonu, kitna weird hai (to herself)

 

Piddi: sahi kahan

 

Panchi (shocked) huh??

 

Piddi: weird toh who hai hi..aur saath hi saath bahot bada kami

 

Piddi: (glared at him) kami kya?

 

Piddi: ku..kuch..kuch nai..arre woh nawab sahab mujhe bula rahe hai..aaa raha hu..(n ran)

 

Panchi: (sigh n shook her head)

 

Juhi: panchi! Jaldi chalo..

 

Panchi: hmm..(n started walking)

 

Now it was almost dark but still the gang didn't came, KD n Kiya were really tensed

 

KD: mujhe lagta hai, humein sach mein unhe dundhna (find) chahiye..

 

Kiya: lekin kse? Andhera ho raha hai, aur upar se humare pass toh torch bhi nai hai..agar hum dono bhi alag ho gaye toh? (scaredly)

 

KD: hmm..sahi keh rahi ho..lekin hum ase hi hatoh pe hath rakhe khade toh nai reh sakte na? humein kuch karna hoga..

 

Kiya: lekin kya?

 

KD: sochte hai..

 

Here, (Samar n RV had torch)

 

RV: kaha phas (trapped) gaye hai hum yaar!! Yeh sab us uncle k waje se ho raha hai..

 

Piddi: sahi kaha..agar who mere saamne aaya na toh mein us Jaietly ko gaad dunga mother promise!! (touching his throat)

 

Panchi: Piddi, tum rehene do!!

 

And suddenly Piddi heard some weird noise..

 

Piddi: tum..tum logon ne kuch  sunayi diya ..

 

Panchi: kya?

 

B4 Piddi could say anything this time again they heard growling sound

 

All the gang was petrified

 

Piddi actually climbed the near by tree

 

Juhi hugged Samar, Panchi started screaming n clutched RV's hand, who covered Panchi's mouth with his palm in order to calm her down..

 

Here,

 

KD had collected woods n had lighted it with fire..both KD n Kiya were sitting besides the campfire..

 

Kiya: tumneye acha kiya, waise bhi mujhe bahot thand lag rahi thi..

 

KD: hmm ab junglee janwar humare pass nai aayenge aur iss aag ko dekhte hi sab samajh jayenge k hum yahi par hai

 

Kiya: wat?? Wild animals?

 

KD: hmm..dont worry jab tak hum saath mein hai kuch nai hoga..ok?

 

Kiya: hmm..

 

Both smiled at each other

 

Here,

 

All were in same position

 

RV: shh!! Calm down moti..calm dwn!!

 

Panchi started to sweat badly

 

RV: (saw it) moti!! (he made her look at him)

 

Panchi: nonu mujhe bahot dar lag raha hai..

 

RV: panchi

 

Panchi: (started to cry) Oh God!!

 

RV: motii yaar!! (n took her in a friendly n protective hug)

 

Panchi; (hugged him tightly) nonu, promise me k tum mujhe chod kar nai jaoge..

 

RV: I promise moti! Abh shant ho jao..

 

Panchi: (still hugging him was still scared)

 

RV: (patted her head) its ok..hmm??

 

RV too was equally scared but to protect n to assure panchi his moti n BFF he acted brave..

 

Same was with Samar,

 

Samara: Juhi sahiba, shant ho jayiye!! Kuch nai hoga..

 

Juhi: nai!! (n hugged him more tightly)

 

Samar smiled at her childishness n he too patted her head caringly

 

N Piddi (was hugging the tree n panted badly) acha hai Bobby tu nai aayi..

 

Here,

 

KD had slept asking Kiya to sleep, Kiya was trying to sleep at the opp side of KD but in vain..

 

Suddenly she heard some noise n sensed that something was coming towards her n she got up in jerk n ran towards KD

 

Kiya: KD!! (scared)

 

KD: (who had just laid dwn , having all his attention on Kiya had already wakened up) kya hua?

 

Kiya: (caught his T-shirt in that condition) waha pe kuch hai..mere pass aa raha tha..(and tears formed in her eyes but b4 they could rolled dwn KD wiped them)

 

KD: Kiya, plzz rona band karo..(n cupped her face with both his palms)

 

Kiya: hmm..(still scared)

 

Again she heard some weird noise n hugged KD

 

Kiya: KD!!! (frightened n hugged KD tightly)

 

KD was shocked to death, didn't knew how to react, his heart for a sec skipped beating, he looked akward , he didn't touched her nor did he said anything

 

Kiya: (still hugging him) KD plzz save me..I don't wanna die..

 

KD: Kiya!! (n hugged her slightly) kuch nai hoga..you get that? (n made her face him)

 

Kiya looked in his brown eyes which were telling her to keep confidence n that nothing will happen to her..n then she nooded her head..

 

KD: ek kaam karte hai..tum yahi mere pass so jao..

 

Kiya: mujhe neendh nai aayeyi..

 

KD: umm..5in then..tumm..

 

Kiya: can I sit next to u?

 

KD: (without thinking much) yeah, sure!

 

Kiya almost sat close to him n encircled her hand in his arms n looked here n there to see if something was still coming close to her..

 

KD was seriously lost in Kiya this time (ishq wala love)

 

Here,

 

Panchi: (felt lil safe n opened her eyes only to find herself hugging RV n she broke the hug n awkwardly looked at him) m really sorry..woh mein ..

 

RV: (smiled) its ok!! (n kept looking at Panchi)

 

Juhi too had braked the hug n shyly thanked Samar

 

Samar was also shy, he just smiled n looked away while Juhi kept looking dwn bitting her lower lip

 

Samar: (saw Piddi hugging the tree n called him) Piddi saheb!! Niche aa jayiye!!

 

His voice made RaHi broke their stare n they looked at Piddi..

 

Piddi: haan, aa raha hu..(n jumped dwn)

 

RV: abhi mujhe lagta hai, hum almost poch hi gaye hai, ek saath chalet hai, toh kuch nai hoga!!

 

Panchi: Ranveer is right!!

 

N they all again started walking

 

Here,

 

Kiya had fallen asleeped on KD's shoulder..KD just kept staring at her lovingly n a smile came on his lips

 

Here,

 

Naina Maa (NM): Ani, bache abhi tak nai aaye..tum plzz jaakar un sab ko dhundo..(tensed)

 

JJ: NM, woh sab aa jayenge…don't worry!! I trust them!! Aap khana kha lijiye..

 

NM: bacho k bager khana gale se niche nai uttrega Ani, mein tent mein hi chali jati hu..(n left)

 

JJ: c'mon Jocker..u'll can do it!!

 

Here,

 

Aft walking n walking, Piddi saw something was shinging n there was even clear brightness some few steps ahead..he told everyone abt it n all ran towards the fire n atlast Piddi saw KD

 

Piddi: KD bhai!!

 

All looked at Piddi's direction n saw KD n Kiya n ran towards them..

 

Piddi: KD bhai!!!!

 

KD: Piddi???

 

Kiya too woke up n saw the closeness btwn KD n her n awkwardly saw at him..he just smiled at her n assured that its alright..she too smiled back at him n went near Juhi n Panchi..

 

All hugged each other (GROUP HUG)

 

RV: atlast!! (sigh)

 

Panchi: paani!!

 

Piddi: khana!!

 

KD gave Panchi water n Kiya removed the wafer packet along with 8 appels n 4 cucumbers..they all ate it n drank water..

 

Aft sometime the sky had almost brightened up, indicating all the buddies who were chatting abt the lost-n-found-journey with each other that the sun had raised it was morning now.. All got up n without fighting, together kept walking finding the clue JJ had left for them n 5inally all saw their tents n ran towards it

 

JJ: 5inally!!!! Jokers welcome back!! (grin)

 

All just glared at him n without replying him back enter their respective tents n dozed off.

 

 

JJ: (just smiled)

 

NM: congrats Ani..(smiled)

 

JJ: thanks NM!! Abh ye mere jungles Apha Plus Competition k liye perfectly ready hai!! (n proudly grinned)

 

                                                     THE END

 

I hope u guys liked it..plzzz do comment n hit the like button n plzz forgive me for any grammatical mistake...

 

hoep yesa hi ho RaHi ...wowww

This content was originally posted by: rocksravya11

hoep yesa hi ho RaHi ...wowww

omg omg omg just luved it awesome update as usual😊
just want more of kisha's closeness 😉                                                    lolzzz i m a total sucker of love scenes😳

This content was originally posted by: arhadlove

omg omg omg just luved it awesome update as usual😊
just want more of kisha's closeness 😉                                                    lolzzz i m a total sucker of love scenes😳

wow prfect assumption. loved it. loved the way you wrote it. hope this happens in tbp too. liked how everyone cared for each other. the way all three guys comforted their ladies and made them feel safe in their arms was just commadable. their hug was also pretty nice. thanks for pm and do write such os/ss/ff. u write really well😊👏

Awesome update.
KISHA, RAHI,and HIMA hug Awww

OMG THIS IS Your First OS? NO ways!!! THIS IS SOO PERFECT!! i mean i really think this will happen!!! Awesome OS!!! PLease write more in future !! <3 Edited by 100littledevils - 11 years ago

This was beyond amazing!! Felt like I was a episode of TBP...I love how u wrote the dialogues true to each character...Gr8 job!!!

This content was originally posted by: keshiya

wow prfect assumption. loved it. loved the way you wrote it. hope this happens in tbp too. liked how everyone cared for each other. the way all three guys comforted their ladies and made them feel safe in their arms was just commadable. their hug was also pretty nice. thanks for pm and do write such os/ss/ff. u write really well😊👏