virman os: first love part 2 *last part* updated - Page 6

hey loved your concept and your presentation of past and present
plz pm in your future works

great os😊 loved every bit of it. keep writing more.

Wow..great update...loved it to the core...write more...thank u so much for the pm... 😊

why are you not satisfied with this, this was good, more than good...

dont worry we all liked it 😉

thanks for pm

Lovely update
Thanks for the PM.

The way you managed both past and present was wonderful..!

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome Update...! love the way u have presnted past and present... PM me when u continue.. :)

thnk you so much

Originally posted by: jannat89

that was awesome
Totally differen story and concept
Lovely one

thnk you

Originally posted by: arhifandebi

Wonderful part...!!!! 👏Loved the VirMan scenes... This was the end?? But nevermind...I LOVED the story entirely...Do continue writing such beautiful stories and pm me whenever you do write...😊

umm yes this was da end i guess🤔
thnk you so much

Originally posted by: preity_d

hey loved your concept and your presentation of past and present
plz pm in your future works

thank you