Sharon Woods - SwaRon OS - Page 4

As always your work left me spellbound. Even though it was a sad work the ending had some soothing effect on me. Waiting for the happy OS as well

Suds, u just rocked this one...sure it was melancholic but it was purgatory too...it spoke of pain but it also was a release for all the pent up emotions of loss and guilt...it was a kind of re-assertion that when u luv someone who means the life for u, and they do the same, they are omnipresent for u - like a shadow, watching your every move, holding u when u falter, reassuring u when u r depressed, basically giving u the strength to carry on with life in their void...

You had me in the opening line itself. The next lines that followed gave me a slight idea of what would follow the next. So in a way I was prepared to digest the fact. The way you related the weather with Swayam and Sharon was commendable. I liked the fact that Swayam was her strength like always but her weakness as well as expected, but his promise made the former more prominent than the later. The dance part was also beautifully done.

amazing part 

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Edited by tanha29 - 11 years ago

I normally dont like sad endings for swaron 😔

Ananya - Thanks for sending in the PM for me dear. Edited by Sudha-SK - 11 years ago

nice os
everything was right abt this os

though this OS was a sad one.. 😔
it did make me sad...very sad...but you dont be sad coz i know the next OS is gonna charge me up!😃😆
but the way you've described the scene ...the dance...Sharon getting nostalgic...failing to keep up the promise!!!!!!
awww it was beautiful!!!❤️
she closed her eyes waiting to find meaning of life through his heartbeats.
wooowww...wonderful...
They say humans are fickle, they are lost in time like a speck of dust easy to be erased on the other hand the memories and emotions is what stays.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
woowww a happy wala OS,ok me waiting 4 that one too.😃
Merry Christmas n happy holidays!!🤗
and keep writing... 😳