Originally posted by MelodiousDreams
Such a beautiful update, Indu!
The conversation about Mishti's dream palace and the tower, the sense of familiarity, the unexpected shock at the end when Palak's conversation with Ansh's mumma reveals the sound of Yash's Mishti's voice...Oh, I loved reading this, although I felt I got to the end far too quickly!
One thing that I simply have to quote now:
"Hello Palak!! How was your day, beta? Had fun? Oh, you are on phone...finish your call first, OK?"
I love how Aarti/Mishti's maternal warmth has already enveloped Palak. There's a mutual fondness between them that is so heartwarming!
*Reserved*
@Borna: Oh...my friend...I waited for this for so long...and it was worth the wait. Even a few words by you relieves me...Something like, "OK Indu! You are doing fine with the present writing.😳 Thank you so much.
Yash is close...very close now...So far he took all the clues as coincidences or a whiff of his imagination...but now...maybe now...he'll realize that suddenly he is being deluged with coincidences. The moment the Why will arise in his mind, he'll go after the How.
Mishti finds the presence of the palace difficult to comprehend...so not only does she leave early but also doesn't bring herself to enter it. She can't understand how Yash can make a mausoleum out of her wish when he is still married!!! That's a very confused Mishti who went home. Let's see what the morrow brings to her...!!😃
