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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: chaichil




yeh bhi koyi puchne walli baath hein...ofcurse u shuld continue...

pls do write cus even u two r really amazing...
😃 


thnx dear...waise aap bhi likhne main kam nahi hai madam
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash


thnx dear...waise aap bhi likhne main kam nahi hai madam



thnku madam sab apki kripa hein 😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

sooo...thnq ol of u...u liked it!!!!!

ur like really encouraged me to post d nxt part...
sooo...not wasting ur precious time...herez d update...
plzzz...comment..nd give ur feedbacks...

UVI use pyar se dekh rha tha,uski baatein sunke hairan bi tha.
'bs YUVI mujhe yhi khna tha,aage tumhari mrzi'wo jane lgti h...
Uvi:topper ek min.ruk.
Wo apne rum me jata h,or wo neck chain with F [frndship] locket in it.. leke aata h...
U:topper,mujhe malum h,mere trust krna,shayed bhoot mushkil h...
Main hu hi ni us kabil..phr bi..ek bat khna chunga..
,or hm jb se mile h us din se aaj tk misunderstndng,ek dusre pe chilana yhi krte aye h...lekin main tumhein kal yha se apna true frnd,ek dost bnake dekhna chahta hu...
Wo suvreen ka hath pkdhta h or wo chain uske hath me dedeta h'agr topper tumne ye phn liya to main smjhuga ki tumne meri dosti accept krli,mujhe maaf krdiya' mujhpe ek bar or trust kiya..
Tumhare liye bhulna bhoot muskil h topper mujhe pta h lekin abi tumne kha,bura sapna samajh k bhul jao
Or agr ye ni bi phnogi to mujhe dhukh ni hoga,bs zindgi bhr ye feel hoga ki glti ki lekin uski maafi ni mili...jo khin na khin deserve krta hu main...
Uvi cntinously bol rha h,orsuvreen use innocently use dekhti h..
Nd suvreen wo chain leke chali jati h...
suvreen wo chain dekhti h,use rkh deti h,nd wo taiyar hone chali jati h...

Uvi taiyar hoke jane lgta h,

suvreen ready ho jati h,wo chain dekhti h or uske k 7th me yuvi ki snap h or khti h'pta ni,dil kh rha h,tum pe trust kru...or maine apna trust bi to khud toda h..to glti srf tumhari keise...
Wo muskurati h'mere liye ye sb bhulna aasan ni hoga,pr ye dil tumpe pe trust krna chahta h.'wo confused h...uvi ki saari baatein yad krti h...
Wo auto me beith k party hall k liye nikal jati h'or saara scene yad krti h,wo disturb h.
Or party hall me uvi disturb h..
He thout'pta ni kya faisla hoga..'


suvreen bi puoch jati h...
Lights off ho jati h...
b'day boy cake k pas khada hota h
Then sudden lights on hoti h..
Sb clapping krte h,
uvi suvi ko ni dekhta to wo udas ho jata h...
Tbi raathi khta h'bhai suvreen...
Ekdum se uvi door ki trf dekhta h or suvreen ko dekhta rh jata h
(She z wearing suit in green colour,state open hair,lukin hr vry prety,adorable,simplicity,vry cute.) ,or wo bhoot khush ho jata h..
annie:wow.suvreen bhoot cute lg ri h yuvi..
Uvi:he s again lost nd say'angel lg ri h'
Suddn uvi uska neck dekhta h,wo chain uske neck me ni h,wo again sad ho jata h..lekin wo apne aap ko sambhalta h
b'day boy:hello yuvi,how r u?
Uvi:i m fyn..
I hope u lyk it dis decoration,..
:yes,i loved it,.suvreen ko dekh k bolta h,or phr yuvi guse me us boy ko dekhta h...
hey-one min.
hey my beautiful frnd..[he goes to suvi nd talk to her]
suvreen ati h,vo hand shake krte h...suvreen wish him b'day
Or dono hs-2 k baatein krte h...
Uvi dekh k jealous hota h

Or uvi wha jane wala hota h tbi suvreen bolti h'yuvraj'
uvi stop.,
suvreen uske saamne aati h,'yuvraj,dosti srf dene se ni hoti,dost khud chain phnaye to,dosti strng hoti h...
Uvi surprised nd uske face pe shining wid smile thi...

 

Edited by cherry.parul0 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
awww this was soo cute
ekdum pakka walla cute tha...

do update soon...ur a fab writer

and yuvi suvi ko apne haathon sein chain pehenatha hein...kya baath cuteness ki toh hadh hi paar ho gayi thi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
awww...so so so cute... i luved it...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: chaichil

awww this was soo cute
ekdum pakka walla cute tha...

do update soon...ur a fab writer

and yuvi suvi ko apne haathon sein chain pehenatha hein...kya baath cuteness ki toh hadh hi paar ho gayi thi...

 
heeheee..thnq sooo much!!!!😃
me too felt that part very romantic..😳
nd..yaa i'll try to update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: luvushivin1

awww...so so so cute... i luved it...!

 
thnq so so so much!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
hey frndz...
jst wanna ask...if ur not liking it thn ur free to tell,or want ny changes????
m not getting much response...
now u ol tell,,what to do??
😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕
dont mind...jst said what i felt!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey cherry...dis one is awesum...wait I'll pm it to everyone whom I know den we may get a gud response...I'm sorry I'm too late
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Hi sahas, ur update was very good and cute . LOved it and keep up d good work.