RAYA SS.Custody updtD last part on 148 page - Page 110

aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Yipeee next part of the story
just loved it this part
full of Raya romance and their lovd
aww peehu demanded a little sibling from them
RamPriya fulfilled her wish
now both are proud parents of two beautiful daughters
beautifull ending of the story
thanx for the pmEdited by aanchaltulshan - 9 years ago

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Suriya

@ssssabcd

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Posted: 9 years ago

too gud yaar. I was smiling throughout the update. Wat an beautiful end.thank u so much..

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Cute_Saakshii12

@Cute_Saakshii12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely ending & awesome part😊
Thanks 4 pm!!

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youandme272000

@youandme272000

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Posted: 9 years ago

WOW this was d most awaited update and its so nice nd beautiful.. lovely... jst lovd it... 😊

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome di awww very nice ending n pls take care of ur health

😛 😳

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923281

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part : 6

I loved Third Gift Scenes,

The way Priya express each & everything to Ram, it's Awesome

While watching the CD, Ram feels everything, i am speechless

Fourth Gift scenes are very cute

Raina love u baby

Priya's Dialogues are cute & Emotional

RaYa scenes are Always Magical 😊

Part : 7

Peehu is always Rock star 😆

Father & daughter scenes are very cute & Naughty too 😉

I like Priya's naughty dialogues (papa[polar bear ] and beti[baby polar bear]) & Naughty Act (Capturing every thing in her mobile) 😆

Flash Back scenes is Lovely & Cute

As always RaYa scenes are Magical & little emotional too 😊

Part : 8

Giri : I like these type Dialogues dear 😆 [Don't expect more here girls,Picture abhi bhi bhaki hai ]

This part is full of emotional war between two pure hearts

Very painful to read this part, very well written,

While read i can imagine the scene 👏

Ram slapped Priya, it's right from my point of you,

whom loved his wife purely never hear those

Story going very interesting 😊

Part : 9

Lovely words "Ripyam " turn to "Priyam"

Very cute flash back smile record scene

Awesome Update , very Well written 👏

Very tight hugs to you GIRI Dear 🤗

Each & every lines are Mind-blowing, wonderful & Superb

Sorry I searching words to write my comment 😊

Part : 10

OMG! Lovely RaYa scenes

Cute 5th gift Scenes

Lovely 6th gift scenes 😊

Edited by rosinagoor - 9 years ago

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923281

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part : 11

Lots of lovely, cute scenes & little bit Romantic scenes of RaYa

I like it lots 😊

I like KK & Priya scenes too 😊

Part : 12

Ufff...Not so Hot but Hot Update 😳

Kissing scene is Highlight 😆

Totally Romantic Update 😉

Part : 13

Neel , Part : 13 link is not working, I searching very hard & find the part Dear 😆

(P.S. Neel , Part : 13 on Page 95 dear & Uff... I am tried because i search hard 😛)

Uff...Hot Update Dear 😳

Part : 14

OMG! Full of Hot Update 😳

Sorry i am not able to comment more 😉

Part : 15

Neel, it's very hard for me too read 😳

Highly Hot Update 😆

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923281

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part : 16

Awesome

Cute

Beautiful

Romantic

Mind-Blowing

Lovely

Superb

Update Dear 👏👏👏

Wonderful Climax too ⭐️👏

Thanks for the wonderful Story Neel & Giri 😊⭐️

Thanks for the PM too 😃

P.S. Neel, as my promise, i read this story fully Dear. But i need time to rest of your stories 😊

I must read that stories & do comment dear 😊

Edited by rosinagoor - 9 years ago

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akilagoud2

@akilagoud2

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

nice update
awesome end
thanks for pm

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

I wished the show track would be nearer to this...but I was pissed off at that time and this one came as a saviour from u. This is really a wonderful story. I dont know how many times I would have read it. It ended on a great note.

Thank u for such a beautiful story dear. It is filled with love, love and only love.

AMAZING WORK.

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