My reviews ! 😊
Story 1 : Good story. Liked how Freddy sir got a lot of importance throughout… And also how you avoided the rest of the team …! The pahelis were nice….its always interesting to read such stories. Specially, ACP's sms clues were very nice. The casual talks and jokes during the case could have been avoided, because they knew their ACP was in danger and in such a situation they wont be cracking jokes I believe. Duo behaved very much like them, it was good to see that… The concept of bomb in wrist watch is a bit weird… I mean you don't expect a very high intensity bomb as small as that, may be. Overall, it was good and entertaining... 😊Will expect more stories from you !
Story 4 : Its very much evident that AKD had a severe impact on you😆 ! lol… Nevertheless, Abhijeet's behaviour was not very unusual. We all know he does have a habit of taking up things in his own hands. I liked how you described Daya's concern for Abhijeet throughout. Yes the entry of media and DCP and all made it a little OTT…but then could not have helped it I guess. But yeah, I didn't want ACP to taunt Abhijeet about Roshni at the end… Chalo koi nahi..Mahabaleshwar waali baat ne khush kar diya J As always a sensible story from one of the best writers of IF…👏
Will add more when I read the other two... 😊
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