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YUVREEN FF:REMEMBER ME!(part 2 updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
pls do continue...sounds like a very good idea...i actually like ur character sketch better thhan the show

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Posted: 11 years ago
                                           PROLOGUE




It was the day were all the couples were having their time of their life. The day where They were able to express  their feelings and love towards their loved ones.  This day was commonly called  valentines day. This was a special day for lovers but for someone this day was just like another common day. This person was none other than Yuvraj he was  watching the couples having the time of their lives. He looked at them with a sinking feeling as today he wud have been with his girlfriend and also enjoying. Thinking about her he felt broken. He couldn't help but fink of his previous valentine's party with her, how happy,how sweet,most importantly how much in love they were. He couldn't help but to go in d past.

FLASHBACK

"happy valentines day to the most beautiful girl that I love"

"aww fnx! Happy valentines day to u 2"

Yuvraj gave her bouquet of red roses and kissed her cheeks.

"thank you"

"hmm welcome wer is my gift?"

"gift! Am with u is it not enough?"

"no!"

"oh!"

"relax! Wat counts is dat we are together and most importantly in love! So let's live this moment!"

"hmm u are right"

"dance?"

"sure"

He held her hand and took her to the dance floor and a beautiful song was playing in d background(tera hone laga hun).[See dis video of MJHT n imagine saJan or the couple in red n white as yuvreen] .http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KCsThpHhhzg

They were swaying to the music wen Yuvraj slowly whispered in her ears

"I love u suvreen"

"I love u 2 yuvraj"

He kissed her and they continued swaying to the music without bothering of d future.

END OF FLASHBACK

Yuvraj felt really helpless he whispered under his breath


"plz wapas ajao suvreen! i'm not able to live without u! meri koi galti nahin thi! plz come back i really love u!"With this tears rolled down his eyes.


guys plz give us ur feedbacks πŸ˜Š



 

Edited by bhavnah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: maria_rox14

pls do continue...sounds like a very good idea...i actually like ur character sketch better thhan the show

hey thnx prolouge is here...do read
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: hotncold

kab update karoge??

updatedπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sahashrabdidash

gud work bhavu diπŸ‘


thanx dear... well u also contributed πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: bhavnah


thanx dear... well u also contributed πŸ˜‰

thnx😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is nice...continue pls!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh crap!!..maine comment hi nahi kiya abhi tak!!...sorry sorry

Well itna pyaara yuvi agar show mein dikha de...toh isko sab gadha gadha bolna bandh kardenge πŸ˜† and thanks for clearing my doubts bunny πŸ˜‰..loved your update πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked the character sketch and also the update ,its really very good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all really sorry for the late reply...I am really sorry..!!...awesome story lineπŸ‘...seriosuly waiting for more...pls continue soon...!!!! πŸ˜ƒ