The Most Beautiful SunSet||KiSha OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi Buddies πŸ˜ƒ
m back wid another OS
This tym for KiSha πŸ˜ƒ
The Most Beautiful Sunset

KD n Kiya's long lived MU had finally come to an end
They'd had enough of d lows n had finally given their frndship a new chance
Though It cost KD alot. .    
A lot more than any1 cud take
Yes d buddies got rid of Banga n his never ending Mistreatments
Yes they all were out of Hell but at what Cost?
RV:badly injured . hospitalised for 3 weeks
KD: when brought to d hospital . . he looked more like a living dead body!!!
Blood oozing from all sides
If u saw RanSh 6months ago u'd be horrified!!!!!!!
But what was past is now long gone
n d present is of pure frndship
yes even though they learned d hard way all d buddies are together!!!
all are all 1. . . an unbeatable team!!!
They've seen it all!!!!
At such a tender age they've seen d world n together know how to fight back!!!!
Ah well but this story isnt abt how they overcame it all!!!!
but abt a special day in d lives of 2 very special buddies
KD n Kiya
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It was a beautiful n Bright Friday
JJ had given a day off to all d buddies
to do what they felt like
KD like a gentleman went upto Kiya . . now that they were frnds again
"Remember Kiya . . their was a task we were given during our Buddy project
Whr their was a master n a slave
I humbly summon myself to The Mighty Kiya Gujral
call it a compensation to all our bad memories"
Kiya smiled . . gently n winked taking out Rs. 50
frm her purse
entertain me not a penny more
KD chuckled
Both of them lost in d memories
when life was full of hope
full of believe
full of life
KD took Kiya hand n d 2 left
Reaching d same beach they stopped
taking in d soft breeze d whole surrounding
d sun spreading a golden glow
d sound of moving wave it all looked n felt so gud . . .
they let themselves loose
let themselves free
let their memories surround them
taking off their foot wear
KD folding his pants upto knee level
both ran towards d beach
hands entwinned
They splashed n splashed water towards each other
there was an air of casualness
an air of innocence
To an intruder d 2 playing around might look like small kids
finding happiness in d smallest n silliest of things
but for them
it was 1 of d best day of their life
free of restrictions
free of rules
jus them . . n no1 else
what seemed like hrs later they settled on a bench
drying themselves
n enjoying d world around them in general
very much aware of each other's presence
but none of them spoke . .
finally after what felt like an hr or so . . when they thot they were reasonably dry
they decided to take a walk
but after walking around for half an hr or so
Kiya looked at KD and said" u must be tired KD. . dont over stress ur self afterall u are not completely. .     
she cudnt finish her sentence
as KD raised a dismissive hand
He smiled n said" Ever since ... ". he cudnt come up wid d right word .   so he let d sentence hang in d air
n then cont. " u all have started treating me like a kid. . I m fine. . I am Stronger than u all take me to be. . even RV. . my once fav enemy n now best frnd. . "
"Achha toh Piddi kya hai?" Kiya snapped
" woh .   toh mera bhai hai" KD gave her a brilliant smile as he spoke
"aur main" she Quipped!!!
KD looked at her . . as if for d 1st tym. . and gave her a mysterious smile
She cudnt make out what was going on his mind frm his expressions
but involuntarily held her breath. . . "today is d day" she thot
"Arent u hungry?" KD casually inquired
"U're changing d topic KD" Kiya complaint
"come wid me d sun is gonna set anytime soon . . I know a place where d Sunset seems to be d most beautiful thing"
Kiya felt a pang of frustration but followed him
" Tell me abt urself Kiya. . . then I'll tell u what u r to me"
Under d sun . . they talked abt lyf. . abt anything n everything.. .
both at ease in eachother's presence
when Kiya suddenly asked"can I ask u something?"
KD simply nodded
"I've always noticed 1thing. . u feel so much shy around girls when we 1st became frnds I saw a lot of hesitationfrm ur side. . y?"
"I've never had girls as frnds before" came an instant answer
"I m sure u wud be feeling more shy kissing ur girlfrnd. . whenever u have 1"
KD jus looked at her
and there was a long awkward silence
then KD took a step towards Kiya
Kiya felt unnsettled
KD took another Step
n Kiya's eyes closed involuntarily
She cud feel KD's Fingers drawing imaginary Circles on her cheeks
"U wanted to know what u are to me. . I'd be lieing if I say we r jus buddies"
"ever since I came to be ur frnd. . I saw a different Kiya altogether. . I was a fool not to believe in what I saw. . . there was always something between us. . . beyond frndship"
his fingers were now tracing her lips n an inner shudder went through her
she cud feel him pulling her closer to himself
She opened her eyes n d 2 of them jus luked at each other
then d moment came. .
d 2 came closer n closer. . their lips brushed each others
n she cudnt believe in herself anymore
it start wid d softest thing she'd ever felt. .
n then . .
there was fierce passion
these 2 souls were so much into each other that Nature cudnt help admiring their beauty
it was indeed d most beautiful sunset Kiya had ever seen
The slight breeze. . carassing her hair
d sky orange wid sunset
n d love of her lyf. .
in her arms
What more cud she ever haveEdited by Sweet_violet - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was one of the best OSes I have ever read.😳

Wonderful job Radhu. πŸ‘ 

It started with the Buddies going through all the pain and sufferings and it ended with something even more beautiful then the most beautiful thing in this world ie love. 

Flawlessly portryaed and mindblowingly written. 

I so wanted to read something on KiSha after everything sorts out  in their life and this was a wonderful surprise for me this new year.

Keep writing such stuffs. πŸ˜³

You and your writing deserves 1000s of likes and comments😳

LOTS OF LOVE 

DHWANI

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And this was a beautiful OS i read 😳 RanSh as best friends πŸ˜ƒ And all buddies together
Loved the moments KiSha spent!!! ❀️ Edited by amiee125 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...😳
its sooo beautifully written..πŸ‘
loved it!!πŸ˜ƒ
i always smile when i read such adorable os's from writers like you!!⭐️😊
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Beautiful!! loved it!! please write more!! <3
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Originally posted by: amiee125

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And this was a beautiful OS i read 😳 RanSh as best friends πŸ˜ƒ And all buddies together
Loved the moments KiSha spent!!! ❀️


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I m so glad u liked it πŸ˜ƒEdited by Sweet_violet - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamikaanjali22

awww...😳

its sooo beautifully written..πŸ‘
loved it!!πŸ˜ƒ
i always smile when i read such adorable os's from writers like you!!⭐️😊


awww 😳
m glad u liked it!!
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Originally posted by: keshiya

This was one of the best OSes I have ever read.😳

Wonderful job Radhu. πŸ‘

It started with the Buddies going through all the pain and sufferings and it ended with something even more beautiful then the most beautiful thing in this world ie love.

Flawlessly portryaed and mindblowingly written.

I so wanted to read something on KiSha after everything sorts out in their life and this was a wonderful surprise for me this new year.

Keep writing such stuffs.😳

You and your writing deserves 1000s of likes and comments😳

LOTS OF LOVE

DHWANI


awww. . DhwanπŸ€—
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Originally posted by: 100littledevils

Beautiful!! loved it!! please write more!! <3


PiyuπŸ€—
cant believe a person wid so much of talent
commented on my work!!!!
have been a huge fan of ur creativity
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and again I was the first one to comment on ur work. πŸ˜‰ Yay how lucky I'm