HUM HO GAYE AAPKE Chap6 parts 1&2 updtd 2/25 pg84 - Page 3

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra

Hi Sonali
I am really glad you liked the new concept.
Ashu ko Amar ke baare mein zaroor pataa chalega.
Nidhi batayegi. She is very honest.😃

and will Ashu tell her that he has slept with Mallika?...

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
Plz update soon...my previous comment was after a cursory glance...read it fully now...

How far have Amar and Nidhi gone? did they share a physical relationship like Ashu and mallu?

wondering what made Mallu leave...couldn't be just cold feet...

Want to see how this story pans out...

P.S Update your surrogacy ff soon😳

Thanx Vidhishaa.

Mallu did leave because of cold feet, but there is also something else. You guys will find out in the next 3-4 chapters. She is not going to be negative here, at least not all theway. Maybe for a tiny bit.

And Ashutosh and mallika were physical. They have been together for a long time, and are mature. but Nidhi is very young. She and Amar have not done the Naughty. She is pure.😆

The Surrogacy FF is my next stop. DOnt know when though.😳

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26
Lots of scope in this plot.I wonder how u manage 4 different FF so well at a time. Hats off to u. 😊

thanx for the lovely compliment Rajani.😳

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: turags
great start Anu ...but whats this?? Nidhi se shaadi se pehle Ashu aur Mallika ka SR hogaya!!! Oh My!! thats ok i guess...at least Ashu here is experienced..
Thanx Turags. And Ashutosh and mallika have been intimate. they have been together for years, and are mature adults, who both seemingly wanted the same things in life and had decided to wait to get married. But baaki urges toh hoti hi hain na.😳😆

I only hope this Amar doesn't turn negative...and you made ROhan as Nidhi's dewar!!! yaar!!!

And rohan Dewar ke saath saath Nidhi ka best friend bhi hoyega. He will be like a pillar of strength and support for her. After all who should understand her better than someone of her own age. At least for starters.😃

Edited by Libra - 11 years ago

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karajekar

kya yaar thoda sa toh amar ka haq banta hai negative hone ka

bechare ka dil jo tutgaya hai 😆 😆 😆

Ab Amar negative hoga ke nahin time will tell. he will be back for a while yet.

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

kya yaar thoda sa toh amar ka haq banta hai negative hone ka

bechare ka dil jo tutgaya hai 😆 😆 😆

Sonali, Mallu hain na negativity dikhaane...why add Amar to it?? Amar can become Dev D 😉😆

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Have no idea who Dev D is.😕

But meri Ff mein Mallu will not be negative.😆

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karajekar

Sonali, Mallu hain na negativity dikhaane...why add Amar to it?? Amar can become Dev D 😉😆

amar ke khilaf mein aur kuch nahi keh paungi kyunki abhi tak amar ke advacate (deba)

ne ff padha nahi hai ,isliye itna shanti hai warna pata nahi woh kitna royegi amar ka dil tutne par

😆

Deba does not read my FFs. Toh mujhe pitne ka koi darr nahin hain.😆

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bc123456
Great start felt sorry for Nidhi, ashutosh, and amar life plays games you end up in a situation never imagining it , waiting for further

Thanx Doc. Glad you liked the Concept.😃

And yes you never know when life throws you a curve ball.😃

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ruchshah

@ruchshah

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra

Glad you liked the new concept. 😃 It is a bit like Aaina, but only in the beginning.
Later it will digress.
Amar will create tension, but not in the way you think.
It will be a surprise.😳
And the dynamics between them shuold be great. they are starting out as friends.
Ashutosh already knows her, and she knows and trusts him.😳

Indeed it would be a good beginning point...where Ashu n Nidhi are friends already,...This i believe is the USP of this story...cause friendship lets you share a comfort zone 😃😃 n Nidhi is already candid n teasing Ashu...

will eagerly wiat 4 an update to this one!

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Ena

@Ena292

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

I have some qstn. 1. Mallu nidhi ko pasand nehi karti? 2.mallu ashu se really pyaar karte hain? 3.ashni k rishte ka reason pata chalne k bad bhi amar negetive rahega?

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