Originally posted by: Sweety1234556Amazing!!! Read all the four parts in one go,don't know how I missed them!!
But then,they wre superb! Absolutely loved them!!
I'm glad to hear that π
Originally posted by: Sweety1234556Amazing!!! Read all the four parts in one go,don't know how I missed them!!
But then,they wre superb! Absolutely loved them!!
I'm glad to hear that π
Originally posted by: Kays94i cant tell you how happy i was when i saw your pm!!!!
loved both the parts and plz plz plz update soon πcant wait to read more π
Thank u
And now I promise that I'll update the next part in two days.
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He was shocked to see Jeevika lying on the floor motionless. Viren rushed to her.
V: Jeevs, kia hua? Ankhe kolo. Jeevika Jeevika.
V thought: Yeh to behose hogai. He lift her and took her to the hospital. The doctor did her check up and came to Viren.
Dc: Are you her husband.
V: Yes
Dc: I wanna talk to you. Please come in my cabin. They went in the cabin.
V: Doc. is everything ok?
Dc: Viren don't worry everything is fine but if u won't take care care of her things might get wrong. I think ur wife is taking some stress, which is not right, this is not good for the baby.
V: Okay Doc I'll take care of that. Can i meet her.
Dc: Yh sure.
Viren went to her room. He sat on the steel stool near her bed and thake her hand in his hands and kissed it. Just then Jeevika woke up.
J: I m sorry.
V: Sorry for what?
J: Meri wajha se tumhe itna...
Viren put his finger on her lips.
V: Tumhari wajha se kuch nahi hua, so there is no need to say sorry. Aur wahse bhi ajj jo kuch hua wo iss liye hua kiun ke hamara baby hamye yaad dila raha tha ke mein bhi hu. Kal se hum sirf apni batoo mein lage hue teh na iss liye :p
Jeevika giggled. V: I love you
J: I love you too and hugged him. Just then the doctor entered the room.
Dc: So Mrs Vadhra how do u feel.
J: I'm much better now
Dc: Thats good so know u can go to ur house then. Mr Viren there are some vitamins u have have to give her. And I'll make the discharge papers ready u come and sign them.
Viren: Okay doc.
And they both go out of the room. Jeevika put her hand on her belly.
J: Sorry baby, Mama forgot about u,Mamas really bad but u know what u got the best dad who loves u more then anyone else. And u know what I think he gonna love you more than I'll do but that does not mean Mama don't love u. She loves u alot and is waiting for u to come in this world. I love u :*
Just then Viren comes and takes her to the car. So Miss Jee, opps abb toh app Mrs ho gayi hai na. Haan toh Mrs Jeevika Vadhera kiya Khana pasand karye gi app?
J: Italian (With a big cute smile)
V: Okay madam so here we go. So he started the car.
Okay guys it's a very bakwas type and small update. I hope u like it. And I don't think u guys like my story thats why there are very less comments. So if u want me to continue so start commenting guys.
I will just make my comment nowπ It was brilliant π Continue soon pleaseπ Thanks for the pmπ
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