Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

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Posted: 11 years ago
i read it in one go and it was awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART- 4
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MAANVI looked at him again and try to free her hand..virat wake up by her action..looked at her..
V- maanvi tum.. Mujhe jagaya kyu nahi? Kuch chahiye?..
Maanvi just looked at him..
V- maanvi tum thik ho?
M- mera hath...
V- kya?
M- mera hath..
She looked at their hand...virat understand it... He relive her hand..
V- oh.. I am sorry...
Virat looked other side...
For few second silent spreaded in room... Maanvi also feel some thing unusual feeling in her..
Finally she broke silent..
M- virat?
Virat looked at her..
V- haa..
M- tum yaha..? Matlab Di kaha hai?
V- woh..bhabhi yahi thi meine hi unhe ghar fresh hone k liye bhej diya.. 2 din se woh yahi thi to meine shocha ki unhe ghar bhej du..
M- achcha.. Vese ye tumne sahi kiya..
V- haa..tumhe kuch chahiye? Matlab..
M- haa woh mein yaha bahot bore ho rahi thi aur mujhe bhook bhi lagi hai...
She make cut face...virat smiled..
V- okey... Mein abhi aya..
Virat turned towards door..
M- kaha ja rahe ho?
Virat turned
v- bas abhi aya... And he smiled...
He left..
Maanvi smiled..
M- ise kya hua? Ab kya karne gaya hai?
After few minit virat entered in room..
M- kaha gaye the tum?
V- kahi nahi... Tum yaha bore ho rahi thi na? Ab chalo..
M- kaha?
Virat moved wheelchair near the bed..
V- pahele chalo to..
Maanvi smiled and try to stood but her leg hurts..
M- aahh...
Virat held her by shoulder...
V- aram se..
Maanvi looked at him... She looked in his eyes... They just looked in eachothers eyes...
Just then nurse entered ...
Maanvi broked eyes lock... Virat sit her on wheelchair..
Maanvi again feel some feeling exchange in her...
V- chale..?
Maanvi nodded...
Virat smiled...
Maanvi curiously..- hum kaha ja rahe hai? Kahi mujhe kahi kidnep to nahi kar rahe ho na? And smiled...
V- haa kuch asa hi samjo. He smiled...
Virat takes her in hospital garden.. She looked around.. Some old patient roaming their... Some children play their,nurse takes care of them... Virat moved towards small pound near the tree... He set the wheel chair near the table...maanvi smiled at looked at him...
M- thank u..
Virat gave smile..
V- abhi ek aur chiz hai..
He sign wardboy ... He came and plased tray on table..and left..
Maanvi looked at virat..
M- ye..
V- tumhe bhook lagi thi to...
Virat opened plates..
V- ye tumhari fauvrat coffee aur gobhi k parathe ... With light oil and spices.. Bcz Dr ne mana kiya hai..
Maanvi Ian shocked ...
M- tumhe ye sab kese pata? Aur tumne ye sab mere liye kiya?
Virat looked at her and seared her answer ...
M- virat kya?
V- woh..
Just then virika came...
J- woh meine bataya tha..
Virmaan turned towards them...
M- Di...
They hugged...
Vn-kesi aap sali saheba?
Maanvi smiled..
M- ek dum fit and fine...
All smiled...
They all four sited in garden for some time and then returned to room...
Viren and virat leave the room... Virat go home 4 fresh an up and viren go to police station for FIR..
Inspector told him that they can not take direct action on karan bcz they have no avidence.. Just maanvis statement helped him... Viren told abt virat by phone call and go home...
In hospital..
M- Di aap ne mujhe kaha tha ki aap mujhe mere bite is ek saal k bare me batayenge plz Di mujhe janna hai..
J- mannu asa kuch khas nahi hua ... Ha pr tere aur vadheras k bich me kafi understanding badhi hai.. Specially virat k sath...
Maanvi looked at her..
M- virat...
J- haa...
M-matlab?
J- matlab yahi ki tum ab kafi achche dost ban gaye the...tum apni sari problem ek dusare k sath share karte ho..
Jeevika continue... Maanvi looked at floor and try to remembering... Abt it..
Just then virat came...
Maanvi looked at him...
J- virat tu itni jaldi?
V- haa bhabhi woh actually ghar pr kuch karne k liye tha nahi to meine shocha ki yahi ajau.. Kyu ?
Maanvi smiled ...
They set in room...
After some time Dr entered.. Examined maanvi...
Dr- well u required very fast... Nice..
Maanvi smiled...
M- to kya mein ghar ja sakti hu..?
Virat and jeevika smiled...
Dr- ji... Mr vadhera ne mujse baat kr li hai hum aap ko aaj hi discharge de rahe hai lakin aap abhi puri tarah thik nahi hai so take rest..
Maanvi nodded...
M- achcha hua jiju ne mujhe free karva diya...
Dr- ji Mr viren ne nahi Mr virat vadhera ne aapka discharge karvaya hai...
Maanvi looked at him with confused looks..
J- thank u Dr..
Dr smiled and left...
M- tumne?
V- haa kyu? Tum ab thik ho ab sab ko hospital k chakkar lagvaogi kya?
M- tum kabhi nahi sudhrogi..
Virat smiled..
J- mannu mein Dr se mil kr ati hu.. Virat tum maanvi k pass ruko..She smiled him..
Virat nodded with smile..
Jeevika left..
V- ab muh mat fulao..Vese bhi tum gusse se jyada smile karte hua achchi lagti ho..
Maanvi looked at him..
M- Di bata rahi thi ki hum bahot achche dost ban gaye the..?
V- haa..Aur kya bataya bhabhi ne mere bare ma?
M- kuch khas nahi..vese tum ne music competition jitna hai right? To tumhe bahot kam hoga? Aur tum yaha apna time wast kar rahe ho..
Virat want to tell her that nothing is important for him than him...
He just smile..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
continue soon
want manvi to realise her love fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow lovely ,u r one of best writer in dis forum ..conti it fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is great, but pleasee write only in english i cant understand everything :-((

has manvi lost her memory???
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update plz pm me wn u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part dear
Virat awww how caring
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART- 5
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maanvi waited 4 his answer but no rpl...
M- are yar partner tum bar bar ye silent movie me kyu chale jato ho? Pahele to chup hi nahi hote the aur bate to tumhe pakau lagti thi na?...
Maanvi continu..but virat just looked at her..
V- kya kaha tumne?
M-kya?
V- sabse pahele tumne Jo kaha..
Maanvi looked him confusing ...
M- meine?
V- haa partner...virat smiled
Maanvi realized what she said..
M- meine asa kaha..i m sorry pata nahi kese..
V- nahi mujhe achcha laga.. Vese bhi hum partner hi to hai..tum mujhe partner bula sakti ho..
Maanvi just smiled...
M- okey..vese tumne bataya nahi..tum ne phir se music ko apna kese liye..? I mean tum to music k naam se bhi bhadak jate the..is ek saal mein asa kya ho gaya..
Virat looked ather and thought..
V-kya batau tumhe..chahta to hu ki tumhe sab bata du aur gale se laga lu..
M- virat...
Virat came out of his thought...
V-ha.. Woh hai ek angel Jo pahele meri partner bani phir meri best friend..jiski vajeh se mera passion mera music mujhe vapas mila..
Maanvi looked him..
M- kya?... Kon hai woh..?
Virat smiled..
V- idiot woh partner tum ho..
Maanvi was shocked..
M- mein.. Matlab tumne meri vajeh se music ko apnaya..
Virat noded..
M- achcha..pr ...
V- ab pr var chhodo.. Mein nurse ko bol deta hu wo Dr se baat karke tumhari bandaged change kr denge phir hum ghar chalenge..
Maanvi nodded..virat left...
After some time Dr checked maanvi and gave some precaution s to them for manvi and tell Them that they can leave now...
Viren came to receive maanvi...
In room..
M- jiju achcha hua aap aaj gaye..
V- kyu mein tumhe tumhe itna paka raha tha..
He made face.. Maanvi looked him and rolled her eyes...
M- oh.. Tum khudko na mere jiju se campair mat karo samje?...
Virika laghed..
Vn- achcha achcha ab tum dono lado mat Hume ghar bhi jana hai..
They nodded...
Maanvi stood up and try to walked but her leg little hurt so ...
V- maanvi ... Ruko mein madad kar deta hu..
M- nahi mein chal lungi..
J- mannu virat help kar raha hai na? Aur vese bhi hospital ki left bigad chuki hai..hume sidi se jana hoga..
Vn- haa sali saheba..
V- ab chale..
Virat rice his hand... Maanvi hold his hand..virat caught her shoulder..and star walking..maanvi looked at him..she even not feel pain... Virika looked at eachother and smiled..
Sidi k pass..
J-mannu tu sidi nahi utar payegi..
M- koi baat nahi jiju hai na meri help k liye..
Viren looked at virat..
Vn- nahi woh mere hath to full hai bags se..virat ek kam kar tu maanvi ko le aaj mein gadi nikalta hu.. Maanvi looked at virat... Virat nodded...and smiled.. Virika leaved..
M- jiju pr..
Virat take her his arm and stared walking...
Maanvi looked at him..he looks strata ...
M- virat kya kar raho ho? Mein chal lungi.. Virat..
V- maanvi tumhare pair me chot hai.. Aur Hume aaj hi ghar pahochana hai.. Thik hai to chup kar k raho..
M- virat pr Di dekhengi to kya kahengi.. Aur baki sab dekh rahe hai..
Virat looked at her..
V- to kya? Ek partner apne partner ki help kar raha hai aur kya? Mujhe kisi ki parvah nahi hai..kyu ki..
Maanvi just looked at him..
Vrat stop and he also looked at her..they reached on ground floor..
Maanvi looked away..
M- virat..
Virat looked away and stood her..
They set in car..
In their all 4 talked and maanvi again come in her normal tone..Virat looked at her by mirror.. Who sit with jeevika in behind..Thay reached home..vanshika takes arti of maanvi..and well come her.All members met her and jeevika takes her in room.
M- Di hum yaha kyu ja rahe hai? Gustroom to us taraf hai..
All looked at her..Virat looked at her..Viren plased his hand on virats shoulder..
J- haa..woh mein kuch aur soch rahi thi shayad isi liye..
Jeevika takes her in gust room..
Vn-sab thik ho jayega..
Virat nodded..
In room.
Maanvi set on bed
M- Di vese yaha kafi kuch badla badla sa lag raha hai?
J- haa kyuki tu ab is kamre mein nahi raheti na is liye..
Maanvi- matlab?
J- kuch nahi..Woh tu hospital mein rahi hai na is liye..ab tu aram kar mein dinner ki taiyari karti hu.. Kuch bhi chahiye to.
Just virat entered
V- virat ko bata dena.
J and m looked at him
M- tum?
V- haa mein wo meine shocha ki apne room mein bore hone se achcha mein yaha ajau.
J- bahot achcha kiya virat..Tum betho mein chaltihu..
Jeevika left..
Virat sit on bed..
Maanvi looked at him..
V- ase kya dekh rahi ho?
M- nahi mein soch rahi thi kuch to alag hai..Tum kafi badal gaye ho.. Tum hi nahi puri family..
V- aur tumhe asa kyu lagta hai?
M- pata nahi..
Just then shlok and dabbu entered..
Are tum log aao na..
S- woh hum aap k liye kuch layer hai
He gave her get well soon card..
Maanvi looked at it and smiled..
M- thank u
S- vese maanvi bhabhi aap jaldi thik ho jao phir Hume ludo bhi to khelna hai?
Virat looked at shlok..
Maanvi looked at shlok with shock..
M- bhabhi?
Then she looked at virat.
D- Di..Woh shlok ka kaheneka matlab ye hai ki aap thik ho jayengi phir wo aapke aur virat bhaiya k sath khelega..hena shlok?
S- haa..
They all three take deep breath
v- ab chalo jao,ise rest karne do..
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor virat...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update.❤️Poor Virat .feel bad for him.😭.waiting for the next update😊