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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: VerboseG

Lovely Uma!


The storm within and the storm without...

 
🤣
 
Thank YOu...Gina...for your stormy liking...😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: 5cents

UMA, You showed us magical swirling stars, spiraling through space amidst all the storm and rain.  What a storm...it aroused such a sensual beauty☺️❤️   

You are a wonderful story teller!!! 🤗

 
 
Wow...
 
Your words made me feel so good about myself...😳
 
Thank You Tina...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Rehan_oberoi

nice story. 👏


btw what is OS ? 

Sorry new here 😆

 
OS is One Shot.
This is a smaller story than a Short story...supposed to be written at One Go...😃
 
Am' happy U liked this OS...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: adi2512

 
🤣
 
Sangs..
 
Its not the question of me going forward and baaki saare atkoing...its only that my story is set at a time., where there aren't any more barriers between them...😉😛😆
 
If you can notice., its Monsoon time., in my story now... and they would have taken the much anticipated step by Spring...😳
 
And I have hinted this in my previous story - Paint My Love...so., the connectivity from my side is all there...😛😆
 
Thank You...and am' very happy U liked my story...😳
 
And what is that U have found to be so shocking in this...that was not expected from me...?...😕😆


Bold : NO😃

Do u think I have forgotten the newspaper woman 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely OS😳 Enjoyed reading it😃.  
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: roberoi


Bold : NO😃

Do u think I have forgotten the newspaper woman 😉


 
Oh I So Love sending off Shiv behind a news paper...ROFL
 
Unfortunately...this was not the time and also., the news paper was read for the day...Tongue😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am speechless ☺️...Its awesome...too good...and so romatic...please continue it 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: adi2512

 
🤣
 
Sangs..
 
Its not the question of me going forward and baaki saare atkoing...its only that my story is set at a time., where there aren't any more barriers between them...😉😛😆
 
If you can notice., its Monsoon time., in my story now... and they would have taken the much anticipated step by Spring...😳
 
And I have hinted this in my previous story - Paint My Love...so., the connectivity from my side is all there...😛😆
 
Thank You...and am' very happy U liked my story...😳
 
And what is that U have found to be so shocking in this...that was not expected from me...?...😕😆


Bold : NO😃

Do u think I have forgotten the newspaper woman 😉


 
Oh I So Love sending off Shiv behind a news paper...🤣
 
Unfortunately...this was not the time and also., the news paper was read for the day...😛😆

Chor chori se jaaye herapheri se na jaaye 😆

Tabhi to I am shocked...aise mein to.tumhein magazine/ novel soojhni chahiye thi 🤣


Edited by roberoi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uma new AT mein aao...wahan kyun post kar rahi ho ban hina hai kya???
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Posted: 11 years ago
So so romantic...now on shivjee will love storms...😆Edited by khusi_* - 11 years ago