PAST OR FUTURE AN AARYA FF- PART 10 (PAGE 28) - Page 22

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by maha9


dear
hats off to u... u r the best in giving awesome ss even with sad ending πŸ‘
 
but i have lots of  doubt.
i will send u thro pm πŸ˜›
 
but the cute part was naming arya's son as yash πŸ˜›

Thank you...and for bold...πŸ€—β€οΈ

I answered PM dear...😳
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by goldenmoon


sad ending
loved it..
like is not working..

Thank you!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Shashi1984


Nice! But didn't like the sad end. If Arpita shot Prashant and she also died. Then how can Yash die when he got shot in arm. He can survive as Aarti take him to hospital, and maybe they both can save their three children, and then live happily as their tormentors died who forcefully separated them.

That's my view to the story. But thanks for completing.

Arpita shot Prashant but I never said he died, he was alive. When Aarti was about to get up, he shot Yash, pressed the button and then shot himself!

Thanks for the honest comment, I truly appreciate it!😳
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sara1990


Nice update
ending was sad😭

Thank you...😳😳
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by RA17


well your writing no doubts is outstanding but waht was that it was i know sudden but never thot this will be the end but well i guess i shud stop expecting a happily evey after endings from you
 
but never the less i njy each update n thanks for pmπŸ‘πŸ‘
 
 

Thank you...dear, I will give happily ever after endings...but do know that I'm an unpredictable person...πŸ˜‰

Thank you once again...😳
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by surprising


good⭐️

Thanks...😳
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by IsYaRoCHeR


😭😭😭... Why have you ended it in a sad mood?? But cool, it was a good ending!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘



Because I like sad endings, they evoke different emotions that the cliched happily ever after! Thanks Isya!😳
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by kratzyfan


carrie,another wonderful storyπŸ‘πŸΌ...but sad ending..well done

Thank you...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by pvejani


loved itπŸ‘.ff is beautifully written.πŸ‘

Thank you...😳


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