jeannie aur juju os:-a cindrella story (last pt updated/pg 10)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai guys, iam new in this jaj forum. Iam a big big big fan of giaa. And i really like her in her jeannie look. But u know guys in our place SAB channel is not available. I really miss this serial. But i dont forget to read written episodes.
Ok guys. This is my first attempt to write a os about jaj. And guys this is completly different from this show. And in my story the main characters is a girl named giaa, a young man named vicky, his gf priya (but vicky dont have any feelings for her) & jeannie. And foregive me 4 my grammer mistakes.

Chapter 1

A small house in a beautiful village. A lovely , bubley , innocent girl lived in this house named giaa. All members of her family like her very much & all the people of village too. She has a pure heart. And she is very happy to help others. She is fall in love on her neighbour named vicky. Bur he dont know about her feelings.

One day, morning
Giaa is going to her morning walk.
Vicky:-good morning giaa
Giaa(she is very happy to seeing vicky) 😛:-good morning vicky. How r u?
Vicky:-iam fine. Can i join with u in morning walk?
Giaa(she is super happy):-ofcourse
They continued their walking. Suddenly a stone hit giaas leg. She is going to fall. But vicky hold her on her waist & save her from falling.
Giaa:- 😳
Vicky:- r u ok?
Giaa:-yes, thank u
Vicky:-i think v want to go back
Giaa:-yes
She trying to walk. But she cant. Vicky carry her in his arms. Giaa looked him surprizingly.

Ok guys here it is . U guys like it? Please tell me. Can i continue? Please comment. If u guys dont like tell me that, i dont continue this.
Bye...bye...guysEdited by silpasivan - 11 years ago

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navyab thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
How dare you not write further after such a nice start & keeping us glued to it...😡
 
 
So please continue ...pls 😛 
thala thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
a hearty welcome to the forum dear and coming to your os  it is a beautiful start . fantastcic job please do continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice
pls do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing start cant wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice start ðŸ˜Š
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heyyy plz plz continue shilpa ji
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Posted: 11 years ago
Welcome dear...its vry nice plz continue it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai guys,
Iam here to say sorry guys.
bcoz i cant update part2 now. 😭
Bcoz my university exam is on going. So i cant .
Guys but i must continue after two weeks. Now i want to concentrate on my stodies.
Forgive me guys.
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Posted: 11 years ago
all the best silpa . will wait for your next part