Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 6

I think I need to draw a chart in my head to connect all these relationships. But I think this is a beautiful story. A light into Arti's past if you will? Loved the detailing of the story!

nice update

Amazing update! Honestly, my head was reeling! 😆 But I re-read and it's clearer now!

Wow !!!!!!

OMG it's so beautiful that it brought tears to my eyes...Wonderful work Indu..At first I was like hmmm who is this Mishti coming between Yash and Aarti but you made it all perfect. Do continue and update soon..

@Saf: Thank you.🤗


@Angel: Thanks. Did I confuse you there? 😕


@Miti: Thank you.🤗



@Vanny: Thanks, my friend.🤗 Were the characterizations not clear? Please ask me if something bothers you.😊


@Gcluv: Thanks, pal. 🤗

@Sheema: Aww...thanks, dear friend. That means so much.🤗



OK...let me chart this out. Following is the list of characters so far:

• Yash Scindia
• Mishti/Aarti Sharma (now Dubey)
• Aarti Sharma (now Mrs Aarti Aman Dubey)
• Aman Dubey (Aarti's husband)
• Ansh (Aarti and Aman's son)
  
• Babuji (Mr Satyendra Dubey/Aman's father)
• Prashant Dubey (Satyendra's (dead) brother's son/Aman's cousin)
  

Edited by InduG64 - 11 years ago

This is a very beautiful update Indu.

A very beautiful update and so touchy... Love is such a deep feeling that it touches the other one's heart and understands every small feeling😳.

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

This is a very beautiful update Indu.

 You have an Art of Writing Stories that Touch Core of the Heart. Your updates make me read them again and again.

 Congratualtions for your excellent work Indu

@SAnonymous: Thanks, dear friend. That has to be one of the sweetest and the most encouraging compliments I have received. 🤗

That was a beautiful update Indu 👏❤️