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VirMan - Pyaar...Ek Junoon Ek Deewangi DISCONTINUED-Note pg.89 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting...
loved it...
waiting..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Guyz...i m back with another update...But before that
i would like to tell u thaatt.. 
I M SUPPPEEERRR HAPPPYYY at the response from u all...
When i opened IF..I was expecting very little...
But when i saw 6-7 pages of ONLY COMMENTS
I was Surprised like MAD...I was literally jumping and a wide smile was on my face while Reading all the comments...
Thank you sooo much guyz...Thank you soo much...
i m realllyyy happy with a huge AWESOME Response from  u all...
But i won't take a whole credit...one thing i must mention that is My sweetheart,my dearest Friend Samu(Samu_Khamkar) She is the girl behind this..i just had a lame concept in my mind...but she encouraged me to Make it to IF...And trusting her...i made this SS...and i got a very pleasured reward...
Samru..Thank you sooo much frnd...I Love You sooo much*hug*
i luv u alll People...luv u...luv u...
And Thank You all from the bottom of My Heart...
I Never knew this SS will get that grip within a day or 2..and it's all becuz of u all and my frnd samru
i will try my level best to not Disappoint u at any moment 
So after all my bakbak...
here i present the 
Very First Part of My Brand New SSPyaar...Ek Junoon Ek Deewangi 

Part 1

Introduction Part 

One Fine Morning in chandhigarh 
Vadhera's house,full on busy with the preparations for Viren's wedding
some are decorating the wall and some and setting the color curtains right...
Now Zoom to the Huge room
a guy messed up with his bedsheet,sleeping without wearing his shirt on his King size bed
he turns to other side when the sun rays falls on his face disturbing his sleep...
when he slowly opens his eyes,we can see his light brown ye lens...He rose up from his bed stretched his fully built 

arms... as flexes his neck the cracking sound occurs...then he ran his fingers through his thick spiky hair 
he gets up and walked towards the window,stands thr placing his hand on the eindow frame
Now we can see his face,as the wind caress his face,a Million dollar smile appears crosses his lips 
Virat : (His rhythmic voice) The Virat Singh Vadhera...back to Chandigarh...!!!
just then he heard a know at his door
he went and opened the door...he smiled seeing viren standing with a huge smile
Viren : Good morning mere bhaiii !!! (coming inside the room)
Virat : Good morning bhaii...(casually hugged him) 
Viren : toh virat...kaisa laga chandigarh ki hawa khaaker...
Virat : (completed the sentenced) kaafi time baad
Viren : arre ha...!!
Virat : waise aap batao bhai...kya chal raha hai ???(teasing way)
Viren : aaj Roka hai...
Virat : aurrr woh aaj aayengi...humaari..Pyaarisi...Jeevika bhaabhi !!(stretched her name)
Viren blushed
Virat : mujhe baad mein sata lena...pehle neeche chal...breakfast ka time ho raha hai...!! Dadaji neeche wait ker rahe 
hai...jaldi aa
Virat : bass abhi aaya...!!!
Viren : see u soon
Virat : u will see HER very soon(winked and teased again)
Viren : abbe chall...!! (viren left)
After getting freshen up...virat came down stairs and greeted everyone
at the dining table virat and dadaji talked about virat's business
the family was quite proud of Him...they felt he is changed...
Virat has grown and changed from that little stubborn,arrogant teenager to complete Matured,understanding,kind and 

patient man...BUT they all are wrong...
they can't see the REAL Virat..who is still the same !!!
...
in Chandigarh guest house 
zoom to the room whr She was sleeping peacefully
suddenly a sun rays falls on her face,just then jeevika turned to see her little cute sister's irritated sleeping face
she walked from the window towards manvi's bed...
Jeevika : mannu ??(trying to wake her up)
Manvi : diii...sone dona...plzz !!!! 
Jeevika : Mannu...tu kab se so rahi hai...!! uth ja na...
Manvi : (rose up and sat stretching her little arms) kya di...(yawn) aapki neend udh gayi toh kya doosro ko bhi sone nai 
dogi...??
Jeevika : (hits her arm playfully)
Subah uth te he apni bakwaas shuru kerdi ??? 
chal ab...beeji naashte ke liye wait ker rahi hai..
aur shaam ko Roka bhi hai na...
Manvi : (naughty smile and teasing her sis) Haa...haa...ab toh aapka humaare saat mann he nai lagta...
Jeevika : manvi...mujhe baad mein sataa lena..pehle jaldi fresh hoker table per aaja...
i m waiting !!!
jeevika left
...
The morning passes,afternoon too passes...AND now it's Night...
In Vadhera mansion 
VV Bros got ready just setting thr hair right
they both were in same room 
Viren : virat ek baat bata 
Virat : kya ?
Viren : main theek lag raha hu na ??
Virat : Bhaaiii not again...!!
Aap paanchvi(5th) baar yeh pooch rahe ho...!!!!!
Viren : yaaar...toh kya ho gaya...??  
Virat : bhai aap bass karo...aurchalo..chalo mere saat(dragged him out of the room)
they came down
Buaji : lo aagaye ye dono !!!
Vanshika : (smiled looking at her two young handsome sons)
Dadaji : toh der kis baat ki...chale..??
they left the vadhera mansion to Guest house 
...Soon they reached the guest house...
Beeji,chachu and pinky chachi gave a warm welcome to them
they came into the house
both the family greeted each other happily
viren was looking here and thr
Virat : (saw and teased him) thoda aur wait kerlo bhai...aapni better half aati he hogi...(whispered in his ear)
Viren : (elbowed him in his stomach) 
Just then beeji said
Bg : Lo...Jeevika aa gayyi...!!
VV Bros ogether looked up at the stair case

Jeevika and manvi coming down stairs
As Virat's gaze caught manvi...his eyes was glued on her from then...
he felt a sudden blow in his heart within him,his heart beat increased signaling him something 
he couldn't move his gaze any whr else...
manvi didn't even see him 
jeeman came down and walked
manvi walked from his front,still he was lost looking at her 
when she was passing from thr,her dupatta stuck in his watch
she was unaware of it,till she felt a tightening of her dupatta in her neck,
she turned with questioning eyes and was once lost in his light brown eyes and his charm was unresistant...

.but she looked down at her dupatta,and smiled helplessly...she hit her forehead playfully,as she thought he caught her 

dupatta purposely...Virat Lost completely in her beauty and innocence of hers...
She freed her dupatta from his watch and left stealing His heart unknowingly... 
leaving virat still in that same position,smiling and falling in Love COMPLETELY...
The and there itselt...he promised himself to get her in His Life as his Love...No matter What and no matter How..
He will get her...Means HE WILL by Hook or by Crook
...

Precap : Manvi came ALONE on terrace just reading a note for her to come on terrace...

Thats it...
Plz let me know how it was

Writer : sarah


Edited by princess_sara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
THANK YOU EVERY ONE...
Luv u lottssszzz...
Thank you againnn
Edited by princess_sara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!!!First chapter nd I was having goose bumps while reading this! this is gonna be a blow!!!!! nice one!! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eee...sarah u updt...so happy its mindblowing dear...simply awesome...perfect meeting..i cant imagine how will manvi react when she get to know about his feeling n his crazyness...OMG...this single thought gives me a goosebumps...goddd...
n any ways stop giving me any credit...i m not deserving for it...its ur concept n u develop it with ur own skill n style...so all creadit goes to u honey...u r like my lill sister, such a sweetheart...i m so happy for u sarah that ppl like ur writting...i feel proud...luv u a lot always...muwhhhEdited by samu_khamkar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is better than good it is great ...

please write only in english i cant understand everything :-(

continue soon and pm me pleaseee
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome start sarah...virman introduction scenes and virman's first meeting was very nice...i liked it...i just cant wait to read virat's junoon and deewangi for manvi...plz update next part asap...thank u so much for this ss and the pm dear...stay blessed always...
Edited by madhavichowdary - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome lovely update
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update... He saw and fell in love with her too... I really am curious...
Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg this was awesome...will be waiting for the next update eagerly
continue soon