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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 9

Zoya opens the door to her room and as she enters she sees her neat freak husband adjusting the creases of the bedsheet. "Aap rehne de main kar deti hoon.Aap thak gaye honge. Office ka kaam aur phir laut kar hum mazaar par gaye. Aapko bhook nahi lagi main kuch le aaoon. Neeche dinner laga deti hoon chal kar kha lijiye." Zoya said while straightening out the creases in the bedsheet. "Nahi main theek hoon. Mujhe bhook nahi hai. Main thoda kaam karna chahta hoon file par.." He stopped suddenly as he saw "Alla Miya What's wrong with him? Khullam khulla bol rahe hain ki.." look in Zoya's eyes as she profusely blushed. He went upto her and put an actual file in front of her. He turned while smiling and she smacked herself on the head.

Zoya changed into her night dress. She never dared to wear the night dress her NY friend gave her as a wedding night present. It was buried deep somewhere in her closet. She was sitting on the bed with her back against the head rest. She was looking here and there, rollin her eyes, moving her head and then touching her stomach. Asad was looking up from his file every now and then and observing her. "Zoya B aap jaakar kuch kha kyun nahi leti. Saaf saaf dikh raha hai ki aapko bhook lagi hai." " Allah Miya Aap mujhe kis kism ki biwi samajhte hain. Mere shauhar bhooken hain aur main khana khaaoon. Mujhe dojhak mein nahi jana." "Theek hai to aap mat khaiye. Mujhe bhook nahi hai." "Alla Miya aap kaise shauhar hain aapki biwi bhooki hai aur aap uska dil rakhne ke liye ek niwala nahi kha sakte."

"Uff!! Zoya B kitni filmi hain aap. Kitni nautanki karti hain. Pichle zindagi mein heroine thi kya? Ya iss zindagi mein heroine banne ka irada tha?" Asad smiles and looks up towards the ceiling. "Shukraan Allah aisa namoona banae ke liye aur meri zindagi mein aapne inke saath se mujhe nawaaza." Zoya pouted and threw a pillow in his direction. She missed her target. "Allah Miya Zoya B kis kism ki biwi hain aap Apne shauhar ko takiye se maarti hain." Asad teased her. "Coffee piyoonga chalega. Aap khana khana main aapko coffee ke saath company doonga." She has her dinner and he sips his coffee admiring her. The strength she had to smile and try to live life to the fullest even after being burderned with a tragic past. He was far better off than her. His father abandoned them but he had his ammi. He stopped living his life and never smiled.

They went upto their bedroom. Asad wanted to shower her with love after the painful revelation she had to go through to tell him the details of her past. He avoided the thought as she would be tired not physically but mentally. He wanted to take care of her not take advantage of her. He was standing near the window admiring the beauty of the night sky. He had seen the night sky many thousand times but never appreciated the beauty of it. Zoya and her love taught him to appreciate the beauty of such romantic things. She came and rested her head on his shoulders. He put his arm around her waist. They stood there for quite some time first gazing at the night sky and then gazing in each other's eyes.

Zoya took his hand and placed it on her heart and placed her hand on his heart. "We are home. Right here in each other's heart. Humaare guzre kal ki dardnaak parchaaiyaan hum apne ghar par kabhi nahi padne denge. Yahan jo mohabbat hai wo har pareshaani se door hai. Jo dard humne saha wo humaare bacch.." She stopped and looked down. "Humaare bacche kabhi nahi sahenge." He completed her sentence and lifted her face up with his free hand. To make the moment light he scanned her body and then looked at a small cushion on the sofa near the window. "Aap kitni moti ho jayengi tab dekhte hain." He picks up the cushion and places it on her tummy. "Main moti nahi houngi." She pouts. "Ek aurat jab ma banne waali hoti hai tab wo jitna zyaada weight put on kare wo utni zyaada khoobsooorat lagti hai. Mujhe yaad hai ammi Najma ke waqt bahut khoobsurat lagti thi. Main chahta hoon aap bhi ammi ki tarah khoobsurat lagen tab. Aap ammi ki tab ki tasveeren dekhna aap jaan jayengi ki main sach bol raha hoon." Asad smiled and had anticipation in his eyes for the day he would get the good news. Before the new could start the old had to be solved.

Asad and Zoya slept in each others arms. Zoya did not have the nightmare last night because she was in his arms the safest place for her in the entire universe. The next morning Asad got up with a mission in his mind. He would start to look for Zoya's past connections from today. He decided to call off all his meetings. Zoya woke up feeling fresh amd more importantly loved. Asad smiled at her and gave her a soft peck on her forehead."Aaj hum aapke beete hue kal ki talaash shuru karenge. Jab tak ye nahi hota main aur koi kaam nahi karoonga." Asad told her. "Nahi Khan Sahib aapka 'Lake View' project shuru hone waala hai aap us par concentrate kare. Hum fursat ke palon mein ye kaam karenge. Main nahi chahti ki aapka kaam suffer kare." Zoya replied.

"OK aadha din mera kaam, Aadha din humara kaam. Deal." "Deal." They shook on it. The deal was sealed with a kiss too. Asad got ready for the office and Zoya to go out with Ammi and Najma for some shopping for lunch with the siblings. The breakfast scene was as usual. Asad "the neat freak" was the topic of joking for the women of his house. He dropped them off at the mall and headed for the office. He was restless at the office even so he concentrated on his work as he had promised her. At the mall Dilshaad, Najma and Zoya enjoyed themselves. Zoya shopped for Asad as per his taste. She took a shirt for him as a gift for being the best husband. It was a lighter shade, little fun but sober enough for him to wear.

Najma and Dilshaad leave her at the mall after lunch and go to her college for a P.T.A meeting. Asad comes to the mall to pick her up as they had to go look for the skeletons of her past. Zoya wants to shop a little more for herself Asad complies. He is like any good husband who wants to save himself from the wrath of a wife who is refused shopping. He is standing outside the shop as it was for only women clothing. He is like that, there will be other women there. He did not want to make them feel incomfortable ACTUALLY he would feel uncomfortable. She was coming near the window every now and then with a new outfit. She bought what he liked. She dressed as per his taste now that she had experienced "ISHQ WALA LOVE". Someone softly touched Asad on his back. He turned to see Rashid and his dadi. Asad did not know how to react. He was angry on seeing Rashid but fine with dadi. Zoya would come back with another dress modeling for him. He had a major confused look on his face.

Zoya came to the window with a beautiful 'Anaarkali' dress in yellow color. She saw Dadi Rashid and Asad's reaction on seeing them. She had to fix it. Zoya and her antics begin. She quickly picked a single piece off shoulder dress and went to the window. She knocked on it to get Asad's attention. She got attention from all thre. She pointed at the dress and gave Asad a thumbs up. She raised her eyebrows. He was about to have a fit. Zoya came out of the shop and asked,"Kaise laga aapko wo dress. Main le loon na? Main abhi pehen sakti hoon baad mein kab mauka milega." She placed her hand on her tummy. Asad's eyes grew bigger. "Baki ka kahan hai?" "Baki ka? Itna hi hai. Nice na?" "Jab baki ka ban jaye tab khareed lijiyega." She took his Credit card and wanted to do a little happy dance. "Do chaar building aur construct karni padegi."  "Allah Miya What a kanjoos man." "Kanjoos? Itni shopping karwane ke baad bhi" They could go on but they soon became aware of their audience.

Asad gave her a stern look. He pressed his temple as if he was suffering from a minor migrane. Dadi and Rashid saw the way Asad behaved. He was very possessive and cutely strict with Zoya. "What is their relation?" They thought. Zoya winked and smiled at Asad. She turned and greeted their company. She left Asad there with them as he scratched his head. "Ye ladki mujhe fasa kar chali gayi. Ghar par dekh loonga. Aak raat ko nahi chodoonga." The last part he said aloud. Dadi and Rashid heard what he said. Rashid thought he needed to talk to his son about man ' woman relation and its boundaries prior to nikaah. It was not right for him to have that kind of relation with a girl prior to wedding. (Rashid Khan Sahib don't you think you are a little too late for that talk your son is in his late 20's) Rashid tried to talk with Asad but he bid them salaam and left to get Zoya.

Part 10 update later  Edited by chahat11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
i want to see rashid'S reaction when he gets to know about asya's wedding :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome and plz update next part as soon as possible
waiting eagerly for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
i love ur ff
plz cont soon
i can't wait more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love the part..specially shopping part..when he said that ..baaki part kahan hai..Lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read the ff...
amazing one...
cont soon...
and plzzz add me in your pm list...
thnx...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear
such an awesomist part
i just loved it
AsYa is sooo cute...they r talking about their kids lovely...
shopping n all superbbb...
loved when asad said "Ye
ladki mujhe fasa kar chali
gayi. Ghar par dekh
loonga. Aak raat ko nahi
chodoonga"
looking forward to read sibbling gettogether lunch n fun...
plzzz plzzz update next super soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey just read ur ff
its awesom ur fab writerl
love the way Asya became one
pls pls update soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update.
pleas continue soon.