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Very emotional update. Good work!

Wonderfull update...so nice.. Update next prt soon..

hi di... 😊

dhamakedar... update... 😉 . beautifully potrait...
full too emotional... loved it...
i have read it 3 times... & still want to read it again & again... 😊

thanks for pm..

nw waiting for 1 more update.. a bit more lengthy... [;Merry ChristmasEdited by sinalbest - 11 years ago

My confusion is cleared, thank u, but still I am not with the concept of hitting ur spouse, whatever the reason behind it, its my viewpoint, the emotion was well executed, Ram suffered the most in these 5yrs, and his anger is justified, and its irony that only Priya and Priya can make him cool, ab jab patch up ho gaya hain toh age bare?, kuch love shovewala pyaar ho jaye, will wait for next update, till then MERRY CHRISTMAS from me ⭐️

I am speechless n tears are rollibg down my cheeks.This is my first ever FF nd i read it for neel.So i started with part 8 but to get clarity read 7.then i knew i hv to read from first and thats what happened to me after completing.Thanks neel for sharing your friend's creation with us.
I'm feeling really good afterall.The last part it just brought tears n was feeling Ram's hurt and it was like happening infront of my eyes...
Thanq guys for giving this.
Waiting for next may come later but i will wait happily.
Happy Christmas Neel.

thank u neel di...all emotions r here in this part...

again a very beautiful update.so raya are back together.u portrayed emotions so well.👏

Best parts...emotional...caring...full of love
everytime i read this...my heart craves to see such a scene in the serial...
you do pamper us with you super parts...
di do take over the cv's na pls...then we can get wonderful scenes😛😛
love it loads...you stole my heart with the last update
waiting for next

this is the bestest ever part written when i read it for first time i was so mesmerised that i couldnt help myself and posted this comment that i am posting below...


oh god i really dont know how am i going
to comment in this update its really a
very big and difficult task for me am
totally numb and dumb struck after
reading this update...
even in my dreams i couldnt imagine
someone loving his partner so much...
how could ram manage to love priya to
the eternity that no one could touch...
any one could happily give up their life for
such a partner...
about the room ram kept her alive in
every sense he could not only in his heart
or thoughts but in his entire world...
loved the justification that ram gave for
slaping her... but it was totally justified
and the way he did first aid to priya was
so so so sweet...
am so happy that both confessed their
feelings their love their fear their anger
for each other now it leads to a new
morning a new ray of love a new sunshine
full of happiness all dark past left
behind...
and you really dont have to be sorry after
giving such an update its the best and
awesomest update i have ever read...
this is THE BEST work of yours...
am happy that i got chance to comment
first...
i really dont know what i have written
comment... as am totally in the
different world after reading this... so
please forgive me if have written
something wrong... its all because of
your update not my fault...
i really really really want cvs to read this
part i can imagine ram and sakshi
performing this scene but i wish to
actually see them doing this scene giving
it a rayas touch thats beyond
imagination...

neel yesterday i said rams slap annoyed me but todays update just took my heart away dear loved it each and every part love sacrifice anger because the one you love betrayed you and transformed in the action of slap ...reaalllyyy take bow lady for this wonderful wonderfull update and i hope you forgive me on that bit harsh comment ..reaally todays update made my christmas day thanks a ton and love you lottt neel and say sorry to your writer freind we bugged you and you bugged her on our behalf ,...but it was awesommmessst yaar...