FF: The Tempest, chapter 11 - Epilogue, p 32 - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
very nice concept looking forward for next part

Posted: 11 years ago
Oh I will soo read this soon, Swasthi!

Stratford upon Avon---me likes a dose of Shakespeare! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Swasthi๐Ÿ‘
An interesting opening chapter. Your knowledge of London is beautifully woven through the story๐Ÿ˜ƒ
A nice setting and Ahem and Gopi are to be married. It is interesting that Ahem does not yet know the name of the girl he is supposed to marry. Wonder why..
Jigar seems to be our jolly Jigar again and Gopi the timid yet different from Gopi we know in SNS. It is great to see that the cousins work for a good cause.

Both Ahem and Gopi have found something that connects them. For Gopi, she was thinking of Ahem as her future husband but Ahem has no such inkling. What will the day lead to?๐Ÿ˜›

Will await the next part eagerly๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by dipsy80


i love it swasthi!๐Ÿ‘eagerly waiting for the next update!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
      
My sentiments exactly ... pls pls continue this
Posted: 11 years ago

lovely start. sns in london. wow!๐Ÿ˜Š

update soon.

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Xarina


Lovely start Swasthi.  Like the concept.  Keep going.๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks Xarina. Will be updating soon.
Posted: 11 years ago
Swasthi this is an amazing start!!1
You've definitely drawn me in and it is really intriguing to see Gopi and Ahem in a London setting. 
This chapter ended way too quick but at least they've met in the first chapter in your FF unlike in someone else's who does not need to be named!!!๐Ÿ˜†

Love it and I really cannot wait to read the next chapter!! Love the settings and the title is very atmospheric!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome start Swasthi. very different and nice story. Looking forward to read more. Continue soon...
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by nilani19


Brilliant FF
Want  more๐Ÿ˜›

Thanks Nilani.

More on its way.
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by scarlet167


Lovely one swasthi ๐Ÿ‘..want more pl ๐Ÿ˜Š

My pleasure Scarlet.

More coming soon.

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