Virmaan : after marriage-2 :Index on-31 : part-85 :Thread-1 !! - Page 3

Posted: 11 years ago
Great update I love it tht in every part Manvi and Virats relation progresses. And u update 2 times a day tht like ice cream with cherry topping :DDD Loving the story do continue soon!!! :DDD and PLSSS PM me
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
feeling bad for virat
continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
PART-6
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ITS AN WEEK NOW..MAANVI FEEL MUCH BATTER NOW..ALL TIME VIRAT ON HER SIDE..SHE LIKED IT..THEY AGAIN MADE BEST FRIENDS ..PARTNER..LIKE ALWAYS..VIRAT AND OTHER FAMILY MEMBERS ARE HAPPY TO SEE IT..ALL BANDAGES ARE REMOVED EXPECT HER HEAD..
IN MORNING..
Maanvi set in garden..virat came and sit near to her chair..
V- partner kya kar rahi ho? Matlab aaj koi special plan hai kya?
M- nahi kyu?
V- woh mein soch raha tha ki aaj mein apne album ki recording k liye ja raha hu tum chalogi?
Maanvi exited..
M- of course..vese bhi itne dino baad ghar se niklne ko mil raha hai..kab chalna hai?
V-abhi 1 hour me
M-okey..mein ready hoke ati hu..
V-maanvi?
Maanvi turned
M-haa
virat come near to her
V-woh..kya tum ye dress pahen sakti ho?
Virat gave her bag..maanvi take it..
M-ye..mere liye? Pr kyu?
V-woh bas ase hi..diwali k liye sab k liye kuch laya tha to..
M-achcha..pr agar mein abhi pahenlungi to diwali pr kya karungi?
Virat smiled..
V-uske liye dusri ajayegi..
Maanvi confused but she smiled..
M-okey..
She left..virat waited 4 her in hall..he told every one that he takes her for recording every one waited for her..just then maanvi came..all just looked at her..she wearing a purple and white anarkali shuit..all smile and they met every one and leave..
J-Mata rani mannu aur virat k bich sab pahele jesa ho raha hai..sab thik ho jaye..
In car..
Virat drived the car..maanvi set on passenger sit..suddenly...
M-virat car roko jaldi
virat stop the car..and looked at her...
V- maanvi kya hua? Tum thik ho? Maanvi?
M- virat paise do..
V-kya?
Maanvi rise her hand..
M-paise..
V-pr kyu?
He take out his purse..maanvi snatched it from him..
M-mein abhi ayi..
She open the door and runs towards shop..
V-maanvi?...
Virat just looked at her action..she came and set in car..virat looked at with confusion..
M-car star karo hum late ho jayenge..
Virat start car and drive..
V-pr kaha gai thi tum?
Manvi gave him his purse..and take deep breath..
M-tumhara purse..
Virat take it..
V-tum kya lene gai thi?
Maanvi rise her hand..virat looked it..it was cup of amul curd..and looked at her..
V-ye?
M-woh Di ne bataya tha ki ye tumhara pahela album hai,aur aaj uski paheli recording hai to is liye ye dahi..
Virat just smiled...and looked at her..
M-ab dekh rahe ho khao..
V- woh..mein drive kar raha hu to..tum khila do..
Virat make face..
Maanvi looked at him..first she hesitanting but then..
M-okey..but spoon nahi hai..
V-tumhare hath to hai..
M-kya? Nahi..
Virat looked front..he thought she did not do it..
Maanvi open pake and take curd and rise her hand towards him..
M- virat..
Virat looked at her and smiled..
Maanvi feed him..virats lips touched her finger..maanvi feel some action in her heart..she take back her hand and start cleaning her hand..she looked down..virat looked at her and smiled..he feel like its going in slow motion..
V-thanks..
Maanvi looked at him and smiled..she saw little bit on curd on his corner of lip..
She rise her hand and point towards his lips..
M-woh.. Tumhare muh pe..
Virat asked her by his head what?
She again try to sign him...
He looked in mirror..he understand..but he saw as he did not understand..he looked at her with confusing face..
Maanvi shook her head and finally she Rise her hand and wiped the curd from his lips..again maanvi feel something in her heart..both looked in eachothers eyes..her hand still on his face..suddenly they heared horn noice and they broke eyes lock..maanvi looked down and looked at her finger..
M-in mind- ye..mujhe kya ho gaya tha..Mein.. Maanvi tu pagal ho gai hai..kya soch rahi hai..she looked out of window..
Virat looked at her in between driving..
V-in mind-mein janta hu tum soch rahi ho..kuch vahi Jo tumne Mumbai me maheshus kiya tha..maanvi tum bhale sab kuch bhool jao pr humare pyar ko kese bhool paogi..wo humari har sas k sath badhta hi jata hai..
And he smile..
For some time in car silent spreaded..Finally..
V-maanvi?
Maanvi looked at him..
M- humm..
V- woh mein soch raha tha ki aaj recording k baad kahi bahar chalte hai..lunch pr aur baad me kuch shopping pr..
M-shopping ?
V-haa wo actually meine sab k liye shopping ki pr apne liye nahi kar paya,tum chalogi?
Maanvi first think then.
M- pr Di?
V- meine unse baat karli hai..aur vese bhi tum ghar Jake sabko pakao gi to achcha hai mujhe hi pakao..kyu?
Maanvi rolled her eyes..
M- kya kaha tumne? Mein pakati hu? Tum..Na..chodo..ab mein kuch bolungi hi nahi..
Virat looked at her..she is angry..
V-okey okey i m sorry..tum plz gussa mat ho..
Maanvi not looked at him..
V-i m sorry..baba ab gadi chalate waqt kan nahi pakd sakta..plz
maanvi looked at him..
M-okey
Virat smiled..
V- to tum chalogi?
M-dekhte hai..agar tum mujhe achcha khana khilao ge aur ice cream bhi tab.
Virat just smiled
V-okey fine
They reached at studio
V-maanvi hum pahoch gaye..chale?
Maanvi nodded with smile..
They entered in studio..virat saw her all studio and they entered in meine cabin..
Virat looked at manager then the lady who stood with him
v-maya?
Posted: 11 years ago
PART-7
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Virat was shocked to see her..maanvi looked at him then her..pavan the organizer stood with maya..he came near virat..
P-hello,Mr virat,aap bilkul sahi waqt pe aye hai..
Virat looked him..he ignore maya's presence..
V-hello..woh mein lyrics lene aya tha..rehsal k liye..
P-ji actually humare music director abhi aye nahi hai..aap yahi wait kijiye..woh bas pahochte hi honge..
Virat nodded..
P-oh im sorry mein aap ko inse milvana bhool gaya..mr vadhera ye hai miss maya humare music director ki assistant..yabhi aap k sath kam karengi..
Maya came front and moved her hand towards virat..
V- hai...and congress for winning..
Virat just looked at her..
She takes her hand back..
P-mein chalta hu..aap lyrics inse le lijiye ga jab tak music directors bhi aajayenge...
Virat nodded..
He left..
Virat looked at maya..maya turned towards maanvi..
My-hi maanvi..kesi ho..
Virat realized that maanvi also present there..
Maanvi smile..
M- mein thik hu..hum pahele mil chuke hai?
Maanvi looked at virat..
My-haa..mein..
Virat intruded...
V-maya tumse music competition me mili thi..
Maya looked at him..and smiled..
M-oh..
My- tumse milkar bahot khushi hui..
She hugged maanvi..virat narrowed his eyebrow...
V-in mind-maya ase kyu behave kr rahi hai?
Maanvi looked at him..he try to gave smile..
My-tum dono betho..mein abhi ati hu..
She walked towards door..maanvi came near to virat..maya turned..
My-vese maanvi tumhe bhi congress kahena tha..tumhare aur virat k liye..
And she gave evil smile..
Virat looked at her..she turned and leave the cabin..
Maanvi is shocked..
M-virat..maya ne asa kyu kaha? Mujhe kyu?
Virat looked at her..
V-maanvi woh to bas tumhe music competition k liye kahe rahi thi..
M-pr..
V-pr var chhodo tum yaha betho mein abhi ata hu..
M-tum kaha ja rahe ho?
V- bas music director MD kab tak ayenge bas puch k ata hu..tum aram se betho..
He set her on couch..
He left..maanvi thought abt maya's words..
Virat came out of room and search for maya he saw her in end of the corridor ..he walked towards her..
V-maya?
Maya turned..and smile..
My- mein janti thi tum jarur mujse milna chahoge..
V-tum yaha kya kr rahi ho? Aur meine yaha pahele hi inform kr diya tha ki koi bhi maanvi aur mere relation k bare mein baat nahi karega..phir tum..
My-relax virat..mujhe bhi aaj hi pata chala ki mein tumhare sath kam rahi hu..aur maanvi k bare me mujhe kuch pata nahi tha..mujhe abhi pavan ne bataya..
Virat looked at her..
V- don't be a over smart..agar maan..
Just then pavan came...
P-sir MD aa gaye hai Hume rehsal suru karni chahiye..
Virat nodded and they left...
In room-
virat practiced his song with MD..maanvi just looked at him..after some time they went in to recording room..they record first song..it is just title song so it not take more time..in between maanvi noticed mayas gaze on virat..she feel akward without unknown reason..
Virat came out of room and told her for leave..
Maanvi smiled and nodded..
They set in car..
M-virat aaj tumne bahot achcha gaya..asa lag raha tha ki ye gana sirf tumhare liye bana ho..
Virat smiled..
V-achcha?
M-bilkul..aur ab baki tarif pet pooja k baad..plz
v-okey..batao kaha chalogi ?
M- kahi bhi..
V-okey...
They reached in restorant..the same restorant where virat always came with maanvi after marriage..
They set on table..
Waiter came..
W- good afternoon mem, good afternoon sir..
They noded..
W-mem aapke liye wahi aapka favorite mannu le aau? Jo aap sir k sath har bar order karti hai..with only one plate..
Maanvi looked him with confusion...
Virat looked at them..
V-haa.. Tum vahi leao pr do plates..
W-pr sir..
V-just do it..
Waiter nodded and leave..
Virat looked at her
M-virat wo waiter..
V-woh kya hai hum age bhi yaha aa chuke hai..aur tum mujse naraz thi to mujhe bhooka rakhne k liye sirf 1 plate hi mangvai thi is liye..
Maanvi not convey but she did not want argue with him..Bcz she is very hungry..
After lunch they went to shopping..maanvi buy shirts and some clothes for virat..virat remebred when maanvi buy a shirt for him and told him to try..he feel same maanvi in front of him..maanvi also forget every thing and select best for him..
After shopping they came out
V-maanvi mein car lekar ata hu..
Virat left..maanvi stood in corner
One couple came..
Wife-are aap ithe?
Husband -haa tusi to singer ho..
Maanvi smiled
Wife-ji menu aap bahot achchi lagti ho..pr aap ne ye ke pehen k rakha hai ji? Aap to sadi...
Maanvi was confused
Husband-are chaddo ji..vese aap ne jese virat ko sapport kiya na menu bada changa laga ji..
Wife-aur ni to kya.
They laghed
W-har pati patni ko aap se kuch sikhna chahye..they laghed
Maanvi thought..ye kya bol rahe hai..mein..
She feel her head spinning..
virat saw couple talked with maanvi
Couple-vese Jab tusi unke gale lage the Hume humare din yaad..
They continu..
Virat came near them,he heared they talked abt competition
V- Hume jana hai
C-ye bhi itthe hai
Virat looked at maanvi who plased her hand on her head,she lost her balance,virat held her
Posted: 11 years ago
Both the updates were awesome.It has become more and more interestin.Waiting for the next update.😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ... Continue soon please.  
Posted: 11 years ago
read some prts lst nite.. ttly lvd it.
keep d gudwrk up n pm me

~sonal~
Posted: 11 years ago
back to back 2 update its wonderful
Update Soon
Posted: 11 years ago
manvi pregnant????????????????????????😉

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