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FF - Charu, the nightmare...Ends! - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 7

Clang. Cling. CLANG.
Charu puts down the spoon she was holding making a rukus noise purposely😕 to the  surprise of GW😉, "Ena pesureinga nu therinjithan pesureingala? Enum maralaya😲? Enum poiyathan vazhureingala😳? Manasatchi illa🤓? Epdi oru pacha kolantheiya alichitanu santhosham padureinga🤢? Ippo puriyuthu ethuku ava apdi oru mudivu eduthanu. Modhala intha veeta vitu veliya ponga😲😆.Enaku avuroda santhosham matum than mukiyam😲😕." 
All this while Charu was busy cooking and speaking with her back to GW and Thulasi🥱.
GW is totally surprised, not realizing how to react and looks around😆, and finds Thulasi listening to all this from the kitchen door😈. 
She shows a guilty feeling on her face. Thulasi looks at her with a triumphant look on her face, making it all clear to her that no one can forgive her and give her another chance except Thulasi😎. 
Charu turns with a bowl in her hands and smiles seeing Thulasi😕. 
Thulasi looks at Charu and is back in 'Thulasi' mode😡. Charu, "Ethuku angaiya nikira? Ithu un veedu😕😆. Kadavungala ula vita ipdi than😕😉" looking at GW sarcastically😛. GW looks down in shame🤢. Thulasi is speechless not knowing how to react😆. 
Charu to GW, "Enum veliya pola🤣? Ponga!"and pushes her out of the kitchen and GW falls forward😲. 
Thulasi holds her in time🤢. GW and Thulasi look at each other's eyes with love🤓..chi chi...something...not able to explain...😛
Charu, "Va Thulasi!" and holds her by her hand and makes her sit in a chair in the hall. GW looks dumbstruck as Charu feeds Thulasi with homemade sweet milk pudding with assorted nuts and saffron shreds😳...


Scene shifts to Tamil hitting his foot against a pavement in anger😲. 
A mechanic is working on his bike🤔.
Tamil, "Enum evalo nerum agum?" The mechanic, "Ippo mudinjirum annai!" Tamil looks around frustrated. Suddenly he changes his expression to a surprised look because far away in the Thendral park, he sees Praba comforting a crying Suchi ðŸ˜²ðŸ¤¢ðŸ˜¡. He is about to hurry forward. The mechanic, "Annai vandi ready😕." After a moment of dilemma, Tamil takes his bike and heads towards his house, looking back at the park for a moment😳...



Scene shifts to Kalyani praying in a temple, "...Kadavulai Mohan a epdiyavuthu kapathirunga. Enuma nan avara paka matein, pesa matein😡. Avur enga irunthalum nala irutha pothum🥱..." The priest comes with the blessing tray. Kalayani takes it, controlling her tears all along. She walks steadily back to the hospital. She enters the particular ward and is about to enter the room when the nurse stops her, "Illa ippo eni avura pakka mudiyathu. Periya doctor treatment panitu irukaru." The nurse notices the disappointment in her face and notices the vibuthi. Nurse, "Kudunga nan poi vechu udurein. Kavala padatheinga elam seri airum" Kalyani gives to her and looks into the room through the closed glass door. She turns to go, vowing never to meet him again😳...


12/12/12 Turn of events?😈 or is it that I'm evil?😛
Thodarum...
To end soon...😉

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Part 8

The nurse comes out of the room and notices Kalyani leaving. She goes to her, "Nilu ma!"
Kalyani stops and runs forward towards the nurse, "Avaruku epdi iruku?" with tears.
Nurse, "Yaru ma avuru un purushana? Illa nee ketika poravara?"
Kalayani looks at her shocked at the question. The nurse takes her by hand and takes her inside the room.
Mohan is alright now. He is taking rest with his eyes closed.
Doctor, "Intha patient name ena? Mohan thena?" inquiringly to Kalyani.
Kalyani nods yes trying to avoid looking at Mohan. He further asks, "And nenga Kalayani thena?" looking at the examination pad which has got the details of the blood donor. Mohan shrugs at the mention of her name. The doctor and Kalyani notice it. He is trying to open his eyes, he slowly murmurs, "Ka...lya...ni..."

Doctor gives an understable look, "Your husband is alright...enum 2 days la discharge panni kutitu poirulam. Fees a receptionla ketirunga." and he leaves. Kalyani to the nurse, "Na ivar oda manaivi illa." and turns to go out. Nurse, "Panam ketanumnu sonna odana purushan illaya? Seri ketika poravaru thena?" Kalyani a little annoyed now nods no. Nurse puzzled, "Appo unga rendu perukum ena samanthan?" Kalyani keeps silent. Nurse, "Rendu perum paka nala jodiya irukireinga. Vazhura vazhuka oru thadavathan. Athula ein manasuku poiya vazhanum? Nee ivara kadhalikira gratha nee thudicha thudipilai enaku therinjipochu. Enaikum ethuvena nadakalam..." looking at the hurt Mohan and Kalyani also looks at him, "...Nalla iruma..." She blesses her and leaves the place. Kalyani stands there not knowing what to do. Mohan, still eyes closed, murmurs, "Kal..yanii...I..love..you..." Kalyani turns to look at him. Everything that happened in their life comes before her eyes. She cries hardly and goes and sits next to him in the bed and takes his hand,  which has a saline needle. Her eye drops fall on his hand and Mohan jerks. She kisses his hand, "I love you Mohan. Una vitutu engayum poga matein" Mohan slowly opens his eyes, "Kal..yani?" He looks around, not recognising the hospital and wondering why he is there. But he smiles seeing Kalyani sitting next to him...what else does he want?


Praba is patting Suchi's shoulders, "Elam seri aiyurum."A voice, "Ama elam seri aiyurum" from behind Praba. Both of them turn to find Deepa standing there, smiling. Deepa, "Kavala padatha Suchi elam seri aiyurum" she turns to Praba, "Einga ivangala ethuku ipdi parkla kuptu pesitu irukeinga? Oru restaurant o illa nama veetuko poi pesalam la?" sliding her arm into his and then turns to Suchi, "Ena Suchi? Epdi iruka? Sorry oru edathuku nanga poganum. Enoru nalu meet panalam. Veetuku vanga. Porumai ya ukanthu pesalam." turns to Praba, "Polama?" Praba nods, not knowing how to react and they walk away leaving Suchi there, holding hands. When they are out of Suchi's eye distance, still in the park, Deepa bends down and picks up a stick and starts beating Praba. Praba jumps in pain. Praba, "Yei!" and runs around with Deepa chasing him. Praba out of breath leans on a tree and holds the stick. Praba, "Niruthu!" Deepa, "En ta ethavuthu maraika try pannuneinga avalothan." puts down the stick and stands there with crossed hands, annoyed. Praba, "Sorry, Deepa. Nee epdi react pannuvanu theriyala." Deepa, "Ippo theriyuthula" and turns to go. Praba holds her hand and pulls her, she turns and falls on him (slow motion). Praba, "I m sorry. Enuma ipdi ethuvum nada kathu.", holds her chin and makes her look at him, he repeats, "I m sorry" both of them looking at each other's eyes. Deepa finally smiles.


Tamil reaches home frantically, "Amma. Amma.." and comes in and looks astonished to see Charu feeding Thulasi. Tamil, "Thulasi!" Both of them get up. Charu smiles, "Vanthutein gala? Ippo kuda telly pathy work avuthu! Nan enga irupeinu correct a guess panniteinga." Tamil looks at her annoyed and moves towards Thulasi and stands in between Thulasi and Charu defending Thulasi. Tamil, "Charu..ithu nalathu..." Charu interupts, "Oru nimisham. Nan solluratha kelunga. Ippo kuda sollurein. Antha kolantheiya kalaikathinga. Nan Thulasi ya nalapadiya pathukirein. Antha kolantha porakirathu veraikum nan inga than iruka porein. Unga amma epdi yum Thulasiku torture kuduthutu than irupanga. Oru pathu masam nan inga than irupein." Everyone looks at her speechless. Charu, "Ena Thulasi ninutu irukira? Ukaru. Nan poi sapda ethavuthu seingu eduthutu varien." Tamil and Thulasi look at eachother speechless.

"NO!" Tamil opens his eyes and sees that he is still in the hospital, after he had sent Thulasi into the operation theatre, "Illa enaku ena kolantha venum." (mindvoice)Charu ala entha prechanaiyum enga rendu veru kula vara kudathu and he gets up and turns around only to see Thulasi out of the theatre not wanting to do the surgery. Rest is sequel😉


Konjam over mokkaiyo? Sorry! I promise a better FF next time😛!

The End!

Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
relieved after reading that it is a dream!
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hahaha Gisel ellam dream ah??? ðŸ˜† But it was niceee, but why? Charu really might wished to take care of Thuls ðŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry am late
wow gisel...unimaginable twist...
superb
waiting for your next ff😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lol Gisel nice surprise ending I liked it!  Omg Charu staying with TT looking after Tulasi...I'm trying to picture that.