PAST OR FUTURE AN AARYA FF- PART 10 (PAGE 28) - Page 22

Originally posted by: maha9

dear

hats off to u... u r the best in giving awesome ss even with sad ending 👏

 

but i have lots of  doubt.

i will send u thro pm 😛

 

but the cute part was naming arya's son as yash 😛

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

sad ending

loved it..

like is not working..

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Nice! But didn't like the sad end. If Arpita shot Prashant and she also died. Then how can Yash die when he got shot in arm. He can survive as Aarti take him to hospital, and maybe they both can save their three children, and then live happily as their tormentors died who forcefully separated them.

That's my view to the story. But thanks for completing.

Originally posted by: sara1990

Nice update

ending was sad😭

Originally posted by: RA17

well your writing no doubts is outstanding but waht was that it was i know sudden but never thot this will be the end but well i guess i shud stop expecting a happily evey after endings from you

 

but never the less i njy each update n thanks for pm👏👏

 

 

Originally posted by: surprising

good⭐️

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

😭😭😭... Why have you ended it in a sad mood?? But cool, it was a good ending!! 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

carrie,another wonderful story👍🏼...but sad ending..well done

Originally posted by: pvejani

loved it👏.ff is beautifully written.👏