YADEIN... COMPLETED - Page 59

Posted: 11 years ago
It was awesom dr ,
each scence of fightinggg r cominggg in front of my eyes,
so finaly sik chep is finish,
hop now ariya life hs no problem,
n waiting for ur new begninggg n wish u a happy new year Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Di me dancing!!!!!
dhinka chika dhinka chika re...!!
ur choti is too happy!!
finally siki to gya!!!

Maza aa gya chotu aur shree ne bi apne haath saaf kr liye us siki par wow!!!!!
arjun dialogues too emotional..
Hope arjun is fine hoga hi jab tak aap ho hehe!!
grt
excellent
superb
wow
fab
amazing..
koi aur wrd rh gya to aap add kr lena lol..
claps!!Edited by Payal_156 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
oh finialy sik is dead
so gud
but arjun is unconsious
precap seems intersting
continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing dear 

A very happy new year to u 2
Finally i caught wid last 3 chapters ,...

Loved reading 

Finally sikander died ...YIPEE


Yayyy

dancing in joy ,...i so wanted to know how u will kill him in d story after i read roshni waale chapters

Waiting for more
Posted: 11 years ago
kunchu :


do you even have an idea of what you have written ? the entire scene of the face-off, of arjun being beaten by sikandar first and then arjun avenging him next when he came to know that riya's safe .. the range of emotions that you have brought out in everyone till the moment when an unconsious arjun collapsed on the floor has left me speechless as i tried to visualize the scene in front of my eyes ..it's sheer brilliance that you could pen down such a crucial scene like this ..now i want to see the same in the show too. well done !!๐Ÿ‘
Posted: 11 years ago
wow mindblowing encounter tha!! felt really bad for arjun at firs.. but its okay.. update soon... wanna see good things from now on!! n happy new year!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by Queen.Bee - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
hi kunchu what an heart touching update yaar...u know jiske saath yeh sab hota hai na woh kud poori zindagi toot kar jeeta hai but still always want to protect other from the concequences...yehi to life hai...but in sabme sabse zyaada hurt bhi wahi hota hai but god is always thereto see everything and only unconditional love caren affection can fill the blank space...kya yaar ๐Ÿค—aage emotional nahi happy wala update dena arjun n riya ko mila do
wish u a very happy new year๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Posted: 11 years ago
Wish u a happy new year dr...
Wow so nice update dr sik is no more in ariya life here after...
Come soon with next part dr...
Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. 
apne to sachchi me humara new year happy wala kr diya sik ko maar kr... 
next part jaldi se update krna.. 
waiting eagerly for it.. 

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