Guzaarish:Request Iqbal Neha os

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Posted: 11 years ago
Guzaarish:Request

I dedicate this OS to Palika (aroramaina).She wanted me to write a FF on Iqbal Neha.But I could manage to present only this OS to her in Iqbal Neha version.


Yug reached home very late.
Y:My God!Today is our wedding anniversary and because of my work I reached very late.Tamanna will be very angry with me now.She will shout at me.Oh!
He entered their room.
It was dark.
Y:My God!Tamanna has already slept.In the morning when she gets up she willl be so angry with me.
Suddenly he heard her voice:How can I get angry with you on our wedding anniversary Yug?
He saw candle light.He could view her lovely face.
They both smiled at each other.

T:Chahoon bhi to main kaise kahun
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai

keh rahi hai kya ye suno
meri khamoshiyaan
raat se hain lambi kahin
dil ki ye daastan
kaise kahoon


She said in her mind:My heart is filled up with my love for you.I want to express my love through beautiful words.But how can I convey everything to you.Words are not enough to express my love for you.So listen to my silence.It depicts the beauty of our love.

He smiled.She smiled.Her eyes were sparkling.
She said in her mind:When I see you I become so shy that I cannot speak anything.So look at my eyes and understand the emotions I have hidden.

K:Tumse mujhe ye kehna tha
o kehna tha humdum
ho saamne to kya kahun
kya kehna tha humdum
kaise ye jazbaat hain
is dil mein to din raat hain
hoton pe kyun aane se ye sharmaate hain
aankhon mein kyun ye har ghadi aa jaate hain


(She rounded him with her soft romantic dance movements.Her hair was also dancing.Her hair strands fell on his face).

He smelled her fragrance.She closed her eyes.


K:Chahoon bhi to main kaise kahun
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai

He stood very close to her.She moved away slowly and rhythmically.

K:Aa aa aa...

Suddenly because of the wind the candle light was blown and the room became dark.

Suddenly candle light was seen.Tamanna turned back.She saw Yug near the lit candles.He was looking at her deeply.



She felt that his eyes spoke a lot silently like her's.
His eyes spoke:Why should we struggle hard to express our love?Our hearts beat at the same time.So just listen to the silent heart beat.We feel the love,emotions,feelings,dreams we have for each other.Night is not for speaking out our love.It is for expressing our love silently.

She saw pure love in his eyes stored for her.

He was singing for her:
hum kyun kahein jo unkahi ek baat hai jaanam
dhadkan kahe dhadkan sune wo raat hai jaanam
dil bole bin, hain bolte
sab raaz hain, ye kholte
jab khwaab hain, jazbaat hain, ehsaas hai
to kehna kya, to sunna kya, hum paas hain..


She looked at him unbelievingly.




He came closer to her and pulled her towards him.They shared a passionate eye lock.

Y:Chahoon bhi to main kaise
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai




He took her in his arms and caressed her hair.

keh rahi hain kya ye suno
meri khamoshiyaan
raat se hain lambi kahin
dil ki ye daastan
kaise kahoon(Force)


He carried her to their romantic heaven.


The next day Yug took Tamanna to a restaurant.


Y:How is my surprise?


T:Cool.


Y:Yesterday I could'nt surprise you.But today I want to complete our wedding anniversary celebration.


She smiled.


The waiter served them food.


Tamanna ate a bit.


T:Yuck….what did you order Yug?


This is not a surprise.This is a shock.Good thing that yesterday you did'nt bring me here.Otherwise our wedding anniversary would have been spoiled.


Y:Come on Tamanna…don't come to a conclusion so soon.


This is something I ordered for myself.Your food will come now.


T:Really?


The waiter served her food.


T:Roti and paneer?Wow!Thank you Yug.


She started eating like crazy.


Yug became happy seeing her happy.


They reached home.Immediately she vomited.


Yug became upset:What happened Tamanna?The food did'nt go well with your body I guess.Oh!I should not have taken you to the restaurant.You ate too much.


Tamanna smiled.It was a naughty smile.


T:It's not because of the food.


Y:Then?


She was shy:We are going to be parents.


Yug was surprised:Really?Then why did'nt you tell me?


T:Today morning only it got confirmed.When I got the result itself I wanted to share this happiness with you.But when you reached home itself you asked me to get ready fast to go to the restaurant.So I did'nt get a chance to tell you.


Y:No problem as you gave me the most wonderful news.


T:What will you give me for giving you a happy news?


He smiled embracing her from behind.

Y:Wait for that sweet moment darling.

She smiled:Ok…dying hard to see your sweet surprise.

Y:I know.

He went out and brought a lot of jalebies for her.


T:Wow!You are the sweetest hubby in this world.


Y:You decide whether I am sweet or not after I feed you.


He started feeding her jalebies with his hand.


Y:Did I feed you well?


T:Of course.


Y:How do you know?


T:Because the jalebies had a special taste.


They both giggled.Tamanna fed him jalebies with her hand.


Unknowingly their eyes got stuck up to each other's.A long passionate eye lock.

Kaisa ye pyar hai………………….

He said in his mind:Tamanna...I have a request.Be with me always.Only you can tolerate the crazy Yug.
Her eyes replied:I will be with you always.Promise.Because i love my crazy Yug.


The end

Posted: 11 years ago
Wow its so cute and romantic.Love it.I can very well imagining these scences.Love the song ,Its really suited on them.Thank u so much Jasmine.
Edited by aroramaina - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Very refreshing OS.Love their talks.So romantic,
Posted: 11 years ago
interesting and cute but whts an OS i dont know but whatever it is really liked it alot
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