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Suvika.
Suvika. @Suvika. IF-Stunnerz
Visit Streak 365 0 Anniversary 11 + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
great start Anu ...but whats this?? Nidhi se shaadi se pehle Ashu aur Mallika ka SR hogaya!!!  Oh My!! thats ok i guess...at least Ashu here is experienced..

I only hope this Amar doesn't turn negative...and you made ROhan as Nidhi's dewar!!! yaar!!! 
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karajekar
karajekar @karajekar IF-Dazzler Inactive
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by turags


great start Anu ...but whats this?? Nidhi se shaadi se pehle Ashu aur Mallika ka SR hogaya!!!  Oh My!! thats ok i guess...at least Ashu here is experienced..

I only hope this Amar doesn't turn negative...and you made ROhan as Nidhi's dewar!!! yaar!!! 


kya yaar thoda sa toh amar ka haq banta hai negative hone ka

bechare ka dil jo tutgaya hai 😆 😆 😆

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Suvika.
Suvika. @Suvika. IF-Stunnerz
Visit Streak 365 0 Anniversary 11 + 7
Posted: 11 years ago


kya yaar thoda sa toh amar ka haq banta hai negative hone ka

bechare ka dil jo tutgaya hai 😆 😆 😆

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Sonali, Mallu hain na negativity dikhaane...why add Amar to it?? Amar can become Dev D 😉😆
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karajekar
karajekar @karajekar IF-Dazzler Inactive
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by turags




kya yaar thoda sa toh amar ka haq banta hai negative hone ka

bechare ka dil jo tutgaya hai 😆 😆 😆



Sonali, Mallu hain na negativity dikhaane...why add Amar to it?? Amar can become Dev D 😉😆
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amar ke khilaf mein aur kuch nahi keh paungi kyunki abhi tak amar ke advacate (deba)

ne ff padha nahi hai ,isliye itna shanti hai warna pata nahi woh kitna royegi amar ka dil tutne par

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
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bc123456
bc123456 @bc123456 IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Great start felt sorry for Nidhi, ashutosh, and amar life plays games you end up in a situation never imagining it , waiting for further
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Anjani9
Anjani9 @Anjani9 IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 6 Commentator 1
Posted: 11 years ago
Whatever you write will be great...there is no doubt...
You have 3 FFs in W-I-P and why you want to go for new FF???
The gap between updates will be huge and it will make us mad with the wait...
If you ask me to rate and rank, this FF will be last and other FFs stand on top...
From the first chapter, this does not look as promising as other ones...may be going forward, this may lead...
Waiting for update for DC...
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hilarious44
hilarious44 @hilarious44 Goldie
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Hmmm...👏.
So this sounds like a very very interesting track Anu..😛.
GREAT chapter..👏..
Wonderful start...😃.
Thinking of ashu-mallika n nidhi-amar or rohan relation always gives me...🤢🤢🤢...
Was relieved to read that mallika ran away...Ashni can stay as ashni😳...Thank God..😆
 
Ashu-nidhi teasing part was really sweet.😳...
Ashu-mallu love story...so there were in a physical relation han😉...i hope mallika isnt pregnant😉...
Ashu keeping his calm n supporting the family was SUPERB...👍🏼
His concern for CV was wonderful..👏.
Nidhi reaction n her conviction to save her family's grace...WOW...👏.
Poor nidhi...felt bad how mallika had overshadowed her...Would be great to see how ashu builds up her self confidence...😳
Ashu-Nidhi convo...very very nice.😳..
DB...as usual...loved her love for nidhi...😳
 
So amar turns a villian...COOL😆...would be interesting to see how is he gonna take it...
Rohan as Dewar ji😉...Hmmm..😆
 
Tooo much scope for drama, romance, thrill...WOW...
Needless to stay that it was very very well written..👏👏.
Again beautiful lines n very very smooth flow of words...👏
 
U ROCK sweety...🤗
 
 
 
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shah1485
shah1485 @shah1485 Senior Member
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow you are just fabulous  ye jho chori chori chupke chupke wale bhaat was so nice and true.
What a mind you have to create all this dear you should actually try to find a director,producer and start your own Tv Serial aur hum sab ko tora kaam dehdo naa😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Libra
Anu @Libra IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by karajekar



superb chap 👏

again with a new concept , bechara amar kitna pain mein tha ,sirf ek simple line se

you perfectly showed his pain ,now its new journey for ashni

kya ashu ko amar ke baare mein kabhi pata chalega

will wait for next chap

kab karne wale ho yeh bhi zara bata dena 😊


sonali

Hi Sonali
I  am really glad you liked the new concept.
Ashu ko Amar ke baare mein zaroor pataa chalega.
Nidhi batayegi.  She is very honest.😃
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Libra
Anu @Libra IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by ruchshah


Interesting concept...somewhat based on the movie Aayna...staring Juhi chawla-Jackie shroff??

Anyways...i seem to like this premise a lot...how Nidhi is been completely shadowed over by Mallika...n how ashu will instill a confidence streak in her...👍🏼
Would love to read further...
hope Amar doesnot create too much tension in future...
Ashu-Nidhi dynamics will be worth reading on the basis of this chapter...👏👏
Thanks for the PM...please continue soon!!

Glad you liked the new concept. 😃 It is a bit like Aaina, but only in the beginning.
Later it will digress.
Amar will create tension, but not in the way you think. 
It will be a surprise.😳
And the dynamics between them shuold be great. they are starting out as friends.
Ashutosh already knows her, and she knows and trusts him.😳
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