Destiny's Decree- Chapter Five! (Page 24) - Page 5

Kittya Cullen @Kittya_Cullen IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

I am intrigued Pearly deary...royally intrigued. What is in these dreams of hers that she has every single night? Why the silence? And it's so interesting to see Yash being drawn toward her while consciously making an effort to hold himself separate from the entire relationship...and yet...he calls it "their room". Another fantastic update!!👏👏

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Mahalakshmi @maha9 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow nice update dear

Loved it yaar and please continue soon dear !!!

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Leevi05 @Leevi05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update 😉 wating for next part

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saf24 @saf24 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Another awesome update Pearl. You are keeping us in suspense and intrigued so I love that. 🤗

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mitul @123mitul IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update. i am loving the suspense..

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MelodiousDreams @MelodiousDreams IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ah, Pearl!

The "A" bracelet scene reminded me of a similar scene in a show that I had the misfortune of watching, LOL. I love how you made Aarti's personality shine through in that moment, though, as well as Yash's aversion to rain. *sigh* I wish I could write more, but I've got to cut this short today!

Totally hooked to this story - I'm loving the way the past and present are unfolding side-by-side...So many questions, and I know you'll be answering them all, one by one!

Fantastic job, my dear! Can't wait for the next update!

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ummisco @ummisco Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by Pearl_27

Thank you! Smile Your name,please? I'll continue soon.

My name is Haleema,

Wowww...2nd part so soon 😃

Beautifull update...It's really captivating...

But you left us hanging...

So many unanswered questions...

What is Aarti's story?

Does she have a child?

What made her to accept Yash's proposal of marriage?

Her never ending dream or more like nightmare?

Can u pls pm me when u update next...tanx

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Mohini Singh Narayan @MSN_Vanny IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Pearl...Pearl...Pearlll...after reading, the first thing I thought of was "Why so short?? 😡". But alas, I know you're busy with exams and school. So I forgive you! 😆

OMG! I love love the integration of the past and present! Both are equally vital to this story and reading it when entwined so beautifully is a treat! 👏👏

You still have the suspense going and my curiosity is reaching the limit! 😆 My heart goes out to Aarti! Poor soul! 😒

I wonder if Yash still has that bracelet? 😉😈

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