Originally posted by: -SweetEtika-YOU ARE BACK DII.. ๐I Just Can't Express *in words ,, How beautifully you portrait the feelings and the Whole scene.. .. It Is So Touching And Emmotonal.. i have tears in my eyes.. i can't wait for next update now..
Originally posted by: luvsakshiHayeee you back woth new FF sheethal ..Thank you so much for concidering the request ..
Im just lil bit confused with the first part ,i know you will clear it in next update ...
Its just a pain of a mother who lost her baby ,You potryed so beautifully and these lines are pierced me tooo .."You can't touch me mumma I don't exist."
"Please baby, don't punish me like this."
sooo lived and fantastic update ..waiting for more ..Thank you ..
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Originally posted by: _CandyCream_Yay!! Sheetal di you're back! ๐ค Missed reading your FFs..
Loved the start!! Awesomely written!(as usual!๐)
Wonder how you can make it so interesting in the first part itself!๐
Can't wait for the next part!!
Originally posted by: sss283hi sheetal back
That was a grandstand entry dear...๐
my heart was beating so fast...phew !!!
you do know how to make one's heart race...
that was spectacular opening
poor priya...whats wrong with her...๐ญ
Originally posted by: RaYaKapoorWowie... Sheetal... U r back...well... The hatke story looks really hatke... Eager for more... Please try n be regular...
Originally posted by: balhfan4everHi Sheetal! Welcome back...missed your FF's here. Very gripping start...and obviously I can't get enough. Do update soon.
Originally posted by: ramsakshiroxxxwhoa drama queen is back
hmm starting with separation n problems will wait for next part first prt is very confusing update next part soonn again welcome back sheetal
Originally posted by: kaparikh1Hey that was really a great start...I have read ur other FFs too, but was a silent reader...But u write so nice...I love ur FFs...Plzz continue soon...Plz do PM me when update, if possible...
Thanks,Krutika.
Originally posted by: Alya1991nice update waiting for next update...so please update soon...
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