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#WeSupportKSG AsYa FF First Touch Thread # 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
@chahat11-u really write very well...ASYA is so cute...continue it...😃
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Superb dear!!! Please continue soon! I'm getting really interested in this story! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
The parts were amazing :) really loved them.. :)
It was very soothing to see ASYA happy and content in their lives :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
i really enjoyed reading your posts ^^
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 10

Rashid was hurt by Asad's ignorance. He wanted desperately to have a relation with this son of his. Asad had a relation with his siblings but he did not have one with his father nor did he want one. That's what he reminded himself always. He was afraid to love Zoya as he thought he would turn out like Rashid. He hurt Zoya so much to keep her away from him. If it were not for his ammi's upbringing and Zoya's love he would have remained like a stone. He did not want to look back at his past. His family is his ammi, his siblings and his Zoya B.

Rashid sees Zoya and Asad leave from the mall hand in hand with love in their eyes. The same feeling he had when he was with Dilshaad filled his heart. He was happy for his son and the girl with him. He was worried about people finding out about their relation and judging them. Dadi told him to ask Dilshaad about it. Rashid was hurt that Dilshaad hid the fact from him that Asad has a girl in his life.

Asad reaches the car and bangs on it with his fist. Zoya holds his hand and says,"Aapko koi haq nahi mere Khan Sahib ko chot pahunchaane ka." He promises to try to control his anger. She was always scared to see him angry. He did not hurt others when he got angry instead he hurt himself. Whenever he saw or heard anything about Rashid he would go into the freeze mode. She had to work real hard to make him forget his painful past. She managed to bring a faint smile on his face.

Asad saw the worry on Zoya's face. He did not like it when Zoya saw him angry as he could not bear his pain. He decides to bring a smile on her face. Asad looks at her shopping bags. "Ye dukaane khuli kyun hai? Koi saamaan to bacha nahi hai. Hai na?" He teased Zoya and pulled her in his arms. He was about to kiss her on the forehead when she jerked him off on seeing Dadi and Rashid see them. "Allah Miya What's wrong with you? Thoda to sabar karein. Hum ghar hi jaa rahe hain. I am all yours." Dadi and Rashid hear that they live together.

Rashid decides to talk to Dilshaad about Asad and the girl. She had always been modern but to allow HIS son to have a live in relation she had gravely insulted him and his family. "Do I really have the HAQ to know about Asad's life and question Dilshaad about it", he wonders. He changed his mind and decided to ask Ayaan instead.

In the car Asad asks Zoya if she has anything they can use to investigate with the help of. Zoya said,"Haan kuch photo's hain aur kuch khat. Par dhudhle aur thode jale hue. Main jabse aayi hoon alag alag jagah pa dikhaye aur poocha par koi faayda nahi hua. Mujhe kuch pata nahi chala." "I am sorry aapne itni mushkilen akele jheli agar main pehle aapke yakeen karne ke kaabil ban pata toh aap mujhe zarroor batati aur main aapka saath de pata." There was sadness in his voice. "Arz kiya hai gaur farmaiyega

Der aaye durust aaye,

Der aaye durust aaye,

par jab aap aaye ,

kya khoob aaye "

"Wah Wah kya arz kiya hai Zoya B wah" Asad praised her theek thaak shayri. "Aap mera mazzak bana rahe hain" Zoya complained. "Nahi aapki tareef kar raha hoon. Sangat ka kya asar hua hai aappar kya khoob shayri karne lagi hain aap." Asad patted himselfon the back. They knew how to lighten their mood when times got tough. Times were about to get real tough.

Edited by chahat11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved all the parts

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part deat
loved it so much
loved how asad n zoya both r understand each other feeling
plz plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww loved it.. Wonderful part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update dear! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice concept...love how baffled Rashid & his family are...

Asad showing his feeling is a nice turn around...Zoya has indeed played a big part in it...

can't wait to read abt Z's past...

-Sona