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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks.. 
about your comment... well tough guy... for sure.. 
well the left parts.. wait and see..😳

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Kunchu,

Nice and neat so far, and the introduction of an encounter specialist is intriguing, to say the least. He can bump off the creeps that are guilty beyond doubt of vile crimes that cannot be proven in court by Rathore and Arjun!

But encounter specialists are usually very tough guys, and arrogant to boot, a description that fits Arjun as well. So how are the two going to co-exist and co-operate? As they say, let us wait and watch!

Shyamala B.Cowsik

PS: Dost badi hi haseen hai.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg dear...i really want to read more...
Plz add me to your pm list na...i'm actually out...but i really want to read more...

Waiting dear...
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice CS :)
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Kunchu,



PS: Dost badi hi haseen hai.

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Posted: 11 years ago

 Thanks for waiting for my first update..

so here comes the first chapter..

hope you all like it...😳


YAROON ... DOSTI...BADI HI HASEEN HAI..!!

CHAPTER 1:

It was a tiring day in ETF. The team was working on a tough case from previous day. At the end of  the day they were successful in solving the case. It was almost 11 pm.

Riya, Shree and Chotu were inside the files completing the paper work. "are yaar.. I am so tired.."  Shree said yawning and stretching out.

Riya smiled at him. She knew Shree had a tough day. He had to hack into a laptop that had belonged to a mastermind criminal who had used some special way to encrypt his messages before sending those codes to the ETF. The team was getting some anonymous messages from previous day morning, it was all in codes. Shree mentioned it was some software generated code. Arjun and Rathod had given him a hard time with those. It took more than the usual time to crack it up.

 And when he did it, he got the best compliment of his life from Arjun. "good job Shree.. really good job'" it made his day.😳 Riya was so happy to see her friend so happy yesterday.

  "thode aaram karlo Shree.. ye hum dheklenge'" she said to Shree who was rubbing his eyes.

"nahi Riya.. mujhe patha hai ki sub tired hai.. its ok.. lets complete it.."

"its ok Shree' tum ghar ja sakte ho' " Arjun said as he came in. He had seen Riya's concern for Shree. And Shree looked tired too. 

Shree was a bit shocked at his concern. "its..its ok sir..I can manage'"

"jaise tumhare marzi.. ab kal ye math kehna ke aaram karne keliye time nahi mila'" he looked at him and went away.

 "are ye Sir ko samachna namumkin hai.. one second he was concerned. Next moment he is back.. wow' kya aadmi hai ye.." Shree was still in shock. Riya smiled at him.😆

Rathod had received a call from his superior. He was happy about the news. But after a second he couldn't help himself from thinking.. "kal jab wo dono milege.. thab kya hoga'?" he stood thinking for a while and went back to his team.

 The trio were there. "Shree' kaam khatham hogaye hai kya?"

"almost finishing sir' bas thode or.'" they could see a bit worry in their chief's face. "everything alright Sir?"

"ha.. sab teekh hai.. Rawte kaha hai?"

"wo chale gaye Sir"

"ok' ek news hai.. kal se hamare team me ek naye member join jar rahe hai..ACP Raj Malhotra.. encounter specialist.. so lets see you all tomorrow. Raat bohot hogaye hai.. you can finish it tomorrow' good night." He went out.

"yaar.. kya hua sabko?? Sab hampe ithne pyaar kyu baras rahi hai?" Shree was confused.😳

"patha nahi.. par Sir kuch pareshan lag rahe hai.. I hope wo ACP Raj teekh takh ho.." Riya said.

"ha yaar.. ab ek aur khadoos ko sambhalne mushkil hi nahi.. namumkin hai.." Chotu said. They laughed at this. And after 5 minutes, they went home. 


PRECAP:

Raj's introduction.. 

"Raj.. tum yaha..?" Arjun shocked..😲


hope you all liked it... comments please..😳


CHAPTER 2: PAGE 7

Edited by kunchu - 11 years ago
Annathomas thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked it...😊 So Raj has some past with Arjun. Sounds interesting. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey that was awesome..
waiting for Raj's entry..
hope he is a positive character..

well start..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..:) continue soon..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
Great start ...
Awww Shree got a compliment from Arjun ...n he's so happy ...
Lol yeah everyone is showering their love on them ... 
Plz update soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice start...jus like hw ETF usd to b... bt it was too short...nxt time mk it looong... frm Rathores reaction nd precap its clear Arjun nd Raj hv sum past... waiting for story to unfold... update soon...