FF-Essence of the Unnamed Love-newthread link pg19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi every one .This is my third FF on this forum.

Here are the remaining two

The Kiss

Love for the Unknown

The companionship of love(OS)

This is totally different FF.

The story came into my mind a few years ago.But I thought to share with you.

People say that if you even forget about doing something,it gets stored in your subconscious mind.

I must have read/saw this somewhere and forgot that I did so.Because I know I don't have such great mind to think about this.

So,I apologize you if it resembles any FF/OS/story/film.

Please don't hesitate to inform me.

As I told it is fully reverse to that what is happening in the show.

A spoiled brat,arrogant rich Madhu and RK,who brings a change in her.

I'm sure that you won't like it at all.

I won't give any cs,bcoz RK enters suddenly and his identity is a mystery.

You will get to know when the FF proceeds.

If you like this idea,give your valuable comments and if u like it,I'll update the post within half-an-hour(short one).

Bouquets and brickbats all are welcome.😃

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I thank everyone who helped for this one's name.

Dona di,

Pooja akka

Tanu akka

Priya2000, for helping me in naming it

My special thanks to Sharu,Shreya (smdosi) for standing with me and helping me in this journey.

Guys I'm very happy to say that this FF is a collaboration work of me and Shreya.

You see ,she is a great writer.

You might have read her work-

Unfaithful Love

I'm really happy that you'll get wonderful updates from her .😃(atleast you'll be saved from my poor skills)

and here is the name for this FF.😃

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Ok guys here goes the short prologue-

Please give your valuable feedback😊

Prologue:

The cool winter morning.Even the sun is shivering of cold.

But he thought to wake her up.

His rays reached the room through the window.She does not close the curtains of the room.She looks the adjacent house through this window.

It is better to call it a small house instead of room.

She took off the blanket from her face stretched out her hands and let out a yawn.

She rubbed her eyes and opened her beautiful eyes.

"Haaah,noo,another day."

She let out a sigh.

Why??

Madhubala Malik,the richest girl in India ,Daughter of the second leading business magnet in the world.

She is described as the richest because the chid of the first leading business magnet is not a girl.

She loves to make fun of everyone.

She is so arrogant.

Her beauty and her riches always compete with each other.

Yes,she is rich in wealth and beauty also.

The most beautiful and mesmerizing girl.

More than 90% of her college are behind her always ,praising her either of wealth or of her beauty or even both.

She never cared the rest 10% who are against her.

You guessed right.She is a college going girl.

Then why did she let out this sigh of despair?

The above mentioned Madhubala Malik is the one known to world.But what about the inner one?

The inner Madhubala,who is not known to anyone is completely different.

Shamsher Malik and Padmini are her parents.

They are not with her her first birthday.

They,to take care of their business left for abroad,leaving her in their ancestral house(better to say-palace)

They did not turn up till now.She knows them only through news channels and their photos which were taken when they were together.

They even don't have time to talk to her atleast once in a year.

The most pitiable thing is they are not together.No,they are not separated from their marriage relation.They are living in two different countries.But still they are wife and husband.

Padmini lives in America and Shamsher in London.

They themselves don't have time to meet or even talk atlest once for a year.They contact each other only on business affairs.

'Why the hell then they were together that day which resulted in me?',she always questioned herself.

She made herself arrogant to save herself from this pain.

She is very kind at heart.

She always looks through the window into the next house,where a little kid stays with his parents.

She knows how the parents' love looks like only by looking at their house.

She knows that all who are around her show fake love only because of her wealth.

Will she never find true love in her mind??

Infact What is LOVE???

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter updates:

1-page 5

2-page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello,

Here is the PM list.

I made this only for my convenience that it will bw easy for me to sort between my other FFs.

Sorry if I had missed any one's name.

Please post in the thread if you want me to PM.

PM list

--Udhay--

dona86

Alice18

geetsweet

PristineSoul

shinseen

arunsunita_gm

lovebirdsmaneet

ForeverForU

SwagataPanja

deepak148

SAnonymous

anushka2112

Desire6

anjaliipkknd

prava55663

ronniecarter

satyaj

paras99

aroran

rocking-girl123

Thank You so much for your support🤗

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Diya Sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

I read your FF-"The Kiss". I liked it. it's very interesting update)) please continue your FF.

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Udhay only

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Ravz.. The other two FFs were really interesting and I'm eagerly looking forward to ur updates for them.. Now the Idea u have for ur 3rd FF is equally interesting.. I'm excited to see a rich, arrogant Madhu and a simple Rishab.! Wow the idea is super good.. :) Please go ahead with it and PM me the updates..! :) Thanks.! Edited by --Udhay-- - 11 years ago

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